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Critique By:
Scott Marceau (K:479)
1/23/2003 8:33:44 AM
Wow Brian Railey, your spelling is improving. Dude I shredded that thang like a block of cheese. Remember that?
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Critique By:
Mike Scott (K:1817)
1/23/2003 7:58:37 AM
Love the wide perspective - really puts the viewer in the action. Besides omitting the light post you could have used some fill flash to improve this image.
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Critique By:
Jeremy Guzman (K:119)
1/23/2003 6:16:32 AM
Nicely shot! I want to get out to our skatepark and have some fun with them! All that bugs me is that lightpost in the top corner.
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
1/14/2003 3:36:10 PM
EEEEMMMMOOOOOOO!
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/3/2003 6:21:18 PM
Hey it Richard from the Punishers. Cool photo.
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Critique By:
Daniel Saaiman (K:1222)
12/20/2002 10:35:24 AM
I know from my long exposure experience that this pic is very well captured!! Well done!
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Critique By:
Kyle Blair (K:1542)
12/19/2002 8:21:52 AM
that's pretty darn cool. can you tell us a little bit about how you captured this?
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Critique By:
Scott Marceau (K:479)
12/18/2002 7:24:51 PM
ihateryanbailey
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Critique By:
Kame Kame (K:92)
10/29/2002 11:09:10 PM
Cool! I like the way the room looks with the fish-eye lens and the people in different poses makes for a lot of interesting images.
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
10/25/2002 10:42:18 AM
Lucky you! That lens is amazing........great shot for an ameture...lol! I'm just playing, give me a call so we can go out and shoot.........oh who is that guy?
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Critique By:
heather martino (K:3648)
10/25/2002 8:10:11 AM
oooh scary
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Critique By:
ryan bailey (K:61)
10/22/2002 4:03:07 AM
since my scanner is always dirty and i scan a lot at once i try to keep it clean but since i constantly update my website www.fourfingazco.com my scanner gets dusty buttt... the black lines were accidental and i lowered the size in photoshop and hit the paint tool , but since my computer monitor is dark idont see anything . sorry i will rescasn and reload that picture...
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
10/21/2002 5:37:09 PM
Dan... this is a space for constructive comments... every comment takes up space that could be used for more images.. so please keep your comments that aren't related to photography to yourself, or email ryan.
Ryan... what are the black areas in the sky? Looks almost like the paintbrush tool in PS... but I don't know why it would be used. Great colours in the reflection.
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Critique By:
Brett Gundlock (K:36)
10/21/2002 11:09:06 AM
Tech
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Critique By:
Bryce Hughes (K:2957)
10/21/2002 12:52:19 AM
sick.
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Critique By:
Mark Warmus (K:17)
10/20/2002 8:35:46 PM
Cool shot, the aliens have landed 
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meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net (K:3974)
10/20/2002 5:28:47 PM
very original
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Critique By:
Jonelle Cetin (K:116)
10/16/2002 1:43:12 PM
haha ryan you're a dork
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Critique By:
ali fish (K:316)
10/16/2002 12:16:12 PM
If you want yourself and yourself and yourself to stand out more you need to take this picture with a dark non-reflective background or in a field at night where the flash wont show anything up in the background and if your camera has double exposure feature use this , if not just cover the lense with some cloth between positions.. that way all three of you will be exposed the same.. ..
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Critique By:
Scott Marceau (K:479)
9/26/2002 2:12:22 PM
congratulations ryan, you successfully spelled 'rebel' and 'fuji' wrong at the same time. and who rides these ditches in the etnies video? it looks like the place that wessel rides a little.
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Critique By:
Kenneth Kwan (K:3084)
9/21/2002 12:22:13 PM
I think I'll need to see this just a bit bigger to fully appreciate it. The trees are nice and the light has a nice quality to it. I think a darker sky would really add to the eery mood. Perhaps try using an ND grad.
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Critique By:
Jonelle Cetin (K:116)
9/21/2002 6:46:17 AM
hey ryan, thanks for telling me about this site. i could look at it for hours. you know whats up.
have a good day. i like your first shot by the way.
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
9/21/2002 6:12:53 AM
Just read that article, Kim! Really helpful! I'm embarrassed that I missed it before.
One other update to it is that our maximum upload is now 200k, not 100k.
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
9/20/2002 9:04:26 PM
Oops... and then I send you to an article that says to resize your image to 450 pixels....when really the max size is 640 pixels by 480 pixels.
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
9/20/2002 8:58:28 PM
http://www.usefilm.com/articles/sharpness/
This is an article on getting your images to the correct size and sharpness for Usefilm. It will let us see you images better and give you more in depth critiques.
I enlarged your image in PS, but I think some of the quality got lost from me doing it, but here is what I think you can look for next time:
The cliff of the left side of the screen is parallel to the background cliffs, blending it in too much and taking away the impact of the canyon. Try a different vantage point to get lower and make that cliff stand out from everything else. This will make your image have a major point of focus. The colour looks pretty good for 400 ISO film, but if you want more saturated colours and less grain (in case you ever want to enlarge these!) try going with 200 ISO or slower.
Can't wait to see more! And welcome to Usefilm!
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
9/20/2002 10:24:49 AM
Oops! Forgot to say that if you need help with the size guidelines, check out the "PHOTO FAQ" link in the upper right of the page.
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
9/20/2002 10:22:57 AM
Hi, Ryan! Welcome to Usefilm!
First suggestion (which, I confess, is selfishly motivated) is to use larger images, if you can stand the upload times. It will be easier for the folks on this site to help with their critiques if they can see as large an image as you can post.
Another suggestion I would recommend is doing a google search "photography composition tips". There are quite a few helpful websites out there that explain the basics of photo composition. I'm new to serious photography, too, and I've found http://www.kodak.com/global/en/consumer/education/programs/ composition/photoProgramCompMain.shtml to be pretty helpful, but there are other sites as well.
I recommend this only because the only thing I can tell about this uploaded image is that your horizon is straight across the middle of the frame which is generally not recommended.
Geez, I sound like a know-it-all and a rambling one at that. Just trying to help.
Once again, welcome to USEFILM! Glad to have you with us.
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