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Critique By:
Branimir Fagarazzi (K:38367)
8/3/2005 2:13:33 PM
Nice
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
8/3/2005 1:12:57 PM
This is the "as shot photo" in color.
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Critique By:
Morgan Estill (K:3786)
8/2/2005 5:52:39 PM
I prefer this shot over the other. Again, I think this shot would look killer if you desaturated the color just a bit, darkened, and increased the contrast. While I'm not sure I would put them in a gallery as is, they ceratainly have tremendous potential. Great work.
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Critique By:
Morgan Estill (K:3786)
8/2/2005 5:46:01 PM
I think that is you were to desaturate the color image just a bit, darken it, and increase contrast, it would be perect.
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Critique By:
Morgan Estill (K:3786)
8/2/2005 5:45:03 PM
I like the DOF here. I lik how the first faucet in out of focus and the second, covered up a bit by the former, is in focus. Very interesting image.
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Critique By:
antonio nullus (K:8540)
8/2/2005 1:37:36 PM
good pespective,Tim.
antonio.
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
8/2/2005 1:24:05 PM
This is the image in it's original color.
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
8/2/2005 1:22:44 PM
I appreciate your concise suggestions and comments Klifton. They are the reason I post images here. Thank you.
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
8/2/2005 1:20:51 PM
Thanks to all who commented. This is the same image but in color.
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
8/2/2005 1:19:33 PM
This is precisely why I am posting these images Klifton. To get some un-biased, honest input. For that I am grateful to you. Thanks for your suggestions and ideas.
I think my weak point may be in naming this series. It is not really all about the faucets.
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Critique By:
Klifton K. (K:3386)
8/2/2005 1:11:43 PM
This is very good. Much better crop... The foreground still bugs me a tad though.
To convey further that these are "forgotton" faucets, you might try going with more of a low-key effect, with selective lighting and focus, to produce an "alone" effect.
As I said before, this series has tremendous potential... Just needs a little clearer message...
If you're happy with it though, by all means, don't listen to a word I say! LOL. Sorry for all the free advice you never wanted. 
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Critique By:
Klifton K. (K:3386)
8/2/2005 1:04:38 PM
This is a beautiful photo, Tim!
I'm absolutely no expert... But just my feelings in looking at this photo... From my standpoint...
I'm definitely a low depth of field fanatic. I'll use the widest aperature available to me, and then add blur and lighting to further enhance this... However... The eye kind of gets distracted and confused on this particular photo, to me.
Your focus is clearly on the faucet, however, whatever is in the foreground confuses things. The brightness level on the foreground is fairly intense, and being thrown out of focus further confuses things, to me!
To me, the crop is too tall, taking further focus away from the faucet itself.
I hope you don't hate me for my comments. This is YOUR photo, convey your message in your way. To me, this photo has too many conflicting messages though.
This photo has HUGE potential, you may play with a few different angles, crops, and work with the selective focus to get your message across. If it weren't for the title, I'd be a little lost as to what the message was. 
Sorry for the long-windedness... Feel free to shut me up at will. LOL.
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Critique By:
mary karimi (K:10818)
8/1/2005 4:00:58 PM
salam dear Tim,.
I love this composition, it's original and creative!
take care yourself and your children,
mary
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Critique By:
Brulim . (K:2987)
8/1/2005 3:42:09 PM
perfect sb and details
well done..
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Critique By:
mary karimi (K:10818)
8/1/2005 2:36:49 PM
wow.........................................Tim,
your photos are valuable , because you interest to do experimental works, it is really good.
All lines, details and perspective direct eyes to the centearl point of this shot.7+++
this is great, keep it up as you can.
take care,
mary
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Critique By:
Asdren Xërxa (K:696)
8/1/2005 2:22:55 PM
wonderful
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Critique By:
Hussam Abdul Nour (K:3799)
8/1/2005 1:25:44 PM
great B&W picture
well done ..
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Critique By:
Nour El Refai (K:12481)
8/1/2005 1:02:20 PM
DOF is excellent, B&W is an excellent choice for this
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Critique By:
Roland Lacson (K:12214)
8/1/2005 1:00:23 PM
Nice still life Tim & the tone is just right. Good job in the DOF, my only comment is the off focus light fixture (Lower Left) in the foreground w/c I find distracting but otherwise a great shot, best wishes.
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Critique By:
ictenbey / Emrah ICTEN (K:16316)
8/1/2005 12:46:14 PM
so nice b&w
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Critique By:
Carolyn Wiesbrock (K:14051)
8/1/2005 12:36:55 PM
Good selective focusing, outstanding work!
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Critique By:
Greg Roussel (K:36)
7/29/2005 10:09:13 PM
Tim,
Love your picture; but Paige needs to talk to the big fella. Give us a call.
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Critique By:
Larry Fosse (K:66493)
7/28/2005 7:49:31 PM
Thanks Tim...I'll try your technique
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Critique By:
David Stokely (K:1010)
7/27/2005 4:56:13 PM
Wonderful detail and colors.
Dave
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Critique By:
Franco Giovanella (K:132)
7/27/2005 3:57:20 PM
Very beautiful image Tim! On my monitor it is a little dark, but I like it so much. This light in her faces are too good!
These girls have a good expression.
Good shot Tim!
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
7/27/2005 3:43:29 PM
Thank you Rajendra.
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
7/27/2005 3:39:57 PM
As always Mary you are so kind to me! Thank you very much.
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Critique By:
mary karimi (K:10818)
7/27/2005 3:38:14 PM
wow...................Tim!!!
what a beautiful shot!
Oh, No, No, NO, NOOOOOO!!!!!!, very bad pic, hahahaah!!!!!
i'm joking my dear freind, 7++++++++++++++++
Amazing macro ...Excellent composition
Very beautiful perspetive and colors!
Well done work!
mary
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Critique By:
Raj P (K:1222)
7/27/2005 3:37:01 PM
Great macro, Tim.
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Critique By:
Tim Morgan (K:1023)
7/27/2005 3:34:09 PM
Thanks very much Klifton!
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