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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/19/2007 7:37:35 AM
A very good idea! Well seen!
Regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Dubravko Grakalic
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/19/2007 7:35:59 AM
What a balance and composition in this picture!
Regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Joggie van Staden
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/19/2007 7:33:32 AM
I like it...the only thing i have a little problem with, are his glasses, especially the left eye where the frame of the glasses almost cut the eye....
All the best!
Ruxa
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Photo By: Pablo Dylan
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/19/2007 7:29:36 AM
Very good seen! Good contrast, good light, good balance between the colours, the only thing in my opinion : a larger frame in the upper part. It os too near the edge the window!
All the best!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: abhra aich
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/17/2007 9:01:28 PM
Die Idee ist wunderbar!! Connections - Buslinien, Strassenbahnlinien, Kirche, Wegweiser usw...alles was verbindet...und wir sind noch auf diese Connections angewiesen und empfinden sie auch noch als etwas Natürliches, Normales.Und wieder muss ich an "Pathologie der Normalität" - Fromm denken......Die Technologie hat uns nicht weiterentwickelt...wir haben die Beziehung zu unserer wahren Intution verloren (siehe Spinoza)...so dass wir in diesem "normalen" Netz eingefangen sind, sogar wir das Gefühl haben von diesem Netz abhängig zu sein....
Intuition weiterhin wünsch ich dir!
Ruxandra
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| Photo By: Nick Karagiaouroglou
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 8:00:39 PM
I was thinking..try to catch this wall together with a new one///like before and after composition..:)
All the best!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: arian berisha
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 7:53:01 PM
I personally would have preferred more differentiated clouds and something more from the blue sky in order to give the picture balance and also to see the direction of the light..
All the best!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Srna Stankovic
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 7:46:54 PM
Yes...I had to explore a little..Fousha and Khaled have also this boat! :) I see this boat brings a lot of inspiration! :) I like that you have more contrast on the surface of water so that the texture of the water is being explored..I personally see the picture in this way, if you allow me: more space on the left and more from the cord a little bit more contrast on the boat so that the colours of the boat can be seen in their beauty!
All the best!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Iman Fouad
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 4:43:39 PM
I wounder if in the right bottom corner should not be a little bit cut--there is only the cloth and i don't think it would be necessary to be there and it doesn't have a role in the balance of the composition...
Best regards
ruxa
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| Photo By: Robert Waddingham
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 4:30:01 PM
Marvelous portrait! And his look in his eyes! This soft light, the balance between the colours , the blurred background and the blurred cross...
I like very much your work and how you manage to work with colours...
All the best and inspiration!
Ruxandra
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| Photo By: Robert Waddingham
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 3:47:12 PM
Why do I have this feeling i know this boat?
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 3:38:26 PM
Dear Branimir,
I was thinking a lot at your picture,,,now i know want a want to see: the frame of the window and a part from the street /story in story...
Best regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Branimir Fagarazzi
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 3:24:29 PM
Dear Paul i see you have also a weakness for sunsets! :)
Indeed a classical sunset as txules has said...
But don't we enjoy this and try to shoot it from time to time?!..I also do it! :)
Best regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/16/2007 8:11:29 AM
A chaos! :)
For my taste- more contrast, and also to look for another crop (for example the red object in the bottom left corner shouldn't be there anD also the bottom part ..)
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| Photo By: James Arendell
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/15/2007 11:54:21 AM
The details is interesting , but i miss something..a story...give me one element more..A cat, an animal, an object, a person ...something...an inedite perspective...
All the best!
Ruxa
P.S. I know it is architecture, but try another crop...
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| Photo By: arian berisha
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/15/2007 11:50:43 AM
I would say this is a simple and balanced composition!
The diagonal of steps in the sand from left to right leads the eye directly to the subject! The lines in the sand destroys the monotony so that the picture shows an interesting texture in this part..The dark part of the sand on the left balances the sun...The silhouette is very good with one slight remark - i would have preferred it a little bit to the left - 1/3 -
best regards
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Iman Fouad
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/15/2007 11:40:49 AM
I have discovered that a very difficult picture to shoot it the one with lot of people in it!I like the depth in this picture, the contrast between left and right....
