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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
12/22/2005 11:44:16 AM
Hi Dave, the light in this shot makes the photo. Well captured and exposed, as the details in the dark un-lit parts still have plenty of details. Good work, and nice composition.
Cheers,
hugo
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Ina Nicolae (K:44481)
12/22/2005 9:56:46 AM
Absolutely wonderful capture of light, Dave. I have a few that I haven't posted yet, and I'm on the same wavelength with you, only I couldn't go into a barn, mine are taken from the outside. I love the bits of light coming through the cracks and your unusual perspective. Creative and original! Ina
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Critique By:
Ina Nicolae (K:44481)
12/22/2005 9:51:25 AM
Hi Dave I just looked at your portfolio, and you are such an original artist! Love the unusual subjects - such as this one - and the way you capture them. Very, very creative!
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Critique By:
andrew rode (K:490)
8/6/2005 4:06:22 AM
you should enter thsi into abstracts and silhouttes... its good, love the red sky
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Critique By:
B Hawkins (K:1529)
6/18/2005 7:17:44 PM
Great shot, Dave. The composition is excellent and I love the lighting and color.
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Carlheinz Bayer (K:14220)
3/3/2004 5:19:54 PM
The original one is good! Where is the problem on that? I like the street scene because he looks like a street musican. The high contrast on the RHS doesn't bother at all because you have a lot of light and shaddow here. I like the head stick in focus. This picture tells a story; with a crop you have just a guy with a guitar. Good one! Carlheinz
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Critique By:
aviva s. (K:346)
2/26/2004 4:21:47 PM
the range in depth and focus really draws one to see the music
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Rocco T (K:4130)
2/14/2004 5:27:20 PM
interesting DOF,..good work!
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Critique By:
oroy (K:34)
2/12/2004 10:14:47 PM
great sport moment.
Best Regards
Robert
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Critique By:
Sandy Stein (K:936)
2/12/2004 2:55:02 PM
Lighten up Dave. As an artist you can't get so upset everytime someone says something negative or offers critisism. It's only their viewpoint and has no more validity than an accolade, though they're nicer to read. This whole thing is suppose to be fun, not a source of stress. Try reading "Creativity and Fear" it's a quick read and will help. Thanks for your suggestion on my photo.
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Critique By:
elias leisring (K:37)
2/12/2004 2:28:02 PM
i think you definetly want to leave out the overexposed right side unless you can burn it in the darkroom. I think the in focus guitar and dreamy blur of the player works well but then i am a guitarist. I like the second crop a lot
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Critique By:
Sandy Stein (K:936)
2/12/2004 1:49:25 PM
Dave,
I'd rethink the photo. I like the crop eliminating the blown out right side but it doesn't help the fact that the emphasis stays on the tuning end of the guitar, while the real subject is relegated to out of focus 2nd fiddle(pun intended).
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Critique By:
Dave Slaugenhoup (K:827)
2/12/2004 1:32:27 PM
One last possible option...
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Critique By:
Dave Slaugenhoup (K:827)
2/12/2004 1:30:49 PM
This is another crop that I was considering to be better.
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Critique By:
Phylip Côté (K:725)
1/27/2004 6:44:22 PM
Wow you doing great too Dave! After i've seen your portfolio i came back on this picture few times , I think is one of your best, the softness of this one is incredible, but a bigger fomat could be better but anyway it's really good. I really like too the contrast between the dark sky and the colors of the flag. Regards Phyl.
(excuse my english, i speak french)
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Critique By:
Hanna Segal (K:13469)
1/24/2004 1:26:10 PM
I don't know about your ex but this is a very cool light pic.
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Critique By:
Monty Emken (Ostracon X) (K:4804)
1/23/2004 3:37:37 PM
nicely conceived...
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Critique By:
Aqmal Hadi (K:80)
1/10/2004 10:21:30 AM
i think sports photography at its best is when there are action in frame, not just some frozen moments...Kudos! This is an excellent shot!
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Critique By:
Andrew Chambers (K:1271)
12/11/2003 10:28:53 PM
Great image I think its spot on
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Critique By:
Dave Holland (K:13074)
12/11/2003 4:41:22 PM
It's a winner, Dave.
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Critique By:
Harry Eggens (K:14804)
12/11/2003 4:40:49 PM
First I will congratulate you with the placement of this image in the University Museum Dave and tell you that this is a superb composed excellent sports action shot. It's great to achieve such. I did compare all three images with eachother and must say that you are right about your choice. For my personal taste the grill on bottom of the other two images is very distracting because the eye is directly atracted to that grill and not like it should be to the wonderful colored lines. The great sence of action coused by the movement of the swimmers and the beautiful soft color tones. And, and that's I think the most important thing, not to the Penn State logo in the background. Hopefully I have been of some help with this comment....Best regards Harry
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Critique By:
Daniel Knutsen (K:3871)
12/11/2003 4:16:57 PM
Really cool! Great effect you got with the slow shutter! You have steady hands!
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Critique By:
Kyle Blair (K:1542)
12/11/2003 4:07:38 PM
Dave,
This is a really great photo! I like the original crop best, it gives me a feeling of being in the water with the swimmer.
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Critique By:
Dave Slaugenhoup (K:827)
12/11/2003 4:04:24 PM
Here is the second alternative to the original. It adds the dimension of the drain on the bottom, but that's about it. I think the Penn State on top is also seen better from the original. Oh, and if you're wondering, this was shot in the morning, so there's fog coming from the pool. Thanks everyone.
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Critique By:
Dave Slaugenhoup (K:827)
12/11/2003 4:00:03 PM
Here's the naked original, no cropping yet.
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Critique By:
Stephen Laszlo (K:2086)
12/10/2003 8:08:16 PM
This is a very good photojournalistic shot and it deserves more attention. Well done!
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Critique By:
Cherri Lanagan (K:258)
12/4/2003 4:50:45 PM
lots of movement, great shot
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Critique By:
Joshua Rainey (K:5069)
11/14/2003 4:24:58 PM
perfect timing. you captured this shot at the absolute right timing...you can tell that the ball is going to get by the defender but at the same time he adds to the suspense of the shot.
i only wish that the background was blurred a little more because the people are a bit destracting...
josh
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Critique By:
Dave M (K:9043)
11/11/2003 9:15:34 AM
Great use of depth of field, Dave. The DOF is perhaps just a tad too small. I also wish for just a bit more symmetry in the perspective. Great idea. Keep at it!
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Critique By:
Gerhard F (K:2820)
11/9/2003 10:05:50 PM
Hi Dave - this is great photo, I allways like compositions where one can see "nothing".
Thanks for your comment on my Florence shot - I increased the contrast a bit in PS but the original is almost as dark, it was the pol filter in the late afternoon. Regards
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