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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
8/18/2004 4:49:27 PM
Well done - I really like the asymmetry between the distant bath tub and the horse, and the heavy sky seems to bring a dark mood to the image.
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| Photo By: marcin klepacki
(K:944)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
8/6/2004 7:49:25 PM
Very well done - excellent lighting and color!
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| Photo By: Pavel Beran
(K:-30)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
7/26/2004 10:28:31 PM
Nice composition and lighting - the highlights and shadows seem especially unusual.
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| Photo By: Jorge González
(K:171)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
7/26/2004 10:19:42 PM
I really like the colors in the scene you've captured. Next time, I'd recommend bringing the red flowers (berries?) into focus. They are distracting out-of-focus, but I really like the presence of red they offer in the corner of the frame.
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| Photo By: Nirvan Nino
(K:-3)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
7/26/2004 10:14:46 PM
Wow! Well done... The angle of the horizon is almost dizzying.
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| Photo By: Jim Goldstein
(K:21230)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
7/21/2004 4:34:27 AM
Very nice... Looks like it could've been taken on a very cold, snowy day.
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Photo By: Howard M. Parsons
(K:3496)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/9/2004 10:00:07 AM
Nice still life, Antonio. The lighting and composition are well done. My only quibble would be the very slight softness of the paint roller's shaft near the foam roll. Perhaps a touch more depth would fix it?
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| Photo By: Antonio Trincone
(K:23167)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/9/2004 9:51:06 AM
Palermo... this image really sets the stage for an interesting story with the model, lighting, and pose. To me, the bench is a distraction because it seems somehow flimsy and cheap, incongruous with the rest of the image. I'd like to see this same pose and lighting, but with a prop that carries more weight, perhaps something in concrete or stone. Of course, I'm sure that's what was available at the time - I know how that goes!
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| Photo By: T-zone Palermo
(K:2124)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/9/2004 9:17:17 AM
Agus... very nice! You've done an excellent job with the lighting, model, and pose. The frame seems a little tight to me, though. Perhaps a step back? Just my two cents.
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| Photo By: AGUS DWIANTO
(K:-14)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/9/2004 7:26:30 AM
Very interesting... The leg almost appears to have been discarded by its owner, and it's just lying there like rubbish. Well done, Brian.
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| Photo By: Brian McGloin
(K:22)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/8/2004 1:42:28 PM
The whole structure looks tortured. If only walls could talk... Well done, Adam.
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| Photo By: Adam Mamok
(K:146)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/8/2004 11:33:12 AM
Well done, Marcin. I don't think she'll be alone for long... 
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| Photo By: Marcin Kopacz
(K:62)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/7/2004 9:57:02 PM
Marcel... Nice! Perfect composition for the square format. Well done!
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| Photo By: Marcel Laurens
(K:3654)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/7/2004 1:19:13 PM
Diana... Just taking a moment to peruse your portfolio... Lots of good work to choose from, but this really stood out. Excellent depth; the colors of the background reinforce the subject as well.
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| Photo By: Diana Cornelissen
(K:26437)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/7/2004 1:12:24 PM
Chuck... Just flipping through your portfolio. There's lots of good work here, but for me, this frame really stood out (probably due to the unique perspective). Definitely on my "favorites" list.
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| Photo By: Chuck Freeman
(K:13616)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
1/4/2004 8:29:01 AM
Well done, Jose. My only nitpick: The flesh toned wall behind the model's right side offers little contrast.
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| Photo By: jose da silva
(K:213)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
4/18/2003 12:51:07 PM
Hi Anthony - your photo really has a nice mood. Personally, I would like to see all the branches in sharp focus.
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| Photo By: Anthony Smith
(K:25)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
3/12/2003 12:44:36 PM
Well done, Shai. The birds were very cooperative to line up so nicely like that!
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| Photo By: Shai Ritblatt
(K:3755)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
3/12/2003 12:39:53 PM
Thanks all for the comments. I will be keeping my eye out for this kind of scene in the future!
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| Photo By: Timothy Sherburne
(K:599)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
3/12/2003 12:20:59 PM
Well done, Ekkehard. It has an "infrared film" quality to it. Did you use an filters on this?
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| Photo By: Lilywhite Lilith
(K:1809)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/25/2003 1:18:52 PM
Thanks for the comments. I'm also pleased with the composition; the addition of some texture in the sky would be nice. Hopefully there will be some days this summer with some small fluffy clouds.
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| Photo By: Timothy Sherburne
(K:599)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/20/2003 12:39:52 PM
Fine pic w/ interesting composition. I may borrow this next time I'm out looking for wildlife!
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| Photo By: Gustaf L Bjerne
(K:245)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/20/2003 12:34:46 PM
Thanks for the comments. Yes, AJ, I agree: there could be more balance between the highlight and shadow.
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| Photo By: Timothy Sherburne
(K:599)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/20/2003 12:31:57 PM
Nice shot - sharp, well composed, good color and exposure. Getting the rider's right arm in the frame would push this over the top!
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| Photo By: Danie van Jaarsveld
(K:148)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/20/2003 12:22:54 PM
Well done - the softness of the clouds offsets the rough texture of the stonework.
Richard wrote: " I had to do something with the gray overcast sky..." Does this mean those are PS clouds? They work, IMO.
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| Photo By: Richard Wells
(K:310)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/19/2003 11:35:40 AM
Excellent, Pat. I notice your entire portfolio has many examples of images with fine composition as well as emotion.
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/19/2003 10:01:22 AM
Well done - what kind of lighting did you use?
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| Photo By: Wallace Rollins
(K:149)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/18/2003 2:24:33 PM
Excellent composition and mood. Was it possible to have more detail on the man's face?
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| Photo By: Bulent Ahiskal
(K:1251)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/17/2003 1:13:43 PM
The rain makes this a lively, active image. Well done!
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Timothy Sherburne (K:599)
2/17/2003 1:09:54 PM
Awesome in every way but my eye is drawn to that jet trail. Curses!
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| Photo By: Phil Williams
(K:571)
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