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Critique By:
Warren B (K:7272)
10/6/2004 6:26:04 AM
Great shot. I agree, this is a better version than the colour one.
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Critique By:
Ray Witter (K:6149)
10/6/2004 5:01:11 AM
Jayr,
I think I like this version better than the color version, it places more emphasis on the man working on the boat who is really the central figure, and who expresses the story that the photo is about. the color version has too many distractions which distract ones attention from this central figure.
Good Work!!
reguards,
ray w.
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Critique By:
Carmem A. Busko (K:48785)
7/26/2004 2:18:32 PM
Oi, Jayr, estive aí com Murilo... mas não tivemos a sorte que você teve com o tempo....
Mas concordo em tudo com Murilo.. teu enquadramento (ótimo, aliás. não tiramos daí..)perdeu muito com esta exposição exagerada.
Parece-me que usa a máquina no automático.. tente o manual sempre use uma fotometria menor que a indicada..
Uma abraço!
Carmem
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Critique By:
Murilo Rafael de Souza (K:19577)
7/26/2004 2:09:28 PM
Olá Jayr!
Bonita foto e bom enquadramento dado neste cartão postal de Floripa!
Mas acredito que pra uma foto deste gabarito, ela mereceria um pouco mais de edição afim de deixa-la mais impressiva! Se me permites, tomei a liberdade de fazer uma sugestão em cima desta foto, alterando sua saturação e níveis de cores. Veja o que vc acha!
Outra dica que dou, é que vc poderia preehcer os campos das caracteristicas desta foto como shutter, aperture e location por exemplo, deixando informações mais complestas!
É isto. Um abraço...
[] Murilo
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Critique By:
Natta Leonard (K:1206)
3/13/2004 7:09:48 PM
All I can say is 'beautiful'. Good job.
Regards,
Natta
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Critique By:
Terry Greenwood (K:1127)
3/13/2004 1:50:41 PM
Nice place and lovely photo fit for a postcard
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Critique By:
Alan Armanini (K:5407)
3/12/2004 10:07:16 PM
Beautiful Picture,
Very Nice Composition, Great Colors.
Beautiful Work!!
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Critique By:
CorrieLynn Jacobsen (K:9882)
3/12/2004 8:56:54 PM
wow, what a gorgeous sky! excellent colouring and composition. Good job! corrie
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Critique By:
Antonio Fonseca (K:2666)
10/26/2003 6:06:24 PM
Obra encantadora, clique não menos.
Parabéns!
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Critique By:
Jose Rasquinho (K:12128)
10/26/2003 11:26:11 AM
Excelente registo Jayr!
Bonito enquadramento e bos cores.
Um abraço.
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Critique By:
Armando Jorge (K:7937)
10/26/2003 10:56:53 AM
Bela foto.!! EXcelente enquadramento !!
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Critique By:
Marcio Cabral (K:12496)
10/26/2003 4:04:30 AM
Muito boa captura Jair! Gostaria de estar no dirigível! Um abraço!!
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Critique By:
John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
10/25/2003 9:44:13 PM
Yes! The right point of view for a bridge! Down of it and from a place that you have strongly the depth of field - perspective! Very nice this one!
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Critique By:
John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
10/25/2003 9:43:05 PM
WOW! Very impressive building Jayr! I never seen something like that (with my eyes or...in a photo... or in a postcard!!!) Also nice time with the ''zebelin' of Goodyear! ...xixixi... little bit advertisment  )) but not something bad! The only thing on this one is perchaps the clarity at the sky. I think the noise is little bit strong here so some white spots. I see that you use a classic photo (so I scanner). Perchaps the glass of the scanner neer to be more clear. Also try to scan using big resolution at 300dpi and not at 72dpi. Good photo surely!
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Critique By:
Romulo Lubachesky (K:11836)
10/25/2003 4:07:32 PM
Linda foto, parbéns!
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Critique By:
Pedro Libório (K:36301)
10/25/2003 1:49:16 PM
muito interessante essa construção!
bela foto.
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Critique By:
Paulo Teixeira (K:1004)
10/14/2003 11:46:05 AM
Luciano, gosto da composição e que tenha incluido a pessoa na foto. Não gosto da falta de cor (está deslavada, será o scanner? É possível por software aumentar o contraste para avivar as cores...).
Outro ponto negativo (a meu ver) a foto está exposta para as médias luzes, as altas estão sobre-expostas e as baixas estão sub-expostas haveria que optar.
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
10/13/2003 7:09:11 AM
Excellent shot. The foreground details set the scene very well . . .
Best wishes,
--George
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Critique By:
Priyadarshi Sinha (K:7238)
10/12/2003 2:12:11 PM
nice landscape.
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
10/11/2003 1:43:12 PM
Jayr, beautiful landscape
You can give more contrast
And crop the rand
Regards Teunis
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Critique By:
Robin McAulay (K:8908)
10/7/2003 12:42:21 AM
beautiful building - would love to know where this is..
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
10/6/2003 11:58:58 PM
una bella immagine forse è anche grande ma non rende bene l'idea!!!
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Critique By:
Ragnhildur Ragnars (K:1573)
10/6/2003 9:43:49 PM
Nice architectural image. I like seeing the person there as well. Gives a better sense of the size of the structure.
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