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jeff f.
{K:120} 12/16/2003
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:two basic things:
:cropped hands and legs
:sharpness
:i like tones...
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donato r.
{K:16361} 12/16/2003
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Complimenti! e' un magnifico ritratto.... molto ben curata la posa ed eccellente l'espressione...
ciao donato
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In Transit
{K:29432} 12/15/2003
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You have done exactly what this site is good for... asking advice!
I have compared your submission, your original, and then PW's...
PW's comes out on top, inspite of loosing the suede effect of the boots.
I have a personal preference to BW and Sepia versus colour for portraits...
You have capured some good detail, with a certain softness as the model's left elbow...
However that apparent shadow in the centre of her chest really disturbs...
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Teunis Haveman
{K:53426} 12/15/2003
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Antonella, beautiful and great portrait
Teunis
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Emgy Massidda
{K:60358} 12/15/2003
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Una prova con risulato superbo!
Le tonalita' sepia sono ottime.
Bravissima!
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Mário Sousa
{K:16985} 12/15/2003
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beautiful lady
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Phil Wesley
{K:2121} 12/15/2003
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IMHO # 2...........Phil
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Antonella Nistri
{K:21867} 12/15/2003
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This is the original T-Max developed for colors unretouched,please have a look at which one is best. Thanks, Antonella
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Antonio Trincone
{K:23167} 12/15/2003
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the white on the arms seems to be too bright Antonella, may be some Cruve in Photoshop could help more
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Maria Assunção
{K:2066} 12/15/2003
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Very nice portrait.
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Mark Stein
{K:6210} 12/15/2003
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Antonella...you are getting some great comments and ideas, just wanted to say hi. Nice first efforts on the sepia, really nice.
Mark
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David Orea
{K:5292} 12/15/2003
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Excellent portrait, Antonella. Pose, lighting and tones are great. Lovely girl. Regards.
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Phil Wesley
{K:2121} 12/15/2003
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Hi Antonella, I Like this pose and image. The eyes are not quite in focus but regardless a great shot. I have tried some of this tips as recommended to your image and added a few touches of my own. It can be enhanced through PS. Keep up the great work.....Phil
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Roger Williams
{K:86139} 12/15/2003
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I tried it once and gave up on it. It seems to be a difficult film to get to give its best, although it can give really beautiful results in the hands of someone familiar with it. I think this is a very promising beginning--certainly better than my own very disappointing results with not a single "keeper" in 36 exposures. The skin tones are nearly, or perhaps quite, "blown," and the blacks aren't quite black. Perhaps playing with the levels again in PS might improve things... Will you perservere? I think you should; this is so nearly excellent good.
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Salvo Valenti
{K:17038} 12/15/2003
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Bellissimo ritratto.....ciao Salvo
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Nedim Muhic
{K:14362} 12/15/2003
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Very nice and soft.
Bravo !!!
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 12/15/2003
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Wow.. Love it more in Sepia tone. Great shoot dear Antonella.
Kiss, BIliana
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Lorenzo Parisi
{K:6277} 12/15/2003
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Ottimo ritratto, non so se si addice molto l'effetto sepia con la freschezza della modella, comunque è una questione di gusti.
Ciao, Lorenzo
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Roger Cotgreave
{K:15892} 12/15/2003
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I think it looks really good Antonella but maybe try this make a copy and give it a multiply filter and drop the trans to about 60%. I think it would give more body to the highlights...regards roger
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:209486} 12/15/2003
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nice.. un ritratto molto soft nei lineamenti!
ciao roby
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