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Photographer Cathy Carroll  Cathy Carroll {Karma:28144}
Project #31 The Square Image Camera Model Nikon D200
Categories Nature
Photoart
Seascapes
Film Format
Portfolio Experiments
Natural Light
People
Lens AF-S Nikkor 18-200mm
Uploaded 1/13/2007 Film / Memory Type Digital
    ISO / Film Speed
Views 2580 Shutter
Favorites Aperture f/
Critiques 88 Rating
6.21
/ 29 Ratings
Location City -  Evans head
State -  NSW
Country - Australia   Australia
About Thankyou to everyone who gave constructive criticism on the previous post. I have taken your advice and hope this is a superior result. What do you think?
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There are 88 Comments in 1 Pages
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Nick Lagos   {K:2203} 1/16/2009
This is a fabulous idea Cathy.....congrats to you

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Ozhan Cakici Ozhan Cakici   {K:624} 7/30/2008
i guess fhotograph is this. light and shadows.

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tiziana  mastropasqua tiziana  mastropasqua   {K:-444} 7/19/2008
sul serio grandiosa!!!!

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Ian Miller Ian Miller   {K:9190} 7/11/2008
Nice work, Cathy. Agree with all of the above, though, for me, I think it would be perfect if one black out the figures completely. As the figure on the right almost is. Reminds me of the late Tony Hudson's Africa prints. I think it's the tones and colours used etc. Great work all the same.

Ian

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carolina silberschmidt   {K:1151} 6/6/2008
wow cathy, this is magnificent!!! well done!

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ardian rexhepi ardian rexhepi   {K:-217} 5/17/2008
u are great.

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Francesco Crimella   {K:722} 5/10/2008
Incredible composition.
Francesco

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Radu Gruian   {K:1195} 5/9/2008
Wow, amazing photo. Very creative and with beautiful colors!

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aZiZ aBc aZiZ aBc   {K:28345} 4/29/2008
Wow, Exxxxxxxxxcellent, 7/7
Congratulations
Aziz

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Steve Spencer Steve Spencer   {K:-551} 2/16/2008
Very nice shot. Thank you for your comments on my rabbit photo. I posted a reply and a link there for you.

-Steve

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The Pilgrim The Pilgrim   {K:65007} 2/9/2008
Great shot...Love it! The dark tones are fab!
The tones are fantastic. Im a reflection lover
and this one is great! Great view Cathy, Thanks
for sharing!!

Paul

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Jen van Wijn Jen van Wijn   {K:24075} 2/3/2008
Love this pic, very well done! Regards Jen

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Fabio Brancaleoni   {K:2200} 1/20/2008
Hi Cathy,

i have no crtitics for this photo. It's very impressive.

Compliments.

Fabio.

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Paul Lara Paul Lara   {K:88111} 9/8/2007
Oh My GOD! What incredible art, Cathy.
This is intensely beautiful.

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Name Surname   {K:3712} 9/6/2007
Stunning ! A pleasure for eyes.
Davide.

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Cristina D Cristina D   {K:8080} 7/21/2007
It just attracted me like this: pok and that`s it I said to my self, this is so cool tones, angle, light, everything.

Thank you so much CC.!

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Dan   TDFoto Dan  TDFoto   {K:8618} 7/20/2007
Congrats on PHOTO OF THE DAY...well deserved and executed!!! :)

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Doyle D. Chastain Doyle D. Chastain   {K:101119} 7/19/2007
I think it's VERY good!! Great job!

Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~

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Paolo De Maio   {K:34932} 6/25/2007
Really impressive Cathy !!!
Great for compo, shadows lights and color nuances.

My best compliments

Paolo

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Al Ungar   {K:4626} 6/17/2007
Wow, Cathy this is a wonderful image, I like everything about it !!

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Craig Hanson   {K:7836} 5/27/2007
Congratulations on a well deserved award!

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Nenad Nedeljkovic Nenad Nedeljkovic   {K:278} 5/21/2007
This is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!

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Cathy Carroll Cathy Carroll   {K:28144} 5/11/2007
Thankyou for taking the time to comment on my work. You asked how did I think of this-right place, right time I guess. We live many hours inland, so photography at the beach is a novelty. These two were just dancing on the beach at sunset and I snapped what I saw.

