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Critique By:
Michael Kanemoto (K:22115)
12/3/2004 2:26:45 AM
Marc:
Watch out for snow - the massive amount of white will make your camera's meter be off. The meter is set to read 20% gray, and whith a large amount of snow it will underexpose the film every time.
No worries. Next time take a meter reading off of the palm of your hand. Or, go into a program like PS and bring the natural whites back out.
In this example I converted to grayscale, upped the brightness using levels, and then brought the image back to RGB, adding yellow, and half as much red for a sepia tint.
Happy shooting.
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Critique By:
Michael Kanemoto (K:22115)
12/3/2004 2:20:39 AM
Marc:
I saw one of your comments, and had to hop over to your Usefilm portfolio (and review all your other comments). It's refreshing to see someone drop complete and honest advice out here.
Thought I would return the favor.
- Good composition, use of rule of thirds.
- Bit o' magenta! In my example, I used these adjustments in PS:
Highlights
Cyan/Red: -17
Magenta/Green: +52
Yellow/Blue: +25
Midtones
Cyan/Red: +37
Magenta/Green: +100
Yellow/Blue: +52
(this means a LOT of magenta, man)
I think that the snow was reflecting the sunrise. Can go "corrected" or "uncorrected".
I also adjusted the levels on the sky, midground, and foreground seperately. This is a matter of preference, and everything looked pretty tight.
Overall good job - keep on postin'
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Critique By:
Thilo Bayer (K:50358)
11/29/2004 12:17:18 PM
definitely SHARKS! =)
hi marc,
great abstract shot, like the toning and the slight tilt in the horizon (makes more dynamics). Maybe you can gain more tension by using a more wide-angle lens and getting more details into the composing.
nice one.
thilo
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Critique By:
baYu6wqlPP vH612wLkPsS (K:2519)
11/20/2004 3:03:52 PM
Nice one. I like the way the plant on the right echoes the curves in the roof.
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Critique By:
Kristen Lake (K:12)
11/20/2004 12:16:05 AM
kind of looks like a bug don't it? haha.
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Critique By:
Paul's Photos (K:35235)
11/19/2004 11:30:43 PM
excellent perspective .. love the architecture.. nice work
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Critique By:
Manuel Bedoyan (K:9098)
11/19/2004 9:50:06 PM
> > > THIS WAY!
A WOW picture! It's as interesting as it is confusing. Very well seen and done.
cheers, Manuel
p.s. thanks for your comment, and i'll be looking forward for you to tell me how and what filter to use after u try it 
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Critique By:
Kristen Lake (K:12)
11/18/2004 3:04:05 PM
Um, wow. I think "depth" is the right word. Makes me want to ski.
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Critique By:
Kristen Lake (K:12)
11/18/2004 3:02:04 PM
I like the colours, and the disappearing road. i don't really know what i am talking about, but that's my two cents.
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Critique By:
Olga Vareli (K:22477)
11/18/2004 11:22:33 AM
when are we leaving???Excellent!
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Critique By:
Ahmed Maher (K:422)
11/18/2004 8:56:15 AM
excellent architectural capiture, well done
ahmed maher
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Critique By:
Patrick Di Fruscia (K:486)
11/18/2004 8:53:27 AM
Remote Viewing......It's a hard one Marc. Great Abstract
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Critique By:
Sergio Sánchez (K:2350)
11/18/2004 8:52:23 AM
Wonderful shot, I love this buildings 
For title... mmmm, it's hard... but it really looks like a spaceship
Sergio
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Critique By:
Antonia BauerleinSehnert (K:30599)
11/18/2004 7:14:02 AM
An M with wings! Excellent photo. The color works well. T.
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Critique By:
Mark Mellen (K:1970)
11/18/2004 5:11:42 AM
I think it is for sure different.. I like it altho took me a minute to get oriented with the Photo.. It is Unique well done!!
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Critique By:
Clifton Jones (K:10688)
11/18/2004 4:25:08 AM
Great perspective...looks like something from a Star Wars Movie...very nice work....
Clifton...
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Critique By:
Marc Robin (K:3385)
11/17/2004 8:38:55 PM
Thanks for taking the time to work on the photo. It does look better, but somehow still seems a bit unnatural. Probably the original photo is overexposed and not very sharp, since I had on a big zoom and it was very far away. I'll try playing with it a bit more in Photoshop and see what i can come up with.
Thanks!
Marc
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Critique By:
delete my account (K:3679)
11/17/2004 8:13:27 PM
I like this one!
Very nice depth and focus!
And perfect detail!!!!!
Greetings Abel!!!!!!!
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Critique By:
Bill Krul (K:5597)
11/17/2004 3:32:13 PM
Basically a good photo but the contrast seems to be a bit on the low side. If you have photoshop I would advise playing with levels, (try auto first and if not satisfactory try manual). I would also experiment with curves. see attached.
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Critique By:
Kamran Bakhtiari (K:24042)
11/17/2004 4:44:00 AM
nice shot,perfect title.
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Critique By:
Leonardo Almeida (K:172)
11/17/2004 4:17:52 AM
Great Focus and colors. Nice image.
Regards, Leo
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Critique By:
Istvan VARKONYI (K:3770)
11/16/2004 10:01:24 PM
It can bee wrong, but it is interesting.
My be one from RGB chanel is not on the top??!!??
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Critique By:
Nour El Refai (K:12481)
11/15/2004 9:44:15 PM
Feeling calm, an interesting place.
well composed
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Critique By:
Nour El Refai (K:12481)
11/15/2004 9:40:42 PM
Wonderful, I like Alhambra so much, thanks for sharing.
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Critique By:
Michele Berti (K:14921)
11/15/2004 8:43:20 PM
beautiful panorama! greatly exposed and nicely composed. congrats.
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Critique By:
Steve Allen (K:31)
11/15/2004 4:41:03 PM
Great tilt and well worked....Fab!
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Critique By:
S.D Holmes (K:7156)
11/14/2004 11:01:17 PM
I know lolol - glad you like though. It was actually three shots with my wide angle lens and i used adobe cs - the automerge there is amazing and it also allows you to see an almost 3d view as well of the work. Makes it difficult to frame though!
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Critique By:
Marc Robin (K:3385)
11/14/2004 10:26:30 PM
Wow, your panoramic looks to be pretty amazing! Must look really nice full size. Do you stitch them manually? How many shots was it? The lines in yours are great.
I guess that courtyard really lends itself to that kind of photo. Although like I said in my comment, stitching square scenery is quite difficult, I find.
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Critique By:
S.D Holmes (K:7156)
11/14/2004 10:17:31 PM
lol - you'de be surprised how simialr our portolios on the louvre are!!here's a panormaic i made though i don't think it willcome out very well as an attachement - you can see the similarities though
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Critique By:
S.D Holmes (K:7156)
11/14/2004 10:13:27 PM
excellent shot marc - especially with that reflection!! really enhances the composition!! thankfully i didnt have any trouble with security thank you for your commment and look forward to sharing plenty more work!!
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