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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
1/27/2005 4:45:25 PM
An award very well deserved, fantastic composition in every way. Wonderful colours and light, great use of shapes - love the curve of the water and the grasses in the foreground.
margaret
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Photo By: Jan Symank
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
11/20/2005 8:16:57 PM
Again I like the lines, the compositon, the tones and the filter I think gives it a great effect. Feel I would like a bit more punch/pep, I lowered the levels a bit, I hope you don't mind me experimenting, they are just ideas to be thrown in, it is giving me ideas of how to work on my BW techniques as well
Margaret
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| Photo By: Mireille Heirendt
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
9/1/2005 1:30:16 AM
Excellent composition, really great light/colours and tones. The sharpness is just right. Like the shape/set out of the two grasses. Maybe would have put a tiny bit more space at the top, it feels as though he very top tips of the grass have been cut off. I still rate it 7 though, it is so good.
Margaret
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| Photo By: Brian Fillmore
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
8/31/2005 1:39:52 AM
Jill I see someone has mentioned the horizon, having just come back from a cruise this is how it looked some of the time LOL  . I really like the colours and textures you have captured. The inclusion of the rocks inthe foreground gives interest as well as adding a diagonal angle to the shot. I haev had a twiddle with it for you to see, straightened the horizon, [don;t think it is spot on] and added a bit of blue to the sky and bit more green colour balance in the sea to see if it gave more impact to the horizon, see what you think
Margaret
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| Photo By: Jill Bartlett
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
2/1/2005 8:02:44 AM
Hi Jim lovely to see an upload from yourself - hope you are still keeping well.
This is really great, I like the rotation, and the great lines and colours. I do like textures of grasses/wood etc.
Margaret
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| Photo By: Jim Christensen
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
9/29/2004 10:03:46 AM
Wonderful Chris, those glimpses of sunlight [and that is all we seem to have had in the past few days here. Except Sunday for Lucy's blessing the sun shone and it was a beautiful warm day - we were blessed indeed] Love the colours and the real old texture/feel - like part of a 'secret garden' in fact in put me in mind of that book which I haven't read since I was young - and no comments of 'boy that was a long time ago'
Margaret
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| Photo By: Chris Spracklen
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