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Critique By:
Gerald Lewis (K:6)
1/29/2002 1:13:52 AM
Thanks for your helpful comments. The border was an afterthought as I was posting the pic. It is gone now. This is how the picture actually looks.
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Critique By:
Neia Frank (K:478)
1/29/2002 12:41:56 AM
I like light,hat looks nice also.agree in change border!
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Critique By:
Scott Jones (K:1093)
1/28/2002 11:13:15 PM
Such nice light and the shapes are great. The great Saturn's ring of the hat and then those great sweeps of the scarf. I like the way the shoulder disappears into the void. Good use of square format. My only suggestion would be to try something different than the heavy green border. I find it distracts my eye from this fine portrait. I think it would be stunning with no border...
Scott
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Critique By:
james mickelson (K:7344)
1/20/2002 8:35:55 AM
This is a nice image but the part of the image that holds the most impact is the doorway with the broom. The rest of the image isn't really necassary although I know that it is a record shot of a Trulli house. I like the archetechure. But the doorway and the broom are where this image lay. isolate them and see what a great image this would be. Crop this sucker.
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