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Critique By:
Paolo Barthelemy (K:25552)
8/28/2007 1:14:44 PM
Questa mi piace un sacco! La rabbia del mare che si contrappone all'apparente tranquillità del tizio in bicicletta che ne osserva l'infrangersi sugli scogli ed il turbinare della risacca con la ringhiera in primo piano che separa ed allo stesso tempo conduce all'osservazione dei "due mondi". Bellissimi anche i toni e la grana.
Complimenti, Marco!
Ciao, Paolo
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Critique By:
Paolo Barthelemy (K:25552)
8/28/2007 1:08:27 PM
Ciao, Marco, e bentornato!
In questo caso, l'HDR sarebbe stato una manna! Costrasti fortissimi che mettono a dura prova le capacità del sensore e del fotografo. Quest'ultimo li ha superati brillantemente dando la precedenza alle alte luci ma il sensore non ce l'ha fatta ed il dettaglio sulle ombre ne ha risentito.
Visto che la foto e' nei CC, aggiungerei che la parte di cielo compeltamente bianco distoglie un po' lo sguardo e sembra oscurare ancora maggiormente le ombre.
Buona la composizione.
Certo che te lo sei scelto proprio difficile lo scatto! 
Ciao e a presto, Paolo
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
8/28/2007 11:01:38 AM
HI Branmir...thank you for the critiques!
MM
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
8/28/2007 10:58:52 AM
Thanks Gamze!
MM
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Critique By:
Branimir Fagarazzi (K:38367)
8/28/2007 10:56:10 AM
Nice work
fago
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Critique By:
Gamze KIRTIL (K:113)
8/28/2007 10:47:19 AM
Great B&W photo! Very nice lightning and tones,congrats!
Gamze
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Critique By:
G G (K:61359)
8/14/2007 6:20:20 AM
Simple, but it works well in a beautiful tonal range..
Complimenti
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Critique By:
Debjit Ghosh (K:3494)
8/13/2007 11:46:37 PM
get8 shot and nice b&w treatment.
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Critique By:
Marcelo Berraz (K:12906)
8/13/2007 10:22:45 PM
Un gran trabajo fotográfico.7/7.M.
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Critique By:
Branimir Fagarazzi (K:38367)
8/13/2007 7:43:26 PM
Nice work
fago
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
8/13/2007 7:32:19 PM
thank you for the critiques, i'm sure that they will be useful for the following times!
MM
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
8/13/2007 6:58:05 PM
Out of the series (so far) I think this is the one that is behind the others. 3 and 5 I find to be particularly strong this less so.
The B&W conversion is good and in keeping with the other 5. They all seem to have a similar tonal range and contrast range, so look like a series. This is good.
However the composition of this one is not of the same quality. Your angle of view has placed the horizon almost central and vertical lamposts and 'watch tower' collide on each other. It also includes the black plastic bin. A few steps to the right in my opinion would lead to a good composition, the verticals would be separated and the bin excluded. Also, the metal work in the seat would become another focal point.
I hope you do not mind this critique, but you did ask for an honest opinion, and this is mine.
All this said, the area does make for a good series and whether intententional or not, the weather conditions are perfect for capturing the mood and drama of the place.
With the very best wishes.
Paul
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
8/13/2007 6:28:28 PM
Excellent capture Marco . . . well composed and converted.
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
8/13/2007 6:20:36 PM
hi Metonio , thanks for your comment!!!
MM
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Critique By:
metoni . (K:24727)
8/13/2007 6:18:08 PM
Very nice landscape.
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Critique By:
Arturs Daukulis (K:1364)
8/6/2007 6:57:21 PM
realy nice view, but I would prefere the rule of the thirds and make the horizon ~3cm higher
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Critique By:
Jeanette Hägglund (K:59855)
8/6/2007 1:27:15 AM
GREAT
Jeanette
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Critique By:
Charles Lewis (K:387)
8/5/2007 8:04:34 PM
I'm drunk so I'm feeling critical. I think there's just a little too much detail in this shot; it confuses the eye. That being said the beach, clouds and waves ARE beautiful.
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
8/5/2007 6:39:52 PM
cioa gennaro...grazie per il commento
MM
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Critique By:
soul 21 (K:27572)
8/5/2007 6:22:27 PM
mi piace molto
bellissimo il mosso e il bianco e nero
eccellente la composizione
ciao
gennaro
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Critique By:
Emanuele Capelli (K:6110)
7/2/2007 9:03:14 AM
WOW!!! bravissimo Marco!!! ottimo taglio con dei colori eccezionali!!
ben fatto!!
Ciao..Emanuele...
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Critique By:
Eren Gunes (K:2457)
6/25/2007 7:14:08 PM
Magnifica composizione Marco..non ho parole...tutto perfetto..toni...luci!complimenti!!
....e grazie per il tuo bel commento..son contenta che ti sia piaciuta!!!
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Critique By:
Eren Gunes (K:2457)
6/25/2007 7:11:27 PM
e... che particolare..mio caro marco...eccellente...quanto tempo..che non vedo i tuoi meravigliosı lavori!!!
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Critique By:
Alessandro Capelli (K:34805)
6/18/2007 1:30:46 PM
Bei colori e bella luce..bravo Mero!
Ale
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Critique By:
Ahmed Ismail (K:19853)
6/15/2007 11:47:58 PM
Beautiful....lovely shot!
Regards, Ahmed
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Critique By:
Alessandro Capelli (K:34805)
6/15/2007 5:15:46 PM
Bell'astratto Mero! Bellissimi i colori!
Ale
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Critique By:
Gennaro Manna (K:21301)
6/15/2007 10:11:00 AM
Bellissima ripresa all'ora blu, eccellenti i toni caldi delle prime luci e ottima la composizione...immagine bellissima...complimenti
gennaro
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Critique By:
Alessandro Capelli (K:34805)
6/13/2007 4:44:58 PM
Gran bell abstract Mero..bravo bravo!
Ale
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
6/12/2007 8:09:27 PM
thanks Richard!!!!
MM
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Critique By:
Marco Meroni (K:1779)
6/12/2007 8:08:46 PM
grazie Gennaro!!!
MM
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