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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 1/30/2004
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The blacks are little dark, with all detail lost across her back, but much better exposure and framing in this one.
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Rob van Kempen
{K:1177} 12/14/2003
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Bjorn,
Lovely picture, just one thing..Clean up. I know it is tedious work but it is gratifying too.The kind of jacket she has tends to pick up dust and such. With a little bit of cloning you can get rid of that.
Rob
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sandy c. hopkins
{K:17107} 12/8/2003
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great job bjorn!
congrats!!
keep it up!!
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David Fisk
{K:7444} 12/7/2003
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Bjorn:
Greetings, and happy holidays! I really like
the subtle, and tantalizing pose here. Beautiful
layout, and crispness.
Best regards
David
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Matej Maceas
{K:24381} 12/4/2003
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I like this one most from your studio shots. I think the pose works nicely, the lighting is good IMO, maybe you could get in a little closer with the camera. The only thing that bothers me is that very noticable fold in the background fabric near the bottom right corner, it looks as if she was holding it in her hand.
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Johan Sorensen
{K:3449} 12/1/2003
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Lovly photo
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Emgy Massidda
{K:60358} 11/29/2003
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For a first attempt, I must say you've done really great!
The result is fantastic! The pose is very nice and quite professional.
I don't mind the model looking slightly down but I agree with other cooments about the background and the crop. More background blur and cropping part of the bottom would take away a bit of distraction and the eye would focus more on the beautiful model.
Nevertheless, I think this is quite beautifully done, Bjorn!
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Eddy ~
{K:1152} 11/29/2003
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i would add that the background looks in focus with the model.. so, u might bring the model away from the background or use a larger focal length lens (100 mm) to blur the background more..
otherwise, really nice shot.. i just learned studio photography too btw.. but i haven't got any pics yet ;)
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Jan Symank
{K:22030} 11/28/2003
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Hi Bjorn,
Very good first session.
A beautiful result !
I think it wood be possible to choose a longer lens or to crop it
for more concentration on the girl itself.
Bravissimo and regards from Jan
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 11/28/2003
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Great first attempt dear friend. very professional. perhaps a little bit over exposed on the right side of her face. othervise excellent. go for it dear Bjorn.
Good work here. well done. have a nice weekend ;-)
Biliana
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Richard Thornton
{K:26442} 11/28/2003
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Fantastic first effort. I like the pose and the general body line. Maybe the model could be just a little larger in the frame since there is quite a lot of space above her head. The expression is not bad, but I wonder about the lowered eye lids, if maybe direct eye contact might be better.
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