Through the help of other usefilm members I was able to adjust the original to produce a much crisper, more balanced image, and am thrilled with the result.

For me the best part of being a usefilm member is the way that everybody helps each other. It is a very supportive community. CC

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Matz Chase Matz Chase   {K:275} 5/11/2007
This is awesome, How did you think of this?

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Marek Szymanski   {K:1001} 4/18/2007
Superb!!!
Great eye, great work,
best regards

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Pietro Clarizia Pietro Clarizia   {K:8241} 4/12/2007
E X C E L L E N T !!
well done!

ciao!

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Larry Donnelly Larry Donnelly   {K:644} 3/18/2007
Dramatic capture and reflection, I would put the couple in total siloulette or darkness, well deserved award.

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Nick Karagiaouroglou Nick Karagiaouroglou   {K:127263} 3/16/2007
Oh, if the guy would only hold his right leg straight, this would be a perfect hexagon! (Sorry for that, mathematicians have to say that ;-))

But seriously the result is much better than the original picture in the sense of sharpness and contrast. Even the darker top regions still retain enough detail and do not let the black silhouettes disappear into the dark background.

The same result could be achieved with sharper focus on the two and perhaps a bit of underexposure, and though the result is indeed fantastic, the question arises: Will photography be reduced to taking some photo "as it happens to be taken" and then convert it to something good with PS? If so, then what is the use of such sophosticated cameras? (Real question, no rhetorics.)

But back to the photo again, indeed it deserves the PoD award - I would also put it into the best of the category "People" or similar.

A 7+ for the photo in combination with your work in PS, but only a 5 for the original. But perhaps I am too influenced by the quality of this one, and so my rating for the original has to be only understood as "in comparison" to this one here.

Best wishes,

Nick

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Astrid Quast Astrid Quast   {K:1254} 3/15/2007
THIS PHOTO IS SO GREAT! Really, i love it! Great composition, amazing colors... its so artistic! Its a piece of art! 7++++++ Astrid.

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Angela Brocklesby Sattler   {K:1017} 2/22/2007
You are so very clever!
A wonderful image of a beautiful time.
Young love is so very gorgeous.
love
A

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NN  NN     {K:26787} 2/20/2007
Hi Cathy! Fabulous light ... love the tonal range here; awesome reflection! Congrats on the well deserved recognition!

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Dave Arnold Dave Arnold   {K:55680} 2/16/2007
I forget what the critics were saying about the other but I remember I liked it a lot. I'll have to go look at the changes.

This is still a great photo and cognratulations on the Photo of the Day award. Well deserved, Cathy.

Best,
Dave

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Linda Mac Donald   {K:1892} 2/16/2007
Great shot, wonderful shadows, color is superb!
very impressive and frech new idea.
Just love it Cathy!

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Graciela Pierre Graciela Pierre   {K:7318} 2/13/2007
I've found your first attempt and this one is definitely better. Congrats!

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Graciela Pierre Graciela Pierre   {K:7318} 2/13/2007
Perfect composition, lighting and cropping. Those silhouettes and their shadows are great. The simmetry really works here. Excellent job!

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Cathy Carroll Cathy Carroll   {K:28144} 2/12/2007
Thankyou Joggie, they were having great fun. My daughter is a photographer as well and we were taking advantage of the beautiful sunset on the first day of our holiday at the beach. When I turned around she had ditched the camera and was playing with her partner so I snapped a few hurried shots before they became self-conscious. It was a glorious day. CC

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jorge carvalho jorge carvalho   {K:6262} 2/11/2007
Hello Cathy, this photo is wonderful, and i see it was pic of the day, congratulations !
Best regards
Jorge

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Roberto Arcari Farinetti Roberto Arcari Farinetti   {K:209486} 2/11/2007
impresive and marvelous.. the POD is so little award!!!
cheers
roby

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Joggie van Staden Joggie van Staden   {K:41700} 2/11/2007
Great fun (seemingly) and a superb result - Very well done Cathy! Great colour and composition and well cropped. Congrats on the PoD!
Joggie

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Koteiba Fayyad Koteiba Fayyad   {K:3539} 2/10/2007
nice , symmetric silhouettes, great ambient reflections and amazing tones, professional directing i must say,

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sarah motallebi sarah motallebi   {K:1759} 2/10/2007
great shadows
excellent

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Mark Evans Mark Evans   {K:17428} 2/10/2007
fantastic capture , well earned award .. well done cathy .. marky
like the name of the city , same as my surname .. hehehehehehe !!!

