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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/26/2007 3:13:00 PM
I really like what you were going for here. I think the top portion is too much and takes away from the image. I cropped it to show you how much better this could be. I took out the border because i don't know how to put it back where I cropped it. You may also want to try this with no flash. I don't know if a tripod would be prohibited but the flash puts harsh lighting on the balls.
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/26/2007 3:06:57 PM
this is gorgeous. may i suggest that you crop it as square as possible for a better composition? i think it would look even better.
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/24/2007 4:22:22 PM
wow, this is amazing. it's hard to shoot things that are so skittish but you managed to do so and it's very sharp!
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/22/2007 9:17:40 PM
thanks for your glowing review!
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/21/2007 6:30:52 PM
excellent composition and lighting here.
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| Photo By: marco ds
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/21/2007 6:26:11 PM
i like the composition and textures. the structure is obviously old and the tone goes well with that.
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| Photo By: Quix Photography
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/15/2007 2:26:33 PM
this is great!!
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/15/2007 2:25:40 PM
more dof would have made this better but the composition is very good and the lighting was good too. this shows creativity. that's important for quality photos.
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/15/2007 2:24:18 PM
the light from the side can make very good portrait lighting.
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/15/2007 2:23:31 PM
Wanderson
Having good lighting is everything with photography. You can get nice photos with light from a window or roof window. You can buy a stand for your flash so it is not on the camera. you better results that way.
good luck!
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/15/2007 3:22:05 AM
very cute!
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/14/2007 4:14:30 AM
wow, this is flawless!
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Photo By: Phillip Filtz
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/10/2007 1:45:39 AM
this is the Toyota MR2 Spyder
the title Mr. Two means MR2
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| Photo By: Jim Greenfield
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/9/2007 8:32:56 PM
you WANT reflection in your eyes. that's a good thing. i can't tell that your lips are dry. i didn't take a photography class when i had the chance. my work makes it hard to commit to anything scheduled. I do belong to a photography club that meets twice a month. It's always on my day off. I've learned a lot there. Keep shooting. You will improve as you do more. Keep posting. Some people have very helpful things to say to help you.
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/9/2007 3:16:36 PM
oops! i didn't realize i commented on this before! i liked it a second time.
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/9/2007 3:15:53 PM
wow! this is great! you look sweet, vulnerable mixed with sexy.
this one is perfect just the way it is.
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| Photo By: Wanderson Rezende
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/2/2007 9:53:21 PM
great composition
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| Photo By: Khaled Mursi Hammoud
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
2/1/2007 3:29:28 PM
wonderful portrait. i like how you were able to get some light on his eye but kept the shadow very dark.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/27/2007 9:04:03 PM
cool pic! for a better composition, i would have put him in the third so he looks like he somewhere to go.
As I look out at gray skies and snow, I wish so much that I could be THERE.
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/27/2007 9:01:31 PM
please tell me that's bronze! Great image! It looks like a corpse buried in the snow. Your exposure is perfect. Snow deceives the camera.
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| Photo By: Satori 77
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/21/2007 11:03:50 PM
wow! a different pose from the norm but works well.
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/21/2007 11:02:12 PM
wonderful pose and expression.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/19/2007 5:10:18 PM
this is a buick if you were wondering
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/6/2007 6:28:24 PM
excellent capture! you did a great job of blurring the background yet the bike is sharp as can be!
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/5/2007 12:46:32 AM
like it? Love it!! This just pops off the screen. I was browsing pics taken with this lens. I just got the Image Stabilizer version of this lens in the mail today.
Congratulations on a wonderful achievement!
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| Photo By: Marc Smits
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/4/2007 7:41:58 PM
wow!! just awesome. i was wondering what else i could do with that lens. landscapes!
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| Photo By: Chris Rudland
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/4/2007 6:47:22 PM
very well seen image.
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| Photo By: taci yuksel
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/4/2007 6:46:49 PM
this is gorgeous!!!
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| Photo By: taci yuksel
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
1/3/2007 2:06:44 PM
wow! excellent!
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
12/29/2006 10:09:24 PM
gorgeous but slightly over processed. it doesn't look natural.
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