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MaryBell
{K:32791} 8/17/2003
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Compositionally right on target. I love the mood of the photo as created by the little boy's movement. I agree with Onyur about opacity but otherwise there is nothing here to complain about imo.
Mary
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Louise Smith
{K:157} 8/17/2003
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Thanks for your comments! Particularly to Onur, I'm going to redo this one trying out your idea with the transparency.
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John Reed
{K:6994} 8/12/2003
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I like the perspective of the distant "infinity" point, where even the little boy is running off to the place where parallel lines meet. Maybe a little too much foreground? Welcome to Usefilm, and I'm glad you liked my "Arches" shot.
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Jamie Ferguson
{K:6284} 8/12/2003
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Nice perspective Louise, looks a bit like tunnel vision. I like the re-colouring but definitely worth following Onur's suggestion as it might not look as harsh and have a better feel. Good to see some more Aussies on here.
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Onur Aydin
{K:9815} 8/12/2003
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Nice color differentiation try. But I would definetly recommend to try the colored part added to this layer at around %70 - %40 transparency.
Regards; Onur.
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