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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
2/26/2004 9:08:57 AM
Hi Sven, Sorry I hadn't seen this one when I commented on "Crossfader 4". This is what I mean, taking the shot diagonal. The dept of field is , as with the 4th, very good, but the edges of the crossfader are a bit disturbing. I think a higher camera position would take care of that.... Nice shot, and a very consistent series. Well done! (Don't mind my critisism, Photography is subjective....)
Keep up the good work!
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Lorenzo Conserva (K:2415)
2/26/2004 1:25:55 AM
Very nice composition, well done.
Lorenzo
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Leonardo Bosnia (K:4053)
2/26/2004 1:16:15 AM
...ths is the right mix ... art and thechnics!
Bye Leo!
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
2/25/2004 3:07:54 PM
Nice depth of field, and an interesting subject. IMHO, the composition lacks a bit of tension. It would have been nice, if the shot was taken over the diagonal of the crossfader. In this composition, all lines lead to one single vanishing point, whereas a composition over the diagonal would introduce a second vanishing point. The photo is very well exposed, though. I like it! Well done, Sven!
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
2/25/2004 1:23:00 PM
Looks like a green airplane landing strip. A little variation in the channel volumes might be an idea to try too.
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Critique By:
Neil Dolman (K:26883)
2/25/2004 12:59:24 PM
Hi Sven. Das mal hast du es erwischt! Toll gemacht. Gruss Neil
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Critique By:
luisa vassallo (K:28230)
2/25/2004 12:55:15 PM
very beautiful
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Hanna Segal (K:13469)
2/25/2004 12:51:12 PM
I'm lovin' every bit of it this time! Good one.
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Critique By:
Michel Stuber (K:417)
2/24/2004 12:09:13 PM
Keis Wunder ghöri nüüt, da sind ja alli Häne zue....... ;-)
Schön croppt!!
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Critique By:
Hanna Segal (K:13469)
2/24/2004 9:36:54 AM
I find it very creative (I like the green - grey thing... good color harmony) Try to focus more on the further end... like this the DOF is not very good. I'd love to see a repost.
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Critique By:
Lukas Rueeger (K:221)
2/24/2004 5:30:03 AM
Hey Sven, ein wirklich gelungenes foto, super Idee.
Gruss Bikekollege
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Konstantin Yudintsev (K:3253)
2/24/2004 3:14:45 AM
Right out of "Blade Runner". Very cool!
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John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
2/23/2004 8:40:58 AM
....xexexe....personaly I don't think so! :-) Very good photo Sven. Great capture and good quality and the glass does not do damage at your photo. Very good. Best regards, JH.
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Critique By:
John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
2/23/2004 8:39:37 AM
Interesting. The colours makes this one very original.
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Critique By:
John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
2/23/2004 8:39:21 AM
Interesting and surely pretty original this one Sven. With this angle you gave strong depth of 'field' even on this keybord. Good focal area! Pretty big one!
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Critique By:
Rob Ernsting (K:8899)
2/23/2004 2:12:52 AM
It certainly is a nice objective for an abstract . The DOF is too narrow and the sharpness not sharp enough IMO. I suggest to redo it with a different angle, diagonally. Regards, Rob
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Critique By:
Gaetan Chevalier (K:4188)
2/22/2004 8:46:37 PM
Excellent perspective, very nice shot.
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Critique By:
Gaetan Chevalier (K:4188)
2/22/2004 7:35:23 PM
Great wide angle shot.
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Critique By:
Michel Stuber (K:417)
2/22/2004 2:56:05 PM
Achtung Beno...... TOP!!! :-)
Ich han mir mal erlaubt obe e chli abzcroppe.... So würkts Endlos! Wie finsch?
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Critique By:
Neil Dolman (K:26883)
2/22/2004 8:15:26 AM
Hi Sven, nice idea - unusual. Maybe a little shadow on the part of the bike that sticks out of the frame could have given even more depth to the photo. Gruss Neil
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Critique By:
Bob Tomerlin (K:5460)
2/21/2004 5:25:48 PM
Very innovative use of perspective, Sven. Nice, unique image.
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Critique By:
Ivan Møllebjerg (K:6079)
2/21/2004 2:45:44 PM
Great shot - nice DOF...........I like It!!!!
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Critique By:
Rui Leitão (K:6321)
2/21/2004 4:36:24 AM
Good idea for a dificult domposition!
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Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
2/21/2004 4:21:01 AM
Beautiful scenery, but the graphic design and photoshop work make the image. Very original angle and good detail in the bike, Sven! I like it, well done!
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Michel Stuber (K:417)
2/20/2004 1:21:28 PM
Ja wo häsch jetz die Chräleli wider g'fötelet?? Gseht no guet us, schöni Farbe! Zerscht hani bim Thumbnail gmeint es segi en Teppich.... :-)
Mich stört es bitzeli, dass nöd alli Farbe vo obe bis une durchgehend sind, aber da chasch ja au nüt defür!
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Critique By:
Jim Goldstein (K:21230)
2/18/2004 7:38:38 PM
Cool perspective and very sharp. More interesting lighting would help to make this more dramatic. The ambient lighting works well enough though.
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Critique By:
Jim Goldstein (K:21230)
2/18/2004 7:37:10 PM
Cool night shot! The composition works really well.
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Critique By:
Jim Goldstein (K:21230)
2/18/2004 7:35:12 PM
There seems to be quite a bit of distortion to your image. I'd at least try and get the building on the far right to be parallel to the frame of your shot if I could. The lighting and fog make for a great image!!! All around a fun shot!
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Critique By:
Jim Goldstein (K:21230)
2/18/2004 7:32:06 PM
Reflections aside this is a really neat wide angle shot. I like the extreme landscape format of the image. The lines work very well to bring the eye full circle through the image. Great shot!
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Critique By:
Jim Goldstein (K:21230)
2/18/2004 7:29:56 PM
Cool shot! I think this would be even better if the bottle were off to the right versus being centered. THe lines and lighting are excellent. Fun photo!
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