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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
2/20/2011 7:43:24 PM
focus doesn't matter. this photo is good because of the emotion, the moment.. technicalities come second by a long way.
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Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
2/17/2011 4:47:36 AM
I am glad you noticed the 'small spot on the left side horizon'.. it is actually a man walking towards the water. but you are right - I was unsure about whether to keep it or clone it out - maybe I should have cloned it.
As for the balance, I think I like it for the very fact that there is a tension in the viewer's eyes - which way should I look ? .. oh hell, let me look at BOTH. (so, what i am trying to say, is that the frame tries to draw the eyes of the viewer from one corner to the other..that's what I wouldn't change)
peace Avi
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Photo By: Avi
(K:70138)
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
1/27/2011 2:10:11 PM
Saad,
I am back to India for good ! (So now you have a new place to visit !!)
Abt this photo: If you see carefully, on the left side wall (yellow part) just above the man's head, it is written 'Stick No Bills'.. this is a pretty common wall writing in India, as people just use any space whatsovere for writing ads etc.. I now understand that the arabic part was a translation of the same, since this was shot on the boundary wall of a school :)
cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Avi
(K:70138)
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
1/26/2011 3:16:46 PM
love it !!!! ..Avi
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Photo By: Maja Š
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
1/25/2011 12:10:24 PM
wow.. I never noticed the tightness at the top.. I agree with you, but also want to add that maybe everything else is strong enough for the viewer to overlook that glitch :)
I am having a great time here since I came back. Thinking when you will land here and we'll get to do some photography together !
cheers, Avi P.S. took a few pictures recently .. will try and post some, if I get time :)
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Photo By: Avi
(K:70138)
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
1/25/2011 12:07:28 PM
I was.. for the past 5 years. Moved back to India this December for family reasons.
Pity you can't make it to India now.. but maybe someday you will be, and we will meet..
cheers ! Avi
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Photo By: Avi
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
1/20/2011 5:22:19 PM
you are right.. the noise did catch my eye, and I wasn't sure why it came..
btw, when are YOU going to visit India ? :)
cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Avi
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/18/2010 3:14:20 AM
for now, this will do.. more when I move back. take care, Avi
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Photo By: Avi
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/17/2010 3:25:24 AM
love this shot ! congrats, Avi
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Photo By: marco diquattro
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/16/2010 1:54:45 AM
after ALL she has put up with all these years, the least she deserves is this. be a good boy, and oblige her from time to time ! :)
(you can show my comment to her) ;)
hugs, Avi
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Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/16/2010 1:27:52 AM
ha ha ha ha.... thanks for the laugh !!..
check your gmail.. Avi
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Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/15/2010 12:36:12 AM
I am sure if I had done this, you would not have liked it.. but I do ! .. this is cool.. :)
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Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/15/2010 12:02:21 AM
like the spontaneity of thought ... using the ring as the 'alternate' eye.. excellent ! cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Yuri Kurnosov
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/14/2010 11:58:06 PM
fantastic light !! cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Keith Saint
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/14/2010 11:31:58 PM
fantastic b/w abstract !! cheers, Avi
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Photo By: mike cable
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/2/2010 2:27:24 AM
amazing place.. always makes such great architectural abstracts.. cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Angelo Nesci
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/2/2010 2:16:36 AM
:) ... khub shiggiri firchhi..
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Photo By: Bijit Bose
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/2/2010 2:15:51 AM
ei processing ta ei composition tar jonne besh bhalo lagchhe..
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Photo By: K r i s h n e n d u - The NoOne
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/2/2010 2:13:33 AM
agree with Nigel.. you did make it look like a fish :)
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Photo By: 1301307 60
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
11/2/2010 2:12:28 AM
interesting.. what is the guy doing there ? best, Avi
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Photo By: Petar Lazović
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/23/2010 7:49:38 AM
awesome impact shot !.. the blown parts in the sky attract the eyes a bit, so they can be toned down. cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Joern Stubbe
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/23/2010 7:46:59 AM
the highlights are blown.. can be corrected easily. composition is very good ! cheers, Avi
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Photo By: Igor Philipenko
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/23/2010 7:42:04 AM
one of my favourite drives. great atmosphere !
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Photo By: Rick Koth
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/23/2010 7:41:27 AM
very good abstract !
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Photo By: sudip ronie saha
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/23/2010 7:34:13 AM
superb blurry image !
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Photo By: Grzegorz Markowski
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/23/2010 7:33:17 AM
superb work, as usual ! all the best with the film. cheers, Avi
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Photo By: PIOTR KOWALIK
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/9/2010 7:54:40 PM
Saad,
Sent you an email on yahoo.
Avi
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Photo By: Avi
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/4/2010 10:01:58 PM
excellent colors !
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Photo By: S.Bikash Bhattacherjee
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
10/4/2010 2:51:43 AM
I knew txules would like this !
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Photo By: Paolo Corradini
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
9/30/2010 5:05:29 PM
good abstract !
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Photo By: SORRENTE Patrick
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