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Critique By:
meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net (K:3974)
11/16/2002 1:55:35 PM
Much better !
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Critique By:
Kyle Blair (K:1542)
11/16/2002 10:47:35 AM
very interesting shot. great colors. much better without the styrofoam.
for what it's worth, here's my vision for some cropping. what do you think?
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Critique By:
Kyle Blair (K:1542)
11/16/2002 10:26:27 AM
very cool shot!
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Critique By:
Philip Sherwood (K:51)
11/14/2002 6:18:45 PM
You can see another picture from the same night here:
http://www.usefilm.com/showphoto.php?id=26814
Can you do html in this?
or click here
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Critique By:
Russell Love (K:7006)
11/14/2002 6:01:47 PM
can we get speell check on here? I meant keep it up.
Russ
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Critique By:
Russell Love (K:7006)
11/14/2002 5:59:59 PM
Phillip,
Great shot! you are right about the building on the right. It needs to go. then you will need to do something to make the misty building look like it is not leaning. Can you straighten that in one of the photo programs? I don't know. So why don't you just hang around there for another shot like that and stand in front of the building to the right! lol! Man kie pit up your doing great!
Later my friend,
Russ
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Critique By:
Mark Peterson (K:3452)
11/14/2002 5:40:01 PM
Philip,
First of all, I like low light photos. This has an errie feel to it and that's what I like most about it. I agree that some croping is in order, but you don't want to lose the angles created in this image. Very interesting.
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Critique By:
meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net (K:3974)
11/13/2002 10:45:04 AM
Abstracts?
I would take a new set of pictures - leaving anything but myself and the sky reflected.
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Critique By:
Philip Sherwood (K:51)
11/13/2002 10:32:19 AM
Re: Portrait category: I wasn't sure what category to put it in.
What suggestions do you have for it?
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Critique By:
meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net (K:3974)
11/13/2002 10:22:18 AM
A portrait?
I think it is a very creative idea and you should work on it more. Good luck!
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Critique By:
Glenn Kennedy (K:34)
11/8/2002 8:24:11 PM
Interesting photo. I agree with the others that the building on the right needs to be cropped out, but no-can-do without messing up the entire frame. You'll loose most the angle effect of the other buildings.
This has a real Blade Runner/Ridley Scott effect.
A real eye catcher as is and nice job !
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Critique By:
Donald Holman (K:884)
11/8/2002 11:13:31 AM
Hmmmm....yea, I see it Joffre and I think your suggestion would make a nice composition. Just picturing, with the "reverse L", the photo in my mind has a very futuristic, moody feel (think it has to do with the rounded buildings). If I had my druthers (been wanting to use that word for years), I'd like the light from the top of the left building not be so strong and dominating. Giving it a darker almost cyber-punk feel ... but that's just me.
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Critique By:
Joffre Swait (K:626)
11/8/2002 11:07:18 AM
Philip, I like this picture ... but I agree that some cropping is needed. However, I wouldn't crop just the right side, instead I'd crop a reversed L-shape thingie by removing the right-hand side building and most of the well-lit bottom area. It'll create a moodier, darker photograph!
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Critique By:
Wietse de Graaf (K:136)
8/27/2002 1:14:48 PM
Nice perspective, different from the standard shots. Too bad it wasnt windy enough..
Wietse
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