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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/13/2005 7:01:47 PM
Beautiful and dramatic! I like her holding tape and looking into camera with her gorgeous eyes. Awesome theatric stuff!
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| Photo By: PIERRE THOMAS karkau
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/13/2005 6:58:48 PM
Wow! I really like this jucy life. So many details to explore. I really like how you filled photo from corner to corner.
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| Photo By: Orazio Minnella
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/12/2005 2:16:10 AM
Dan, I like same type of photography, so I'll give you advice not to include unnecessary areas into photo. With your zoom lens I would zoom into to include area starting under advertisment to exclude this strange bridge like thing, and "crop" sligtly from above also.
Also faster prime wide angle lenses could be really helpful for night photography. You will get better datail and color. And take filter from your lens if you used it during daytime.
Nice long time exposure shot.
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| Photo By: Dan Neufeld
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/11/2005 2:30:18 AM
Is it face from dollar?  )))? Really great macro . I was playing with my 3 macro tubes and 50mm prime long time ago... Need to try again. Thanks for inspiration!
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| Photo By: Uri Lidsky
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 5:07:09 PM
You got awesome advices from Lea.
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| Photo By: Devin Page
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 5:04:32 PM
Very nice image, Maria! Simple and surreal.
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| Photo By: Maria José Barres
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 2:08:41 PM
Thanks Francesca! I agree it's better in B&W!
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 2:06:25 PM
Better then other ones compositioanally, but still not perfect.
Focus is not perfect, DOF is not blured enough.
Nice colors.
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| Photo By: Devin Page
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 2:04:23 PM
Shift to the left to avoid bright window on background. Use 50mm f/1.8 lens.
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| Photo By: Devin Page
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 2:03:04 PM
I like the andle and steam from the cup. I don't like strong reflection from the plate, background with furniture takes aways from main subject - cup with coffe. Window is completelly burned out.
1. change your position to avoid window in farme while leaving it's lighting for steam.
2. try using circular polarizing filter to reduce reflection.
3. Use fully opened diaphragm to blur out background and create dreamy effect.
4. 50mm f/1.8 lens will be perfect for this shot.
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| Photo By: Devin Page
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 1:36:00 PM
Davin, I'll gone give my opinion to you because of you post in forums.
3 things that I don't like here are blured distracting subject in right upper corner, hot reflecting sput on her hose, and underexposed eyes.
While shoting portraits you really need to work with lighting, or find best possible location. Use flash to reduce shades in sunny days, during cloudy days find open space.
Best lens for shot like this one is fast 50mm EF f/1.8 lens. You will get much better detail and colors.
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| Photo By: Devin Page
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 1:07:14 PM
Francesca, It's really nothing to improve in shot like this. Perfect timing, composition, expression on child's face, charismatic colors.
You are talanted girl. sooner you will buy DSLR for yourself better it will be, because lot of your images could sell in high resolution.
check out artwanted, shutterpoint,DigitalPhotoShots com sites.
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| Photo By: Francesca May
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/10/2005 3:07:10 AM
Nice shot, Mark! Great eye and timing!
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Photo By: Mark Julian
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/9/2005 7:28:27 PM
Thanks, Fabrizio! I've seen more then couple sunrises and mormings on the ocean, this one was really special. Light area near horizon was so weird, like something was comming to ward shore: storm, rain, wind, whatever. And it didn't. Actually when I came to the shore, well before sunrise (~ 4.30 A.M.) sky was clear, clouds came from land latter. So, this light pinkish colored line is far mist over ocean lighted better then area where I'm standing.
Anyway, it was unique view. And because of this shot, vacation was successfull....
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/9/2005 6:40:05 PM
David, I shot only view first, then I previewed result (DSLR) thought about perfect spot to stand, started timer and ran. Actually it's sandy area with constant waves going over it. I simply looked at some shell on the sand where I'll be standing and ran there after trigering timer. Of course beautiful model will make this image MUCH better!!!!! )))
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/9/2005 6:13:19 PM
Andrea, right, sink deeper.... It's o funny I was sinking into it no matter how hard I tried to avoid it. Even with beach chair I got motion blur because of this damn sand....
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/9/2005 5:59:36 PM
Hi Mark! Amazing story about him, his life, his mistakes and winns. No matter what he will be in the history of Pop music, American history and as extraordinary person. Interesting will be to read serious book about him and his life after all will be over....
Very fancy ticket. Thanks for sharing.
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| Photo By: Mark Julian
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/3/2005 6:31:18 PM
NIce!!!! Use Circular polariser filter next time ro remove glare from reflection area. Will look sharper!!!!
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| Photo By: Igor Gligorovski
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/3/2005 6:05:33 PM
Mark, I think it's overexposed by flash not only on shirt, but on face. You probably metered from this black mask.... ) what about shoting him without flash in long exposure veiling-motion?
Also I like helicopter-like wings over his head.... )
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| Photo By: Mark Julian
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/27/2005 7:23:20 PM
Thank you P.J. for your comment and tweek. I think i like original more, because of natural contrasts.... Good image is good cropped or uncropped. I try to compose at place, I liked tha fact that flag is dominant on BG. here is original: http://www.shutterpoint.com/Photos-ViewPhoto.cfm?id=189610
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 9:05:44 PM
Beautiful lips!!!!!! strong statment.
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| Photo By: narabia
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 9:01:57 PM
Thanks, Ehdae!
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 9:00:27 PM
Thanks Al! No comments, fine. I just do what I like - photos of what I find interesting or beautidul. Take care. Your comment for me is a great compliment. I was just lucky to be in right place at right time.
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 9:00:15 PM
Thanks Al! No comments, fine. I just do what I like - photos of what I find interesting or beutidul. Take care. Your comment for me is a great compliment. I was just lucky to be in right place at right time.
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| Photo By: Stan Pustylnik
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 8:21:09 PM
NIce dreamy image, Ehdae. Natural abstract.
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| Photo By: Ehdae (Abullha AL Hazza)
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 8:16:49 PM
Alex, he is very cute boy. I like his open smile. Nice shot.
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| Photo By: Alex Bishop
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 8:11:16 PM
Beautiful flowers. Very nice composition!
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| Photo By: Rosan Kador
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 6:57:40 PM
Ochen' krasivo! Tsveta voshititel'nie. Expozitsiya velikolepna!
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| Photo By: Grigory Ivaschenko
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/20/2005 3:30:20 AM
Yes! you and moon are so similar in expression!!!! Francesca, what did you do? Now, every time I'll see fool moon I will recall this image!!!!!!
I love it!
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| Photo By: Francesca May
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
5/19/2005 6:36:11 PM
Mark,
nice recent shots you made. European style. Lazy, looking down from upstairs. And soft tones. Must be quiet period in life...
I really like woman walkin below you, and circular stairs image. But not only...
Stan
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