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Critique By:
Jani Salvataggio (K:27283)
11/17/2003 6:26:27 AM
very nice!!!!
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| Photo By: Vincenzo Bruni
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Vince Padilla (K:74)
11/14/2003 2:31:03 PM
Very nice! The composition is simple, but well done. The depth of focus is very nice. The background remains appealing, but is not a distraction.
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| Photo By: Vincenzo Bruni
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Critique By:
ventrix drogo (K:65398)
11/14/2003 6:24:52 AM
Mi pare proprio u bel ritratto, concordo: lo sfondo aggiunge qualche cosa al gia' buon ritratto. Ottima luce, buona l'espressione naturale. Ciao
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| Photo By: Vincenzo Bruni
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Emilio Carmignotto (K:19)
11/14/2003 5:41:47 AM
Nice portrait... even the background is well focused and do not disturb the photo
(Bel ritratto... soprattutto per il fatto che lo sfondo, seppur non molto sfuocato, non disturba per nulla... anzi aggiunge qualcosa alla foto.)
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| Photo By: Vincenzo Bruni
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Critique By:
Vincenzo Bruni (K:126)
10/20/2003 3:37:13 AM
Thank you Becky,
you're perfectly right, it was a "calculated snapshot", i.e. a shot taken very quickly, having foreseen the possible result. Pre-selected ISO was not enough to get a higher shutter speed and I just focused on capturing the image.
Overall result is then OK.
I'll pass your suggestion about repainting office walls to our managers, but I can't guarantee...
All the best.
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Critique By:
Becky V (K:9699)
10/19/2003 11:46:09 AM
Hmmm . . . I'm not really sure what to suggest. It seems to me that this is a snapshot, which really doesn't give you a lot of time to compose a perfect shot. As a snapshot, I think it's quite alright - there's a nice sense of motion as the feeling of the "server" weaving through a crowd of people is captured nicely (which is why I don't mind the tilt/canted angle of the photo). I suppose you could have angled the camera up a bit, so as not to cut off the tops of heads, and a bit to the right, so the big arm in the foreground (on the left) isn't as prominent and distracting. As for the background colours, I think they're fine. The tones are nice and the exposure looks quite good (white or off white walls are easily over-exposed). If you're not happy with the colours, I'm not sure what to suggest, short of repainting the office walls! 
I do feel that the shutter speed could have been a bit higher. That way, your subjects would have been a bit sharper, but again, doing so could lose the sense of motion through the crowd.
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| Photo By: Vincenzo Bruni
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Critique By:
Katia Cutrone (K:12940)
10/18/2003 6:49:13 AM
Se posso ntromettermi, trovo che le linee funzionino molto meglio con il B&N, seppure la versione che ha provato Massimo é un po' scura e fa perdere tanti dettagli.
Comunque l'immagine offre molte possibilitą, ha buoni movimenti e incroci, che non la banalizzano affatto.
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| Photo By: Vincenzo Bruni
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Critique By:
Massimo Di Maggio (K:36342)
10/18/2003 6:40:28 AM
Anch'io penso che l'idea sia molto buona, ma visto che i colori non sono molto vivaci e per evidenziare tutte quelle linee interessanti, ho pensato che potresti convertirla in B&N, aumentare un po' il contrasto, anche se la figura dell'uomo diventa leggermente pił scura, e ritagliarla diversamente per dare un impatto diverso all'immagine. Che ne pensi? Ciao Max
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Critique By:
Andrea Biscosi (K:5387)
10/16/2003 12:46:36 PM
L'idea č ottima, un'immagine interessante.
Si puņ migliorare la luce .
Saluti
Andrea
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