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Critiques From Dianne Herrmann
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Critique By:
Dianne Herrmann (K:32)
7/2/2003 8:51:22 PM
WOW - You are a very talented photographer! I really like the lighting aspect - it creates a very cosy feel. I feel like I'm at home when I look at this photo, yet this is something so simple. Reminds me of being near a fireplace in a cottage...so that is why it appeals a lot to me. However, the originality of the banana itself - being still-life is not that original...which is why I only ticked 'good'. I believe perhaps you could try using height to create something a lil offbeat...for example, a long wire as a pole...on the table...(something that is not a typical object such as fruit or plant). Hope I am being clear here!! winks
Strawberry yours, tHe StRaWbErRy TeMpTrEsS!!
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Critique By:
Dianne Herrmann (K:32)
7/2/2003 8:37:14 PM
This is a brilliant photo!! I found this to be rather unique considering how the top half of the photo is really busy while the bottom half is a lot more simple and plain. This gives it balance - and the composition is excellent. What makes this picture particularly striking is how all the birds flock together with the wings flapping. I particularly like how the wings look blurry BUT...the birds are a lil blurry too. Perhaps try next time, try to make the birds look sharper but make the wings look blurry - if you are willing to try that challenge! winks The shadows on the sand gives the photo a really nice ending. I cannot find much faults except the fact that, the lighting could be a tiny little lighter...it does look a little dark...! Congrats for creating such a beautiful photo!
Lots of Cheers, The StRaWbErRy TeMpTrEsS
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