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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/16/2004 7:15:37 PM
nice and sharp and clear with excellent detail and exposure...just wish you had the rest of that right wing...but oh it is sharp and detailed....
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Photo By: Jim F
(K:8859)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/16/2004 7:13:44 PM
This is nice and sharp and clear...I think I might convert this to black and white and go from there with a bit of selective toning
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| Photo By: Rick Mathewson
(K:115)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/16/2004 7:06:57 PM
your exposure was great...details in the feathers show and the snow is well exposed too...wish for a bit more light in the eye...a good composition and a good capture
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| Photo By: Jim F
(K:8859)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/16/2004 7:02:34 PM
this is a grat image Jim...I have never been there for the sunrise but i have been to the top and you captured that crater well...I love the clouds below the mountain top and I love lens flare...it just seems so appropriate for the image...good color and composition
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| Photo By: Jim Goldstein
(K:21230)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/16/2004 6:58:15 PM
an excellent composition...like the fading sunset colors in the background...seems to be a good place to rest the eye...sharp, detailed and good framing...you managed good exposure despite the low light...excellent
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| Photo By: Bob Tomerlin
(K:5460)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/9/2004 8:07:00 PM
Hi Lori...very behind in my commenting so I am trying to catch up...
The image of the Hawk is great...sharp and detailed with a good pose...though I would have liked a softer background with a bit shallower dof...my only nit is the framing here...it just pulls the eye away and off your subject...I'd be tempted to go with something much thinner and more neutral
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| Photo By: Lori Stitt
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/9/2004 8:03:01 PM
a little less at the top and this is perfect...could sharp, detailed candid...and once again I'd be so tempted to go with the black and white just to keep focus on the moment...
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| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/9/2004 8:01:18 PM
an amazing image Jon...I think we tend to forget the small miracles as they grow...look at the size of the head in proportion tothe hand...a very high impact image...I'd be tempted to try it in BW for one reason...take away all the color and you are left with the emphasis on the hed the hand and the tiny miracle...excellent image...
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| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:53:50 AM
nice sharp detail in the center of the flower..an enlargement of that area might be good...compositionally I think you could use just a bit more room on the sides and perhaps the bottom...colors are bold an bright and presentation with black enhances the image
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| Photo By: David Moore
(K:333)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:50:35 AM
I have no problems giving this straight 7's...the image of the bird is sharp and the colors and post work serve to enhance the image to an artistic photograph...beautifully rendered and a joy to view...
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| Photo By: Terry Greenwood
(K:1127)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:48:20 AM
Composition and colors are good, but would sure like to know details, once again...that's howmany of us learn...would also love to see original of this as photo
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| Photo By: Lori Stitt
(K:75282)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:46:35 AM
maybe a grab shot...but a well edited one...would love to know the details of any post work...nice warm colors and good composition
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| Photo By: Lori Stitt
(K:75282)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:44:24 AM
wonderful toning and excellent post work retaining the colors...I knew the camera before i saw it ...it really has it's own look and feel...the composition is good and the expressive eyes are fantastic...I might try a crop, cropping just up to her little finger...excellent image
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| Photo By: Melissa Schalke
(K:2070)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:41:16 AM
I really like the post work on this image...good detail captured and presented by fading out the edges...excellent image
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| Photo By: luisa vassallo
(K:28230)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:39:23 AM
composition is good...just a bit more depth is needed as you begin to soften up towards the background, especially the bridge of the nose...the jewelry appears to have captured a bit too much light tones are good and clarity is good
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| Photo By: Luiza Fernandes
(K:17)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:36:52 AM
this is such a good composition...with good tones...I think the lighing could have been just a bit better...but knowing how hard those dark faces are I think you did well...i love the detail of the wiskers and i love that you got both eyes...an excellent image...
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| Photo By: Luiza Fernandes
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:30:34 AM
sounds like you have fun in the darkroom....I like the tones and clarity of the peppers...I can't say that the scratched look adds a lot to the image, though i understand the framed look, I do think it detracts from your main subject...
just curious...but how come you left a "?" with no comment, on my image "Into the Light" ?
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| Photo By: justin akard
(K:221)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:26:22 AM
an excellent image with good color...good depth...at first i thought the image was tilted, but i see it is only the shack as your horizon is nice and straight...an excellent capture of the sky
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| Photo By: Donna Johnson
(K:9906)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:24:07 AM
an excellent composition, I imagine that this image is better in person than uploaded...here it appears a bit soft, but between scan and uploading tht is bound to happen...the lighting in the upper right is a bit out...but the depth here is quite good...a nice meandering composition with a good perspective
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| Photo By: James Court
(K:59)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:17:32 AM
the dof and clarity on Sanjoob is excellent....however, the cage and the background distracts from the wonderful detail you have captured in his face...
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| Photo By: Rawabi Al-Nuaimi
(K:15659)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 11:14:27 AM
an excellent image with very good lighting...you captured highlights in the hair whithout blowing them out...I like that you still see detail on the image left side in the shadows...good composition with excellent clarity and detail...wonderful tones...
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| Photo By: Mikael Leijon
(K:2224)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/6/2004 10:02:28 AM
A beautiful capture of the egret complete with breeding plummage...the reflection is excellent showing just a few ripples...the exposure on the bird is a bit hot, lacking in detail...but these guys are hard to get exposed just right...however, the composition is stunning...especially with the reflection and some gentle background that fades to dark...
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| Photo By: Jim F
(K:8859)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/4/2004 2:58:38 PM
FOR AS CUTE AND CUDLEY AS THESE GUYS APPEAR YOU SURE CAPTURED A GRUMPY LOOKING ONE...DID YOU WAKE HIM?...THAT'S WHAT HE REMINDS ME OF...EXCELLENT BLACK AND WHITE TONES ...GOOD DETAIL (sorry about the caps...)
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| Photo By: Carole Bradford
(K:10715)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/2/2004 8:01:59 PM
That's quite a control you have over the dof there...excellent composition and a very natural image...good, simple presentation...good detail where it should be
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| Photo By: Miklos Schneider
(K:131)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/2/2004 7:59:36 PM
the wall and the window have so much detail, texture and color, that I wonder about cropping a bit off the bottom so that there are just enough branches to show snow, but so that the eye remains on the detailed wall...
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| Photo By: Dubravko Grakalic
(K:25235)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/2/2004 7:56:15 PM
you are quite good at capturing animals...good exposure and detail and a super dof...giving all the detail to the face...an excellent image
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| Photo By: Rawabi Al-Nuaimi
(K:15659)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/2/2004 7:54:45 PM
I love it this way too...I have two "Beauties" sleeping on my desk right now, mine are 10 year old males...and I do find that in order to capture the Siamese colors, I often over expose the background...beautiful detail and a beautiful pose
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| Photo By: Rawabi Al-Nuaimi
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/2/2004 7:49:22 PM
a good composition ...a slight bit of artifacting around the head...but you caught a good pose of the white crowned sparrowtip to tail...
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| Photo By: Rick Mathewson
(K:115)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/2/2004 12:05:23 PM
Good execution on this...the black and white is perfect for the subject...and your added comment about being "out of tune" makes it all work
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| Photo By: Monty Emken (Ostracon X)
(K:4804)
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
2/1/2004 12:26:56 PM
a beautiful and warm image...good depth and good exposure...the only thing you might want to do is correct the horizon by a degree or so clockwise
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| Photo By: Ellen Havrilla
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