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Critique By:
Blaze Sorbara (K:25)
11/19/2003 9:50:48 PM
There is a sales centre for suburban subdivisions home just to the right of the photograph.
The white picket fences adorn, and define the parking lot. I guess that's all there really is too it.
I hope that answers your question.
cheers.
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| Photo By: ginger sorbara
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Critique By:
Dennis Komis (K:3160)
11/18/2003 2:13:31 PM
I like the compostion but I got a question here ginger - what the hell is this place? - were those fences and pots arranged like this for some reason?
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
11/17/2003 5:21:58 PM
great tones.
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Critique By:
Yukiko Suzuki (K:769)
11/12/2003 5:52:26 PM
Thanks Ginger. Wonderful tone. Nice composition.
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Critique By:
Bob Smith (K:2340)
11/11/2003 10:40:38 AM
Great work. I like the impending storm of suburbia 
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Critique By:
Mário Sousa (K:16985)
11/11/2003 7:18:20 AM
very good
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Critique By:
Dennis Komis (K:3160)
11/11/2003 6:35:20 AM
hm, interesting - I like it.
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Critique By:
Robson Zumkeller Campos (K:4071)
11/10/2003 7:58:46 AM
interesting light and composition
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Critique By:
Donald McKay (K:340)
11/10/2003 7:50:48 AM
Keep the sand!! It's so boring it's great. It makes a great field against which to see the houses. Don't change a thing!
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Critique By:
Aleksandar Lazarevski (K:1285)
11/10/2003 7:46:47 AM
Interesting composition. Keep rolling. Regards, Aleksandar.
P.S. I would crop the bottom a bit more. Too much sand over there, takes too much of the photo.
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Critique By:
Donald McKay (K:340)
11/10/2003 7:46:24 AM
I'm glad to see that Dennis has already found your work. This one is a terrific composition. Great use of color. Bring it on.
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| Photo By: ginger sorbara
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Critique By:
john vonk (K:-24)
11/10/2003 7:37:53 AM
I think the contrast you've given is awsome,good pic.Like the ole river with ? in the bottom left great.
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Critique By:
Dennis Komis (K:3160)
11/10/2003 7:15:49 AM
Good picture Ginger - and a good sense of humor
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Critique By:
Dennis Komis (K:3160)
11/9/2003 4:13:26 AM
I agree with Donald - the low contrast treatment you've given this shot is perfect.
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Critique By:
Dennis Komis (K:3160)
11/9/2003 3:41:35 AM
This is a beautiful photograph Ginger. I love the irony in it - the crooked pole works well in breaking the symmetry of the composition - the sky contrasts nicely with the sadness of the ground.
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Critique By:
Donald McKay (K:340)
11/8/2003 12:57:58 PM
I think the low contrast treatment is terrific. Don't pander to the instant impact crowd at the expense of the material. I'm glad to see this work getting a good reception. Keep those cards and letters coming.
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Critique By:
Igor Herzyk (K:1937)
11/7/2003 12:30:10 AM
I agree with in transit. There's not enough contrast, try curves/levels. Composition - nice.
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Critique By:
Ernst Hermann (K:78)
11/6/2003 10:22:41 PM
very good composition
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Critique By:
In Transit (K:29432)
11/6/2003 9:50:36 PM
The composition is good
The idea of an old river... with the trash of modern day... and the new construction is all part of it...
However the contrast and sharpness could be improved upon IMO
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Critique By:
Michael Alexander (K:5293)
11/6/2003 8:31:41 PM
Nice job, i can feel it, i can relate... thanks
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