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Critique By:
Barbara Kite (K:6977)
8/31/2010 3:15:57 AM
excellent job.
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Critique By:
Emin Emir (K:60)
8/30/2010 11:33:01 PM
daha yaratici olamazdin... bir tanesin tapiyorum sana
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Critique By:
Clay Boutin (K:28722)
8/13/2010 5:48:23 PM
Could have titled this "Slowly Killing Themselves" too. Cancer in all its forms has too be the most painful and terrible way to die. I have had 3 immediate family members die from various forms of cancer (1 from lung cancer. It basically destroys you one piece at a time to the point where you can't die fast enough. I think one of the best ways to help somebody "kick" the habit or prevent them from smoking all together is to have them visit someone dying from cancer for 30 days, especially if it is their last 30 days. After watching that, I'll bet they would think twice about smoking.
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Critique By:
Saad Salem (K:89003)
8/12/2010 7:40:37 PM
Dear Riny,Cancer have an initiating and promoting factors scientifically speaking,and all over the worlds and in every aspect corners all the initiating factors have been prohibited,what remains is the promoting factors, among those factors are ,just a very short assay,the animal fats,the smoke ,exhaustion fumes ,whether benzine or diesel,tobacco,spices on certain races,alcohol for certain cancers,many drug metabolites,lead,and the list is very long.
so as you see the tobacco is the least one of those.
best regards.
Saad.
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Critique By:
Riny Koopman (K:102911)
8/12/2010 7:20:09 PM
Saad, Everyone knows that smoking can cause cancer when you get older, but did you know that it also has bad effects on your body right now?
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Critique By:
Saad Salem (K:89003)
8/12/2010 6:56:15 PM
as a smoker ,I would call it love of the cigarettes.
best regards,
Saad.
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Critique By:
Nicholas Byrne-Chinn (K:673)
8/10/2010 10:05:45 AM
Excellent, the warmth coming through in this is fantastic. Using this technique with your 'Love' series would really work IMO.
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Critique By:
Nicholas Byrne-Chinn (K:673)
8/10/2010 10:03:01 AM
Hi Claire,
Just a suggestion but considering this is a series called love perhaps you should warm the photographs up a bit in Photoshop or maybe use black and white. Also try using a shallow depth of field capturing maybe just the facial expressions of the couple.
Like the setting it reminds me of home!
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Critique By:
Mirek Towski (K:14880)
7/7/2010 11:36:31 PM
Except for some diagonal lines I don't see here any action. What's missing in my opinion is some element to catch a viewer's attention.
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Critique By:
Besian Hoxha (K:479)
7/4/2010 8:06:32 PM
Great work dear Claire..
Best wishes,
Besian
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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
6/26/2010 7:29:21 AM
a very touchable portrait
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Critique By:
Nanda Baba das (K:78053)
6/26/2010 5:58:00 AM
Very good portrait.
Best regards,
Nanda
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Critique By:
RC. Dany (K:64104)
6/25/2010 3:23:26 AM
Excellent !!!!!!!!!
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Critique By:
David McGill (K:2796)
6/17/2010 12:34:31 AM
Very nice full of action and colourfull.
Cheers Dave.
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Critique By:
Abhi P. Bhatlekar (K:431)
6/14/2010 11:46:35 AM
Nice Portrait..! Liked the carefree eyes..!!
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Critique By:
Nanda Baba das (K:78053)
6/14/2010 10:25:35 AM
Very nice portrait.
Best wishes,
Nanda
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Critique By:
Stan Ciszek (K:56854)
6/14/2010 7:14:42 AM
Great portrait Claire.
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Critique By:
Nanda Baba das (K:78053)
6/13/2010 4:22:28 AM
Very nice portrait.
Best wishes,
Nanda
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Critique By:
Pietro Clarizia (K:8241)
6/9/2010 9:50:35 PM
good one, m8 !
well composed, like tones !
ciao !
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Critique By:
majid masood (K:6931)
6/9/2010 9:47:48 PM
Very very beautiful, nice tone and composition.
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Critique By:
justin ames (K:1860)
6/8/2010 11:48:02 AM
unusual treatment of a commonplace; quite good.
regards,
justin
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Critique By:
Turi cg (K:27715)
6/7/2010 10:34:30 PM
wonderful, perspective view magnificent
hugs
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Critique By:
Gabriel Aguilar Paredes (K:141)
6/4/2010 9:11:05 AM
grat moment you choose to get this photo Claire.
Best regards
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Critique By:
Chad Parish (K:6440)
6/3/2010 7:46:16 PM
Nice angle, the B&W really works.
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Critique By:
Christina Parker (K:476)
5/28/2010 6:18:04 PM
The leading lines direct you up to the foggy sky. I like how you can see the individual lights in a lot of the offices. Christina
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Critique By:
Stan Hill (K:35352)
8/17/2009 1:53:50 AM
The light and pose are nice in this, however the bottle looks half full. Welcome to UF, I will look at the rest of your series while I am sober.
be well, Stan
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Critique By:
Olga Vareli (K:22477)
8/14/2009 8:01:08 AM
I like the dress that shows a controversy.Excellent, I really like this one!
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Critique By:
Olga Vareli (K:22477)
8/13/2009 3:44:30 PM
thank you for replying.I will begin photography lessons in November, I hope I won't find dirty paper , hahaha!As for the technique part, everything was perfect!Nice 'clairefication' image!Keep up with the good work!
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Critique By:
Claire Pitblado (K:184)
8/13/2009 3:23:47 PM
gracias
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Critique By:
Claire Pitblado (K:184)
8/13/2009 3:19:14 PM
I didnt want to cut the legs but the paper of the studio background was so dirty that i had to make the choice (the people in my school are very careless with treating the studio). I definitley agree about showing more feeling, I can remember that the next time I do a similar topic. Thankyou for your critique, I am not at all offended as I value everyone's opinion.
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