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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
11/19/2003 3:40:19 PM
Harry,
This is one of the best moto action shots I've seen. a big part of the intrest for me is you can actually see the riders eyes.
nothing like a power wheely out of an apex to get the blood pumping
thank you for sharing
Rich M (former Am-roadracer and still road bike junkie)
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| Photo By: Harry Eggens
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
11/19/2003 3:36:33 PM
Matt,
I like found object shots like this. did you edit any of the tones in any programs? and about what time of day was this shot taken
thank you for sharing
Rich M
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| Photo By: Matt Norman
(K:133)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
6/22/2003 6:20:26 PM
Naren,
Great colors, and detail. I have never tried any long exposures. this makes me want to try it. only thing i see is it is slightly tilted to one side (VERY slightly).
Thank you for sharing.
Rich M
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| Photo By: Naren Kunhody
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
6/17/2003 5:17:07 AM
Howdy Brandon,
Not a bad shot, just wish there wasn?t so much empty space above the subject and that the feet did not get cut off. Also more of a composition question then critique, would it have been more or less effective to leave more room leading the subject (to the left)
I enjoyed your portfolio.
Thanks for sharing
Rich M
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| Photo By: Brandon Brown
(K:25)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
6/13/2003 12:16:46 PM
Chris,
Good to hear from you. now that you mention it the two flowers do blend together to much. I have to teach myself to be more aware of whats around (in front and behind of) the focal point in a photo. as far as clarity and depth goes this scan doesnt do the print much justice still trying to figure that one out.
thank you for your time
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| Photo By: Richard Moore
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
6/11/2003 5:27:52 PM
Tenuis,
I like the flower. I only wish the whole flower was in focus (looks a little soft to me). I think just a stop or two more would have given a little better DOF and still kept the back ground soft.
Thank you for sharing
Rich M
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
6/11/2003 5:19:56 PM
Carole,
Tough shot to get becuase of the very dark shadows, I wish I could see more of the detail of the church. Besides fill flash is there any way to better balance very light to very dark parts of a photo? I know it (fill)would not have changed things in this shot becuase it looks like you where a good distance away. I do like that you got the people in the door arch.
Thank you for sharing
Rich
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| Photo By: Carole Bradford
(K:10715)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
5/22/2003 10:02:19 AM
Gail,
Good Photo, all the elements tell a story. I would only stopp down a few stops to increase the DOF so the story elements are all sharply focused (the basket, stool/bench on steps and person. Only my opinion for what its worth. but a very nice shot non the less.
thank you for sharing
Rich M
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| Photo By: Gail Lovely
(K:72)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
5/14/2003 10:55:19 AM
Monica,
I love this photo, very well done and thank you for posting it. do you process your own film?
Rich M
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| Photo By: Monica Riveiro
(K:836)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
5/14/2003 10:22:29 AM
you can almost get what this cat is thinking
Very well done
Rich M
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| Photo By: Mario Iannantuono
(K:47)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
5/14/2003 7:18:39 AM
Barry,
Original way to see the mundane for more then it is.
Nicely done
Rich M
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| Photo By: Barry Walthall
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
5/14/2003 5:08:19 AM
Great photo Jim, no clutter, simple, tells a good story. Some of the things I need to practice more in my own shots, Thank you for sharing. Rich
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| Photo By: Jim Fuglestad
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
3/19/2003 10:25:33 AM
Andrej,
I've taken a few shots like this but i like yours much better. I always wonder where the tracks are goin and wht kind of adventure it will lead to.
thanks for sharing
Rich
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| Photo By: andrej vovko
(K:5)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
3/3/2003 3:43:47 PM
Scott, I like the shot. the subject is nice, a good find. but agree with GJ on the over exsposure and his good advice(now if only i can remember to follow it myself). Thank you for sharing. Rich
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| Photo By: Scott Labrusciano
(K:16)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
3/3/2003 3:36:27 PM
Martina, Great shot. makes me want to find out whats around the corner. thanks you sharing. Rich
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| Photo By: martina cartoni
(K:233)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
2/28/2003 8:31:42 AM
Taras, I love 6x6 images, just got an old beat up yashicamat 124G but it still works great. I like this picture a lot. Only thing I might have done different is a little less water and a little more sky to move the horizon out of the center of the frame. Well done and thank you for sharing it.
Rich
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| Photo By: Taras R. Hnatyshyn
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
2/28/2003 8:22:08 AM
Randy,
I like the colors, Did you take any other shots of this to experimenting where the light is coming from. something about the shadows throws me a little. I like the idea of the strong shadows. If the light was more towards the center of the items (where you have it but a little more to the left). What would that do to the shadows?
Thank you for sharing your Photo
Rich
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| Photo By: R M D
(K:686)
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Critique By:
Richard Moore (K:486)
2/27/2003 8:19:05 AM
Paul,
I love pictures that capture a small part of the whole, we tend to see everything in it's entirety and miss out on some interesting details. Tough to get bright reflections and black to come out well. but nicely done. Question from the amateur that I am. If you stop down and use fill flash Would it balance out the exposure in a shot like this?
good job,
Rich
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| Photo By: Paul Brogden
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