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Critique By:
AJ Miller (K:49168)
4/5/2008 11:02:16 PM
I think there's a wonderful idea here, Robert, but for me it just hasn't quite worked.
A couple of possible solutions that I think would make wonderful images:
- the two girls on the right fully in the frame, with no other skaters, but left blurred as they are.
- the two girls on the right fully in the frame, sharply in focus, with other skaters fully in the frame but blurred.
Other possibilities as well - I hope you shot lots during this session! Sorry to be tough, but I hope my thoughts help.
AJ
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Critique By:
Dan Wilson (K:21104)
4/2/2008 12:39:33 AM
Lovely shot, well done. She has a stunning smile, and you have captured this so well.
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
4/1/2008 3:16:16 AM
Espléndido retrato!
Una sonriente imagen!
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
RC. Dany (K:64104)
4/1/2008 3:15:38 AM
Excellent .
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Critique By:
Mont Vert Studio (K:176)
4/1/2008 2:43:08 AM
Sheila, Thanks for the comment. I posted this quite some time ago so my memory may be a bit vague. I think I slightly cleaned up the grass at the bottom with clone stamp and slightly darkened te picture to bring out the sky. I may have added some saturation, but don't think it needed it. I had wanted to take this shot for a while and that morning was perfect...
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Critique By:
Sheila Carson (K:5924)
4/1/2008 2:26:01 AM
Lovely landscape! Great placement on the building and the horizon. Do you use PS? I wonder (if you do use PS) if you adjusted the levels a bit if you would like the effect? It just sort of makes everything a look bit richer. Well done!
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Paul Lara (K:88111)
3/31/2008 4:40:28 AM
Wonderful freckles and I love that purple sky behind her.
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
3/31/2008 4:40:03 AM
Too much camera blur, Robert. :(
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
3/31/2008 4:33:01 AM
Nice shot, Robert.
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Critique By:
Patricia Ramos (K:301)
8/3/2005 6:16:49 AM
So cute! Great expressions from both of them.
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Critique By:
Dubravko Grakalic (K:25235)
5/13/2004 11:32:16 PM
perfect light
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
5/12/2004 11:03:39 PM
Robert
Beautiful
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Critique By:
Armando Jorge (K:7937)
10/15/2003 8:41:10 AM
Great composition !!
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Critique By:
Emgy Massidda (K:60358)
10/13/2003 12:04:05 PM
I really like this shot. Originality and creativity are always very appreciated. The well chosen colour tones and the effects are great.
Well done, Robert
Regards
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Critique By:
Fabio Keiner (K:81109)
10/13/2003 10:53:42 AM
at a certain speed only colors remain
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excellent abstract refracting
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Critique By:
Mont Vert Studio (K:176)
10/13/2003 10:34:52 AM
Dirck, thanks for the comment. I don't mind your re-correcting my shot. I think it probably look different on your monitor than it does on mine, as my shot is pretty saturated on my screen. With that said, I like your version too. Also, I looked at you portfolio and really like your work, which of course, makes the value of your input that much higher. Cheers! RG
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Critique By:
Dirck DuFlon (K:35779)
10/13/2003 10:02:30 AM
Really quite a pretty shot - reminds me of standing under a tree as a kid and spinning around until I fell down  The colors look a little flat or muddy to me, and I feel the image loses some dimension because of it. I hope you don't mind, I tried a little levels adjustment to get the colors to 'pop' a little more. Nice work!
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Critique By:
Harlan Heald (K:15732)
10/11/2003 7:18:29 PM
Beautiful use of the structures to frame the patch of sky! Well seen and captured!!!
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Critique By:
Harlan Heald (K:15732)
10/11/2003 7:17:26 PM
Excellent composition/capture! The backboard brace forms a nice diagonal!
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Critique By:
Elangovan S (K:10675)
10/11/2003 10:56:36 AM
Great panning effect and quite an abstract. You may enjoy the pictures of Bahman Farzad, great photographer and author of spotmetering book. Chect it out ... http://www.spotmetering.com/handheld.htm
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Critique By:
Fabio Keiner (K:81109)
10/11/2003 8:41:02 AM
explicitely beautiful!
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Critique By:
Sarah Hansegard (K:4332)
10/11/2003 8:25:25 AM
Wonderful abstract!
Regards-
Sarah
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Critique By:
Mont Vert Studio (K:176)
10/6/2003 1:53:50 PM
Here's the second crop. RG
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Critique By:
Mont Vert Studio (K:176)
10/6/2003 1:52:44 PM
Thanks for all the comments and ecouragement. I've made two attempts at cropping the picture as suggested by Marie, et al. Personally, I like the original, although I am now considering clone stamping out the grass. Thanks, again. RG
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Critique By:
Gabriele Pfund (K:11745)
10/4/2003 1:48:00 PM
Very good capture and nice composition!! What do you think of cropping off the dark green grasses from the bottom left? Just a thought. I like it as it is. Very nice!! Regards
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Critique By:
Alberto Agnoletti (K:12811)
10/4/2003 11:55:36 AM
Very nice landscape!!!!
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Critique By:
Armando Jorge (K:7937)
10/4/2003 10:20:42 AM
Great composition !!
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Critique By:
ken krishnan (K:19102)
10/4/2003 9:42:11 AM
Beautirul shot. very nice. Also agree with Maire regarding cropping.
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Critique By:
Joao Vasconcelos (K:2163)
10/4/2003 8:46:33 AM
Very good!
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Critique By:
Kaj Nielsen (K:15279)
10/4/2003 8:43:34 AM
I like this one, great sharp, Excellent compoced, excellent light, excellent color. Regards Kaj Nielsen
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