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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/8/2005 4:21:26 PM
Superb DoF, composition, and colors.
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| Photo By: N RG
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/8/2005 4:20:54 PM
You have achieved a very ominous atmosphere here mainly because of the size of the subject coupled with the sky and the odd lighting. Really a great picture!
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| Photo By: Oliver Nebel
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 7:14:42 PM
Wow. I'm in awe not only of the photo but the accompanying haiku. Such a serene photo, something I strive for with showing nature's beautiful simplicity in its most complex state of existence.
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Photo By: andree lerat
(K:17476)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 7:11:47 PM
Wow, your portfolio deserves more attention. This is a very notable picture. The overall white-ness of it distinguishes it as innocent and very pure. Great attention to detail.
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| Photo By: todd o
(K:180)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 7:10:02 PM
Very artistically sound shot, todd. I love the warm WB you've achieved here. Very effective DoF.
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| Photo By: todd o
(K:180)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 7:08:37 PM
Wow, the sky is entrancing! Fantastic eye and catch.
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| Photo By: Mary Brown
(K:71879)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 7:07:05 PM
It was very difficult to stand peacefully as they yelled out such things as "feces eaters etc." It amazes me that hatred like this can run so fluently through some people. Thanks for your comments.
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| Photo By: Reza Fakhrai
(K:3014)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:17:36 PM
wow! This one really impresses me because the tone of the rust is very outstanding. I like the antiquity of the nut emphasized by the spider web.
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| Photo By: Amanda Radovic
(K:3609)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:15:54 PM
Great catch. I love the fact that you got not only one person but two in somewhat the same positions. Nicely executed.
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| Photo By: Mark Wlaz
(K:4564)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:15:05 PM
Your high contrast tones are very effective! Beautiful depth you've achieved.
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| Photo By: Mark Wlaz
(K:4564)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:13:42 PM
Nice job on his figure as a silhouette. The horizon shift on this is pretty massive, intended?
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| Photo By: Shahriar Broumand
(K:692)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:09:35 PM
The shadows and the naturally flowing lines are extremely effective here. Awesome job.
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| Photo By: Jeanette Hägglund
(K:59855)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:08:29 PM
Everything is very intense, his gaze, skin, features. You captured this wonderful subject with a very truthful tone. Thanks so much for sharing this one.
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| Photo By: Joggie van Staden
(K:41700)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:07:21 PM
Green power! Very beautiful tones. The huge border really adds to the depth of this photo. Would you mind publishing the camera data?
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| Photo By: Lilywhite Lilith
(K:1809)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/7/2005 4:06:03 PM
wow! This is absolutely brilliant color contrast. I have no critique for this, and it goes in the favorites.
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| Photo By: Steve Tomkinson
(K:3243)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 11:48:03 PM
Wow, you chose your best by far! Excellent job, and good luck.
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| Photo By: Michael Kanemoto
(K:22115)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 11:46:34 PM
Can you define bounce for me? It's one of the many nebulous words that I occasionally see in writing. Thanks for the comments.
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| Photo By: Reza Fakhrai
(K:3014)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 11:44:23 PM
Thanks for your suggestions, Michael. Since posting this, I have learned a lot about balancing B&W tones in PS. I have remixed this image myself but have neglected to post it. I appreciate your critique.
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| Photo By: Reza Fakhrai
(K:3014)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 8:17:15 PM
Beautiful sky! The selective lighting is very powerful. Would you mind sharing the camera/lens data?
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| Photo By: allan basik
(K:434)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 8:14:19 PM
Interesting...it feels like a fisheye shot but I know it's not. It could be a little crisper IMO.
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| Photo By: Bill Baer
(K:212)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 8:13:08 PM
Many thanks, Richard. I enjoy the virtual friendship that we have built up through UF. It seems as though it has become quite the teacher-student relationship, and I'm thankful for your comments. I'll be browsing through your portfolio soon.
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| Photo By: Reza Fakhrai
(K:3014)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 8:11:52 PM
Thanks a lot, Kristin. I'm doing all of this for my own edification and it seems that every now and then I upload a picture that people can relate to, so I get some comments. I wish it was more consistent because I'm treating this like a photo class, but your comments and the others here are enough to keep me occupied and have a glance at your portfolios as well! Thanks again.
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| Photo By: Reza Fakhrai
(K:3014)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:59:36 AM
He/She looks so menacing from this angle! Very effective perspective. Good DoF and detail.
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| Photo By: gregg nordin
(K:37)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:58:55 AM
I really like your idea here. The effect seems just a tad too heavy. The tree is very effective, possibly if left alone.
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| Photo By: Samuel Downs
(K:7290)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:56:22 AM
Fascinating lines created by the fence up to the top of the hill. I might crop out the road, but that's very minor IMHO. The red roof is gorgeous against the moody sky.
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| Photo By: Richard Dakin
(K:12915)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:54:56 AM
Wow, I could look through your portfolio for hours. This one is quite special because the sky is just fantastic. There is a sense of bleakness demonstrated by the defoliated trees and the clouds. Great atmosphere.
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| Photo By: Richard Dakin
(K:12915)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:51:14 AM
You have a wonderful, engulfing smile. I'm very intrigued by your eyes, to see what they really look like.
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| Photo By: Ashley Brooke
(K:109)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:49:41 AM
Awesome lighting and I really love the character that the subject brings to the table (pun intended). Such a little picture for such a little subject.
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| Photo By: Elizabeth LaPorte
(K:3)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:48:34 AM
I really like your b&w tones and choice of lighting. I would prefer either exactly half the face to be showing or the entire face.
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| Photo By: Ken Tinley
(K:1856)
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
5/6/2005 3:46:45 AM
I could see the movement you're referring to. Interesting.
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| Photo By: Joe Johnson
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