It is interesting that there are 22 views and no comments yet. Obviously people like the picture enough to look at it! I think it is really good! You have lovely lighting and a very interesting background. Of course the model looks lovely also. I have a couple of very subtle suggestions. First, if you have photoshop, I would consider cropping out the orange and white pole in the far right. Also, if you had an opportunity to ever shoot something like this again, I would reconsider the position of her left hand. It looks a bit lost there. One of my portrait photographers once pointed out to me that if someone has his or her hands straight to his or her side, it makes them look bigger around the waist than they really are. (not that this girl has anything to worry about!) These are very minor suggestions . A great shot overall!