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Critique By:
Jan Symank (K:22030)
10/13/2016 1:58:20 AM
Wonderful diagonal lines and the light at the top
Great composition and light
Jan
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Critique By:
parehan .K (K:27453)
10/12/2016 2:53:43 PM
wonderful B&W image, and great perspective Paul..
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Critique By:
Jan Symank (K:22030)
10/8/2016 2:47:36 PM
PS Not while shooting better before :)
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Critique By:
Jan Symank (K:22030)
10/8/2016 2:45:46 PM
These techniques :)
Please perhapsTilt the camera while shooting ( or not ) and you have a straight sky if needed
Or not
Jan
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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
10/8/2016 5:08:51 AM
Nice to see the mechanism of perspective :-)
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Critique By:
Wayne Winsauer (K:7331)
10/7/2016 3:59:41 PM
Very nice leading lines in this one Paul! Nice work!
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Critique By:
Gregory McLemore (K:35129)
10/7/2016 7:54:39 AM
Excellent tones and presence Paul
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Critique By:
Sylvia H. (K:22195)
10/6/2016 10:44:18 PM
part of the dog-fence?
beautiful in b/w
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Critique By:
EHAB MAGDY (K:2382)
10/6/2016 3:22:30 PM
good diagonal composition
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Critique By:
Fabio Keiner (K:81109)
10/6/2016 11:35:01 AM
paradise lost and regained :)
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Critique By:
Jan Symank (K:22030)
10/6/2016 10:26:11 AM
Very good diagonal composition and the tree at the best place in the frame.
Is it the forbidden tree where Eva got that apple from...
Very interesting to philosophise about
Bravo
Jan
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Critique By:
Salvador Marķa Lozada (K:69375)
10/6/2016 8:21:30 AM
Excellent rural landscape, Paul.
Congratulations,
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Critique By:
Art McCaffrey (K:23645)
10/6/2016 6:11:48 AM
your title gives extra depth to the image,
to make one think,.
fine shot paul,
all the best, art,.
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Critique By:
Riny Koopman (K:102911)
10/6/2016 5:15:02 AM
Very good perspective Paul, I like the bw tones.
Regards,
Riny
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Critique By:
Paul Freeman (K:35606)
10/6/2016 5:13:40 AM
Forgot to mention the tree in the first Note To Self
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Critique By:
Paul Freeman (K:35606)
10/6/2016 5:12:11 AM
Note To Self:
New photographic term: Swing (used to describe the phenomenon created by two conceptual lines, one being the horizon and a tree) :)))
Nice one Jan :)
Regards
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Critique By:
Paul Freeman (K:35606)
10/6/2016 5:10:00 AM
Note To Self:
New photographic term: Swing (used to describe the phenomenon created by two conceptual lines, one being the horizon) :)))
Nice one Jan :)
Regards
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Critique By:
Paul Freeman (K:35606)
10/6/2016 5:04:10 AM
You are right, Wayne, there is something not right about the horizon. I struggled with it when I framed the image. I think it is the lay of the land and my perspective. If I had more time I would have tried a different viewpoint.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the technique you mentioned.
Regards
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Critique By:
Paul Freeman (K:35606)
10/6/2016 4:58:49 AM
Thanks, Riny. Much appreciated
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Critique By:
Paul Freeman (K:35606)
10/6/2016 4:57:23 AM
Thanks, Ozjan
Regards
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Critique By:
a. Scarabeo (K:16333)
10/6/2016 4:44:58 AM
Paradise must be defended!!
Be well paul.
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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
10/6/2016 1:52:50 AM
Here, locally , we have summer retreat :-)
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Critique By:
parehan .K (K:27453)
10/5/2016 11:11:56 AM
Beautiful nature and very well composed outdoor work.
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Critique By:
Jan Symank (K:22030)
10/5/2016 9:24:37 AM
Great composition.
The diagonal line of the sky has to stay, Mr Winsauer ! It a n important line because of the tree and to give the picture a swing. Straight wood be stiff and nonsense.
Its already ready :)
Great work
Regards
Jan
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Critique By:
Wayne Winsauer (K:7331)
10/5/2016 8:54:49 AM
Cheers Paul! I really like this image with the large floral foreground element and the solitary tree! I do think the diagonal line in the clouds is distracting though as it makes your horizon line look off. An easy fix will be to cut out the entire top part of the sky and rotate it the use content aware fill in Photoshop. After that some minor touch ups will make the adjustment seamless. If you are a straight out of camera purist, no worries, it's a great image. I just thought I'd offer up my opinion. Regards, Wayne
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Critique By:
Wayne Winsauer (K:7331)
10/5/2016 8:46:37 AM
Wonderful image Paul! Excellent work!
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Critique By:
Riny Koopman (K:102911)
10/5/2016 7:38:57 AM
Wild flowers are beautiful to look at, a cheerful play of colors!
Best wishes Paul.
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Critique By:
Ozjan Yeshar (K:15239)
10/5/2016 3:02:18 AM
Great foreground and the perspective is well presented. Cheers Paul.
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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
10/1/2016 1:57:53 AM
It looks like an infra red photo :-)
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Critique By:
Kamran Bakhtiari (K:24036)
9/30/2016 8:57:14 PM
Perfect job!
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