I would have preferred 2 things:
1. the absence of the thing in the left bottom corner
2. that at least one of the 3 persons in the foreground have been entirely shot so that you can see the legs...I personaly would have liked the see the legs of the woman in the right..
Best regards!
Ruxa
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/14/2007 5:46:30 PM
Thank you Peter! I've almost belived you! :) Despite your words, i still think you could have worked with the red diagonal...:)
All the best!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Peter De Rycke
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/14/2007 8:47:49 AM
Taie si lanul de jos, sa ramana numai verde cu galben..incearca si varianta asta....trimite-mi pe mail poza, sa incerc si eu diseara ceva...
Ruxa
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/14/2007 8:28:01 AM
I like the contrast between the colours...Pay a little bit attention to the horizon and also try not to have in the picture half earth - half sky..here for example the sky has nothing marvelous, so cut the sky till you have 1/3 of him...also the bush / try to have it more left or right!...
All the best!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: E. Ioa
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/14/2007 8:00:12 AM
Hello Fabio,
I don't think that B/W is a good choice! I see this picture in colour, but you can give it a try and see how it looks like!
Liebe Gruesse
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Fabio Keiner
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/14/2007 7:34:07 AM
Very good composition, although i would pay a little attention to the red diagonal- in the upper right corner it should be a little bit higher so that you have the same distance as in the bottom left corner...very good balance between the colours, very good tonal range...
I like it!
All the best!
Ruxa
P.S. thank you for adding me as a friend - How do I have this honor? Thank you also for your comments!
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| Photo By: Peter De Rycke
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/12/2007 8:08:20 PM
Ok! Good contrast! Good balance between the orange and blue! But i have problems with the composition - i would have let more sky in the left and i would have cut in right where the 3 windows start...
Ruxa
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| Photo By: James Arendell
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/11/2007 8:09:46 PM
Ich musste so lachen als ich dieses Bild gesehen habe! Es ist ein totaler Chaos! :)
Tja, james du hast dort eine schöne Diagonale gebildet von den 2 anderen Bilder und dem Mann! :)
Dann haben wir noch so eine versteckte Nachricht im Bild: die Sonne, die die Blumen zum Gedeien helfen und der Mann der froh ist, singt. Er hat bei Seite seinen Regenschirm gelassen!!!
Hugs, hugs and hugs!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: James Arendell
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/11/2007 10:50:51 AM
What I have forgotten...also the colours are in a relation of balance...
Warm regards and a lot of hugs! :)))))
Ruxa
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| Photo By: James Arendell
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/11/2007 10:33:05 AM
A very good night Photo! I like the composition a lot!
Best regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Lodovico Ludoni
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/11/2007 10:29:07 AM
As usual it is wonderful what you see!!!
I have problems with the upper left corner, the light there shouldn't be...regarding the right part- the structure of the tree implies curves.. i would have given more space on the right, it seems to be cut out, and gives me the feeling of unbalanced..I have the curve of thee and curve of the shadow on the left and it seems there was something similar on the right...
Best regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: Fabio Keiner
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/11/2007 7:46:55 AM
The title suits the picture beautiful! You have a contrast on the umbrella, which i find very good. I personally need something - a person for example / so that i can discover a story in this picture!
Best regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: arian berisha
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/11/2007 7:43:39 AM
Dear James,
Everybody has his own esthetics, so of course some like the picture, some not. The important is that the author accept his work thing is to be open and to accept it could be done better, if it is the case... Posting pictures in order to get comments or ratings as much as it gets is a wrong path to walk on..We show the picture to share and to improve..better one honest, hard comments instead of 100 without essence!!!
Warm regards!
Ruxa
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| Photo By: James Arendell
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Critique By:
Ruxandra Nastase (K:1501)
5/10/2007 9:43:23 PM
Thank also for the comment and that you took time to look into my portfolio...I uploaded the picture again, so i'm sorry that your comment isn't anymore
All the best!
Ruxa
P.S. As soon as i have some time i will look careful at your porfolio
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