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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/1/2004 9:48:30 PM
I was about to comment on how flat the exposure range was, until I read the explanation. Pretty cool! 
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Critique By:
Dr@gon's Baby (K:1011)
9/10/2003 10:33:25 PM
nice shot...nice idea
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Bob Tomerlin (K:5460)
7/24/2003 5:22:54 AM
Rachel - thanks for your comments about my portfolio, although I feel I'm still blushing.
This is a nice shot with great colors. One thing to remember about macro - if possible, try to have the front of the lens parallel to the subject. But, you might not have been able to do this since you were only 2 inches away. If the front of the lens had been // to the bee, you wouldn't get a sharply focused head with a less sharply focused tail - as it is here.
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Critique By:
larry terry (K:1965)
7/23/2003 4:05:58 PM
haha i like it i like the colors and the look, and the fact that hes taking it easy for all us sinners haha
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Egidija Smilingiene (K:3227)
7/23/2003 3:32:10 PM
sorry, but i didn't like it. I don't see here any idea. commercial? maybe... but nothing more.
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Critique By:
SarahM none (K:7836)
7/17/2003 7:47:38 PM
A double exposure with film? (versus a photo editor) I really like this and it makes a compelling thumbnail also. I like the clarity of all the details. You have been very creative here and I think it works well. Great job!
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Critique By:
Nelson Lau (K:232)
7/14/2003 2:42:13 PM
Crop out that double in the reflection and fill it with similar dark background. In my opinion, the sunglasses gotta go, it blocked the nice feel from the spike hair. Try and experiment tilting the image 2~5 degree clock-wise then, re-crop to see if it will better fit (or not) your "style"
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Critique By:
Joksa Juoperi (K:13473)
7/13/2003 8:00:48 PM
Nice composition, lighting and colours. The picture is tilted to the left.
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Romulo Lubachesky (K:11836)
7/13/2003 7:18:01 PM
Great image
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Robert Sullivan (K:28)
4/22/2003 12:09:20 AM
Nice Picture
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Toph Church (K:206)
4/20/2003 8:50:47 PM
Makes me kind or wonder, why? So hard, the camera's gaze. Must be good. Certainly, the chilly still life in the context of movement is an achievement.
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Critique By:
Rebecca Ann Bunsick (K:52)
3/7/2003 3:45:49 PM
Hey great shot  This would be a great picture to have on a cd with tons of christmas/cookout photos. Hint - hint.
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Hayri CALISKAN (K:16195)
2/24/2003 3:39:06 PM
Beautiful portrait.
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
sam clements (K:265)
2/19/2003 2:04:50 AM
I would recommend a tri pod, although still looks good, did you get to test drive any of the cars?
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Oliver Indra (K:448)
2/19/2003 12:06:27 AM
Hi Rachel!
Nice pic nut the slight motion blur you have there spoils it as a "commercial" shot and is not strong enough on the other side to push it into abstracts!
Tripod maybe?
Greetings, Oliver
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Critique By:
AJ Haselwood (K:2148)
2/17/2003 6:37:48 AM
Really like the reflection on the hood, agree that the grill needs to cropped out and the hotspot on the top right toned down a bit. Nice
aj
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Critique By:
no no (K:184)
2/16/2003 5:22:02 PM
the play with lighting works very well here. the only thing i'd like to see different is to have the grille cropped out of the bottom right corner. otherwise, good shot.
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Critique By:
Hayri CALISKAN (K:16195)
2/16/2003 3:52:29 PM
I like this idea, usually the light and shadows are perfect
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Chris Lauritzen (K:14949)
1/8/2003 7:42:17 AM
Rachel,
This shot is ok but the lighting seems a bit harsh. Maybe use a defuser over your flash.
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Sarah Needham (K:2482)
1/8/2003 2:40:56 AM
Rachel, I think this is a good image. The lines works well. Only slight nit, is the fact that it looks a little soft, but that could be the scan.
Sarah
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
1/6/2003 4:08:16 PM
What the heck!? That picture isnt supposed to be there? who's is that?
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
1/6/2003 4:07:20 PM
It seems here that your exposure is a little off. You also might want to crop out those street lights at the bottom
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
1/6/2003 4:06:54 PM
It seems here that your exposure is a little off. You also might want to crop out those street lights at the bottom
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Critique By:
James O'Donnell (K:28)
12/28/2002 1:13:57 PM
I really like that photo. The way the water is frozen in time - just great
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Critique By:
Thibault Grouas (K:848)
12/26/2002 8:32:47 AM
The use of a red filter with color film could have been a great idea to reproduce gig-scene lightings but unfortunately the pic here needs more contrast and detail.
What needs definitely some improvement is the attitude of your subjects : Not even one is looking at you, and the closest performer is even showing his back to you...
If the subject of your photograph is your friends's band, try to catch their expressions at the right time. Obsverve their eyes and fire the shutter when you feel it's nice, but be patient. Band performers usually have great attitude and strong expressions when they sing and perform, but it needs some time to capture them.
Good luck!
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Bob Fraga (K:263)
12/23/2002 5:19:55 PM
I do truely like this photo. It's seems to me to be very natural and shot on the moment. I agree that the background does take a little from the shot, but all in all, a very nice pic. Good work.
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Critique By:
william l. borch(jr.) (K:315)
12/23/2002 11:29:44 AM
This is a great shot, the back ground steals from the overall but nice job.
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Morsi Hussein (K:1128)
12/22/2002 11:32:40 AM
nice picture
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Aaron Gustwiller (K:171)
12/19/2002 6:42:10 AM
I would try vertical instead of horizontal and focus on them holding hands. Just a thought came to me....A vertical side view of these two holding hands and at a lower angle focusing on the hands more, looking out of the frame of the picture not at the camera so much. I guess I see it, but not sure if I explained it good enough though. I hope I helped you?
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| Photo By: Rachel Radcliffe
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Critique By:
Pawel (K:26)
12/19/2002 2:41:57 AM
Nice shot Rachel, it shows relationship between your friends. Pity, you cropped their hands.
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