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saad alqasem saad alqasem   {K:1202} 2/10/2007
DELICIOUS
;) ;)

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Avi  Avi     {K:70138} 2/10/2007
Yessss !!!!!.. Congrats, once again, Cathy !!

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Larry Fosse Larry Fosse   {K:66493} 2/10/2007
Cograts on the POD Cathy....excellent composition

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Yazeed Al Ghuraibi Yazeed Al Ghuraibi   {K:4588} 2/10/2007
Great shot Cathy !
love it :)
congrats on the POTD
Yazeed

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John-Eric Lemieux John-Eric Lemieux   {K:3045} 2/10/2007
Cathy This is great nice tone,great light I really like the reflection Congradulation on the POD

Your Buddy

J.E.

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John Loreaux John Loreaux   {K:86210} 2/10/2007
Second attempt......................First rate!
Great shot! Excellent crop, silhouettes and beautiful bold colors! Congrats Cathy!!
7 !

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Vijay Kurhade   {K:10118} 2/10/2007
awesome, amazing composistion, very best my friend

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ISMAEL MARCOS ISMAEL MARCOS   {K:10535} 2/10/2007
DELICIOUS

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AJ Miller AJ Miller   {K:49168} 2/10/2007
And now it's on the front page - congrats!

AJ

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Violetta  Tarnowska   {K:24497} 2/10/2007
Cathy:)
Great effect of composition and light. Excellent colours and mood.
Congratulations:)
Warm hugs:)
Viola

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Christopher Perrin Christopher Perrin   {K:1007} 2/10/2007
Congratulations Cathy well deserved POD. Best regards,
Chris

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rebecca claassen rebecca claassen   {K:12904} 2/10/2007
Way to go Cathy!!!
Congrats on the POD :^)
Bek

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Susie  Peek-Swint   {K:7303} 2/10/2007
Many congrats on POTD Cathy ~ I didn't see the original but this is certainly eye-catching ~ well done!
susie

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roberto canepa   {K:7382} 2/10/2007
ciao Cathy,
it's a great shot!! i like composition very much; the light is beautiful, and full of tenderness the scene.
many congrats for the deserved award!
roby

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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor Shirley D. Cross-Taylor   {K:174145} 2/10/2007
Fantastic photo, Cathy! Congratulations!:)

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Avi  Avi     {K:70138} 2/8/2007
Dear Cathy,

I am pleasantly surprised to find that you remember me !! I have ben following your work from time to time, but since you barely respond, I thought maybe you were either very busy or had forgotten your friend ! :)

I know I still have a long long way to go as far as photography is concerned, but I am very proud to have some fantastic and real close friends in UF. I would love to be the same with you, if it's ok.

Cheers and BEST WISHES,
Avi

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Cathy Carroll Cathy Carroll   {K:28144} 2/8/2007
Thank you Avi.
Your comments mean a lot to me, as you were one of the very first people to comment on my work when I joined Usefilm. I appreciate your input and am honoured that you would consider nominating one of my works. CC

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rebecca claassen rebecca claassen   {K:12904} 2/7/2007
Cathy this is just awesome.
The colours with that light band in the middle, and figures and reflections spread across the frame give great balance.
It is funny, I see the female as reaching and straining to pull away, and the male just relaxed , knowing she cannot get away from him......his hand drooping down makes it appear this way to me. Just a little personal interpretation.
Fabulous work, as always. Congrats,
cheers, Bek

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Paul's Photos Paul's Photos   {K:35235} 2/7/2007
nice work.. I like the reflection and the colors

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Avi  Avi     {K:70138} 2/7/2007
SUPERB !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... I am going to nominate this...

BEST OF LUCK ! :)
Avi

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Roberto Okamura   {K:22851} 2/7/2007
Excellent silhouette and reflection Cathy!
Beautiful capture!
Roberto.

