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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
3/22/2006 5:24:53 PM
Great shot! No complaints here.
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| Photo By: James Bardolph
(K:36)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/9/2005 11:09:17 PM
That's some damn fine aluminum siding!
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| Photo By: Billy Houck
(K:2725)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
8/26/2005 4:25:51 PM
Personally, I'd burn in the clouds a bit.
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Photo By: Craig Nisnewitz
(K:625)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
8/5/2005 7:11:37 PM
Really nice work.
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| Photo By: Andrea Musi
(K:1622)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
8/5/2005 6:03:51 PM
Fantastic.
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
(K:423)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
7/27/2005 11:20:21 PM
Fantastic. I love 3200.
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| Photo By: Jeff Michalek
(K:139)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
7/25/2005 10:19:38 PM
lovely work
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| Photo By: al lapkovsky
(K:239)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
7/18/2005 5:55:44 PM
Fantastic. I usually despise borders on digital shots, but the one you use here works really well.
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
(K:423)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
6/24/2005 6:31:24 PM
Nice shot. Funny how such a common subject can look so different from various perspectives. I have a shot of the same ferris wheel here:
http://www.usefilm.com/image/825804.html
cheers
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| Photo By: bob zuber
(K:185)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
6/24/2005 5:39:49 PM
Nice photo, just needs to be tilted to the right a bit...
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| Photo By: Kursat Oner
(K:1580)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
6/24/2005 4:40:03 PM
Wonderful shot. I can't believe no one has commented.
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| Photo By: Dorival Moreira
(K:329)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
6/16/2005 5:30:43 PM
wonderful shot
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| Photo By: Herumanto Moektijono
(K:73)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
11/4/2004 6:48:55 PM
I like it, but I can't tell what that lumpy mass is in the lower right portion, and that bugs me.
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| Photo By: Luiz Luxvich
(K:287)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/29/2004 10:09:05 PM
Creepy.
Nice shot though.
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| Photo By: John Woodbury
(K:8)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/29/2004 10:02:44 PM
How about "Edgar"?
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| Photo By: Larry Fosse
(K:66493)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/29/2004 9:40:44 PM
For the sake of argument, other than a technical reproduction, what's the value in photographing somebody else's art? You're only reproducing what somebody else has created. It's like recording the symphony and then telling people you're a musician.
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| Photo By: Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
(K:96391)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/21/2004 10:59:58 PM
Few people will realize how nice of a shot this is. Good job.
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| Photo By: Ken Alexander
(K:3905)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
8/27/2004 6:49:08 PM
I think the crop needs to show a bit more of her left eye. The sliver of iris is a bit disconcerting as is.
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| Photo By: Sigit Prasetio
(K:354)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
8/27/2004 5:52:14 PM
Nice work & well executed. The empty candle-holder and madonna are interesting details, and beg for the viewer to construct a narrative interpretation.
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| Photo By: Ewa Brzozowska
(K:391)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/23/2003 2:55:39 PM
I agree with Roderick - there's no drama. It's just a model holding a knife. Ideas:
1) She's a dancer right? There could be some motion.
2) A setting other than studio-white background .
3) A more unique pose, maybe some expression in her face.
4) Anything to bring tension into the scene.
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| Photo By: Andreas Niggemann
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/23/2003 2:41:21 PM
Technically, it's not a bad photograph. Compositionally, the harp is a bit odd and it took me a moment to realize what it was, and the strings are causing some weird banding. Perhaps a subtle light source directed on the strings would help this. When it it comes down to it, it is pretty comical.
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| Photo By: John Stalter
(K:66)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/22/2003 2:56:56 PM
Her face looks a bit "stretched", I'm wondering if you probably used too short of a lens length. would be better to user a longer lens and step back away from her more.
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| Photo By: Hanna Derecka
(K:74)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
10/15/2003 3:57:39 PM
ahem, the building would be The Experience Music Project.
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| Photo By: Julien Reveillon
(K:87)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/19/2003 3:54:48 PM
the lines don't actually follow the contours of her face, so it doesn't appear that they are actual shadows falling on her. i'm not sure if that was the intent or not, so it isn't criticism, just an observation. nice portrait though.
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| Photo By: Haleh B
(K:3741)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/19/2003 11:50:09 AM
lighting is good, agree w/ richard on backlighting (or different color background?)
would also recommend a softening filter
to be extra picky: bright red shirt + red hair w/ blond streaks = not so good, the red hair goes dead and the blond streaks start to go green (especially towards the bottom where they're directly against the red shirt). a more neutral color shirt would solve this. if you have time to experiment, a slightly green shirt might be nice. (i'm not how this might affect skin tones though)
cheers, and post more.
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| Photo By: Jim Harrison
(K:56)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/18/2003 5:03:16 PM
very nice. might be interesting in this situation to throw in some rear-sync flash.
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| Photo By: San
(K:34)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/18/2003 4:06:37 PM
my goodness, that poor child wants its neck back!
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| Photo By: Ian T
(K:114)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/17/2003 9:53:20 AM
nice photo, but it bothers me that it's tilted
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| Photo By: Rolf Rock
(K:2964)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/12/2003 10:48:02 AM
I think you're trying to say so much in one photograph, that nothing in particular is being communicated clearly. Even with your explanation, the combination of elements in the composition is just confusing. It seems to me that each figure could be a photograph unto themselves. Grouped together (especially w/ odd details such as the christmas lights & the tambourine), it looks like the photograph was just taken for the sake of being weird. The only visual metaphor that's working is the body, blood & money, and even then, it's a bit cliché. I would suggest focusing on just one of the issues you mentioned in your explanation - and with your technical abilities, I'm sure you could make a wonderful photo.
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| Photo By: Mark Julian
(K:36866)
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Critique By:
Andrew Barker (K:282)
9/2/2003 9:45:50 AM
really wonderful shot. i wish her necklace was a bit darker and thus a more prominent element of the composition. nice use of DoF.
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| Photo By: Dani Russo
(K:7)
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