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Craig Hanson
{K:7836} 10/31/2004
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Good Japanese city life shot Roger! The quality seems better than before, maybe because of the settings you used. I agree with Keith that cropping off a bit of the roof would improve the composition.
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Keith Naylor
{K:13064} 10/29/2004
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Hi Roger,
yes the converging lines are very aluring, but remember to put the vanishing point on the intersection of the thirds. Don't lose the composition just because you are using a 'toy' camera.
Also I'd crop some of the roof, it doesn't add anything to the image really.
This is the sort of stuff which attracted me to your images in the first place, keep on showing us Japan through the eyes of Usefilm.
Regards Keith
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 10/29/2004
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Hi Roger, This is what I've been waiting for since you mentioned how functional this was for candid street photogrpahy. Great shot. It takes guts to take those shots, but it would be excellent to see more interaction between you and the person you're photographing, holding the phone at chest level while walking past....
Back to this shot. The perspective and tones are quite good. I like the yellow line on which you're standing running through the scene almost vertically. Itr shows that a good photographer is more important than the camera he / she is using.... )
Cheers,
Hugo
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Rita Boyko
{K:364} 10/29/2004
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So interesting shot. Good work! I like :)
You also didn't stand on yellow line? :)
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Chris Spracklen
{K:32552} 10/29/2004
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Very impressive shot, Roger ~ in all respects!
What better place for 'lines' than a railway station?! ;-))
Best regards, Chris
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