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Ann Perrin Ann Perrin   {K:308} 2/6/2007
Hi Cathy,
What a wonderful shot - colour, symmetry, light and dark to compose a wonderful shot!
Ann

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Justin Minister   {K:143} 2/5/2007
wow, great shot.

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Tatiana Kirillova   {K:120} 2/5/2007
Great work with silhouettes and reflections. Beautiful colors.

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Luke Luther   {K:14693} 2/5/2007
Well, I did not see the first one, but I can tell you that this is stunningly emotive and beautiful. The red tones add a bit of glow to an already well composed image.

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Sébastien Anex Sébastien Anex   {K:1178} 2/4/2007
Beautiful picture... congratulations!

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Del Metheny   {K:25617} 2/2/2007
This is a fantastic photo. I did look back at your first posting just to compare. I agree it is an improvement but only because you had such an impressive photo to work with. Del.

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H L H L   {K:11377} 1/26/2007
Very creative, you done excellent work on the final presentation!
Cograts Cathy!
Harry

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Emmanuel Panagiotakis Emmanuel Panagiotakis   {K:6267} 1/25/2007
Very nice sharpness in this picture
One more photo Art by you :)

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Terry Osborne   {K:2059} 1/21/2007
Lovely image, great colours well constructed. Shows great imagination.

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selami Torun   {K:9397} 1/17/2007
Amazing silhouette and reflection, Cathy!! very beautiful composition. and fabulous warm colors. Good idea :))
well done
Selami

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Liz Wallis Liz Wallis   {K:26133} 1/17/2007
:) yes, this is excellent. gorgeous colours and super composition too :)

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Mehul Chimthankar Mehul Chimthankar   {K:18655} 1/16/2007
Hi Cathy,

Awesome picture, fantastic crop, composition and contrast 7++

Mehul

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Mario Studer Mario Studer   {K:1821} 1/16/2007
Simply fantastic. The contrasts and the colors are excellent.
Many greetings
Mario

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Ziad Kadi Ziad Kadi   {K:2847} 1/15/2007
Very very nice work. Congrats on a great image Cathy.

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Ann  Van Breemen   {K:13399} 1/14/2007
An excellent image, Cathy. I'm so glad you were able to go back and redo it. Well done. Cheers, Ann.

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Eric Bryson   {K:687} 1/14/2007
Cathy,

Great use of form, lighting and reflection.

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Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen   {K:55244} 1/13/2007
You´re very welcome, Cathy:-)

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D e b    D e b     {K:9399} 1/13/2007
cathey ... this is one hell of a pic..!!! what an idea..!! shud get an award..!!!! perhaps you need to change the catagory i think..!!!

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Engy Elgammal Engy Elgammal   {K:904} 1/13/2007
Very beautiful, I had a look at the previous one and yes the cropping added a lot.
very well done..regards.

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AJ Miller AJ Miller   {K:49168} 1/13/2007
Oh yes, a huge improvement in composition and contrast. It doesn't have the blurry arm of the previous version, but hey, you've definitely pulled this one out of the bag!

AJ

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Gennaro  Manna   {K:21301} 1/13/2007
dear Cathy, this is fantastic...excellent colors detail and reflection...congrats
gennaro

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Cathy Carroll Cathy Carroll   {K:28144} 1/13/2007
Thankyou Annemette, You were right, I feel it is a stronger composition. This is not the same photograph, I had discarded this one earlier because the heads blended a little too much into the darkness of the background, so after a little work in photoshop, I was able to present this one with no distracting sky and a complete reflection.
I appreciate you taking the time to share your expertise. CC

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Leonie Fitzpatrick Leonie Fitzpatrick   {K:40551} 1/13/2007
Excellent Cathy... :) This is great, love the whole idea... I missed the first one of these also... so went and had a look... This is way better in all aspects and agreeing with Annemette, the crop is definately as said...:)

A well done from here also... :) sounds like I'm parrotting LOL...

Onie...

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Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen   {K:55244} 1/13/2007
Oh you did it! Thank you so much for listening to my advice:-) I think the crop is awesome and makes the image much more complete and also intense. Well done!
Best wishes
Annemette

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Ms. Mel Brackstone Ms. Mel Brackstone   {K:5285} 1/13/2007
Eye-catching result, Cathy. I didn't see the first attempt....but I sure do like this!

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