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Critique By:
Manuel Bedoyan (K:9098)
12/16/2006 5:17:50 PM
Heiiii! Beautiful subject matter and super lighting and composition. God Bless
Season's Greetings
Manuel
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Jeremiah Murlless (K:-532)
12/13/2006 3:46:10 AM
This is a great pic! Now I want to be there.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Nicola Barbieri (K:18000)
4/25/2006 2:45:32 PM
wonderful portrait ando colors...ciao, Nicola
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
SHABBIR AHMED (K:1171)
3/30/2006 6:50:11 AM
Beautiful image! What a colour! Thanks for sharing. Regards.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
11/8/2005 1:42:13 AM
Interesante y delicada.
Me gusta!
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Tom Ross (K:6453)
11/8/2005 1:31:48 AM
Nice to see unusual vision. Great woork.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Roberto Carli (K:13689)
11/5/2005 9:14:38 AM
Perhaps it needs some more contrast and sharpness,but ur framing works good,well taken!!!
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Etienne (K:4192)
10/26/2005 12:33:45 PM
Michelle,
An excelleent photo!! Great DOF and I love the simplicity of the offered ring!! Bravo!! I have glanced at your photos so far. You are remarkable in your vision. Keep it up!!
Merci du partage.
Etienne
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Nour El Refai (K:12481)
7/14/2005 12:35:23 AM
wonderful eyes, and title is so amazing, i agree about raising the contrast
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Sudhir K. Reddy (K:7583)
7/13/2005 8:02:17 PM
He's a Big Mac alright! Gets a clean bill of health from me )!
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Critique By:
Aidan Brown (K:-324)
7/13/2005 5:55:21 PM
You have quite beautiful eyes, they draw you into the photo. Not so keen on the bottom half of image, and the slight over exposure. I would suggest a crop to focus on the eyes, I've had a quick go (hope you don't mind). Just lowered the overall brightness slightly, and a little USM. See what you think,
Aidan.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Hamed Noori (K:6805)
7/13/2005 1:25:32 PM
Beautiful ...
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
gemini lucas (K:696)
7/13/2005 12:38:06 PM
I love the strands of hair in her face. Very nice portrait!
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Bryan Miller (K:3395)
7/13/2005 12:37:25 PM
Michelle - I believe it is a nice portrait -- it is tight but I believe it works in this arrangement. I do think Carol's suggestions are just right. I took a shot at editing the photograph [hope you do not mind]. Simply increased the contrast and applied a USM setting of 50/0.6/5 [pretty subtle] and I think both improve the portrait nicely. Good work!
Bryan
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Yalda/ loneliness (K:1248)
7/13/2005 10:12:29 AM
very nice model!!with good eyes of course./yalda.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
sanjeev jain (K:8763)
7/13/2005 7:29:31 AM
yes, photos touches everyone life.
i liked the expression on the womans face.
pherhaps many other surprises i will be looking in future of all that u have passed through
i think u will create a many storys through on ur window
sanjeev
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Giulio Rotelli (K:28441)
7/13/2005 6:57:58 AM
Un ritratto molto interessante, bello nella spontaneità del soggetto e nella scelta del b e n che lorende ancor più particolare.
peccato per le dimensioni ridotte del file, avremmo potuto apprezzarlo in misura maggiore...
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
7/13/2005 6:09:51 AM
another fantastic portrait and title
roby
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
7/13/2005 6:09:33 AM
hello..
a mavrellous dof and mood
congrats
roby
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Ron Harrington (K:766)
7/13/2005 5:49:11 AM
Like it, but would like to see those pouty lips.. am wondering if you sharpen it will bring out the freckles more?
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Michelle Ayon (K:33)
7/4/2005 5:31:07 PM
Thank you , I will give that a try. This ws actually a self portrait project that i was working on.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Carol Cefalu (K:8388)
7/4/2005 3:50:37 AM
Very pretty Michelle. I would suggest maybe a tad more contrast and maybe sharpening up her eyes a little...( in Phot Shop with the "unsharp" tool..What about adding some magenta and yellow (sepia) to give is a little more warmth?
Intimate portrait of a beautiful woman.
Great!
Carol
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
7/4/2005 2:40:44 AM
Muy interesante retrato...
Felicitaciones!
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Jin Kang (K:1022)
7/3/2005 2:33:06 AM
Very adorable.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Billy Houck (K:2725)
5/18/2005 4:44:32 AM
good capture
I think.
Pretty humorous composition.
nice eye
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Antonio Díaz (K:2710)
9/10/2004 2:28:41 AM
Very creative! I love the composition and light.. i just think it need a little post-scanning processing (taking the dust off, adjusting levels, etc.)
I see from your portfolio you?ve been in Obregón, I live at 2 hours from there, in Hermosillo.
Best Regards!
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Ben Thomas (K:159)
4/19/2004 12:40:30 PM
love the grain and contrast. Arizona is spectacular.. Nice work..
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Dina Marie (K:-1410)
4/18/2004 8:22:46 AM
Agree with Pat... the composition is lovely but the grain is too much.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Ari A. Alves (alvesari) (K:7733)
4/16/2004 1:16:48 PM
Beauty image.
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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Critique By:
Maria José Barres (K:11276)
4/16/2004 8:52:23 AM
Nice shot!!
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| Photo By: Michelle Ayon
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