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Critique By:
Kiarang Alaei (K:49415)
1/11/2008 9:06:19 PM
Great work,
you have seen it very well!
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Critique By:
John Hatz (K:156973)
1/11/2008 6:09:42 PM
excellent photo Robin, dramatic...almsot scary way! the round blurness makes an effect like ...zooming, that adds motion here and even more drama!
excellent!
be well!
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Critique By:
1301307 60 (K:44058)
1/11/2008 3:45:06 PM
unusual vision of this blurry image, like from the horror movies during a thunder storm.. I can hear the sound effects of Psycho looking at this photo gramma.. I thinks its the effect of the lensbaby on this capture.
great in monochrome...
my warm regards,,
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Critique By:
AJ Miller (K:49168)
1/11/2008 3:44:54 PM
A fascinating play of all sorts of elements: shapes and lines, textures and tones, DOF. As an abstract, I wonder if it would work equally well turned through 90 degrees? The only reason I suggest that is because I find that in general landscape images look better on UF - if I had seen this printed the thought probably wouldn't even have occurred to me...
AJ
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Critique By:
Claudia Perilli (K:31090)
1/11/2008 1:53:46 PM
Great work, great picture.
Claudia
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
1/11/2008 4:39:13 AM
Posted to the new 'Fresh' project. THAT'S what I did. WTF? Rain? In So Cal.?? Need to take Ark building 101!
All the best Dear Friend! To you and yours!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
1/7/2008 2:30:03 PM
Wow...it's been a long time my friend! Thanks for all your comments and critiques Doyle, from the florals to stuffie slave trade to colorful fairies to Christmas morning and, last but not least...the dog/bear "surveillance" stills. Oh, and the AKC rat...LMAO!
Rain?...oh noooooo, what ever DID you do? BTW, your rain made it here this morning, thank you very much. :)
Take care...Robin
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
1/4/2008 3:52:15 PM
What is he up to? What an unusual BG! Love the idea of getting at eye level and in Gene's case this is far easier said than done. You get a real feel for what the World must seem like to him! Once again the heavy grain seems to add to the surreptitious filming of the security cameras (great idea, by the way).
Oh SNAP! Don't tell me he's pulling insulation outta' your walls!!!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
1/4/2008 3:03:19 PM
Nice. I far prefer it without the selective desaturation though. The angle of the blossom also does not seem as wistful as before . . . (IMGO) . . . I greatly appreciate the idea and the technicals from the layout in this composition are superior I think . . .
Incidentally . . . we are expecting some rain today. Not sure what to do! LoL!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
1/4/2008 2:58:47 PM
Wow . . . I do like the feeling of wistful longing I get from this . . . and I'm not particulary bothered by the verticle pane-line. The color reflection in the upper left seems to re-inforce the gazing out the window feeling. All in all . . . a great image. BUT . . . If I WERE to suggest a change . . . I think I'd consider losing the BG dark area that rises from behind the bloom like a tornado. While I assume it is a tree blurred by the DOF, I think it might be a slight distraction . . . but that's only IF I were to change something. You've chosen an OUTSTANDING color combination here. Impressive work yet again!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
1/4/2008 2:51:01 PM
I don't think you've seen to the REAL favorites yet! kekeke
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
1/4/2008 2:49:28 PM
Incidentally, another FAV!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
1/4/2008 2:49:04 PM
What a warm, wonderful morning, well captured my friend!! He LOVES the cup too!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/31/2007 2:33:02 PM
Thank you for the comment Amna. Unfortunately, limited space and lens choice prevented me from getting the whole flower, but you are correct...it would have helped!
Take care...Robin
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/31/2007 2:30:23 PM
Thanks for the comments Bobot...and a Happy New year to you also!
Ingat...g
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Critique By:
M jalili (K:69009)
12/31/2007 11:16:10 AM
Regards ..........
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Critique By:
Amna Al Shamsi (K:21795)
12/31/2007 8:20:58 AM
the selective coloring work very well here.
P.S did you try including the whole flower? I think it will help to enhance the composition
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Critique By:
Shirley D. Cross-Taylor (K:174199)
12/31/2007 7:26:52 AM
You're welcome, Robin!:)
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Critique By:
1301307 60 (K:44058)
12/31/2007 1:37:23 AM
Very attractive selective coloring, I read the comment on the post before this and I agree that this is a better composition. The other difference I notice is with the other photo, I know that it is winter outside, with this selective color and focus, the drama of the flower and the winter is not very evident.
Happy new year gramma
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Critique By:
Hussam AL_ Khoder (K:79545)
12/30/2007 3:56:31 PM
~*¤ô§ô¤*~ I like it ~*¤ô§ô¤*~
*******All the best!*********
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:53:19 PM
:) thank you Hussam!
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:52:33 PM
Thanks so much yazeed!
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:52:07 PM
Thank you and Happy New Year to you John!
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:50:41 PM
Thanks for the detailed critique Paul! No confusion here...I wished there were a little more of the window frame also, but no such luck this time. Always happy to hear constructive criticism, thanks again for stopping by!
Take care...Robin
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:42:25 PM
Gracias Alicia!
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:41:50 PM
:) Thank you Shirley!
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Critique By:
Hussam AL_ Khoder (K:79545)
12/30/2007 3:41:18 PM
♥.•:**:•.•♥ inspiring shot... ♥.•:**:•.•♥
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:40:44 PM
Thank you Afriadi
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:40:09 PM
Thanks Avi!
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Critique By:
Robin W (K:16308)
12/30/2007 3:39:45 PM
I hoped so...thanks AJ!
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