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Critique By:
Kate Hargraves (K:1620)
11/4/2004 4:31:27 PM
The picture is one thing the poem is the other. But you have paired them up in a great caption of who you are. (atleast thats my impression) Now in the order of appearance.. the photo is really great. I like the color - the contrast between the bright sun and the cold blue of nightlight is beautiful. Its really 'hot and cold' and I like the how the person is magnified. I think its a great presentaion to the poem. Now 2. The poem is good. A bit serious, a bit sad, a bit fun, and very real. I liked the feel. I bet you would be kewl to know. Anyway... there is my two cents. Thanks for sharing yourself.. sorry this is so long.... what can I say - my fingers are in love with my keyboard. Have a good one.. hey send me that link to your site.
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