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Critique By:
Orcun Kozluca (K:3487)
2/13/2005 12:05:20 PM
Good work. Congratulations!
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/12/2005 11:23:45 AM
Hmm Van, I didn't know you reposted this. Nice shot. I really do love the lighting & shadaows in this one, and like you stated the different age groups represented. But what I really love id the little girl jumping up!!! Keep shooting & posting...maaawaaah! Dottie
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/12/2005 5:20:51 AM
This is a GREAT shot, Van!!
7+
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/12/2005 5:17:48 AM
Nice shot, but it got a bit spoiled by the lens flare ;(
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/12/2005 5:16:52 AM
Is that the Watergate in the distance?
This is a good photo to illustrate how lines lead the eye around your photo, like some tour-guide.
Had I been standing there, I would have made either the right or left side of the boardwalk intersect one of the lower corners of the photo. I'd probably go with the right edge by the water, since it curves back INTO the shot.
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/12/2005 5:13:43 AM
Great exposure, but I wouldn't have left the gazebo centered horizontally like that. Use the rule of thirds and it will increase the impact of your images, Van.
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/12/2005 5:12:00 AM
It seems no one in this photo is in 'Dire Straits', either.
Nice shadowplay in the background; it almost dominates the shot.
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/11/2005 9:00:05 PM
Oh I see it bigger now. Very nice & a white rose for friendship, very sweet. I'll consider it my Valentine's rose, sure I won't be getting any others. lol Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/11/2005 8:58:46 PM
You're kind of maudlin today aren't you kid? lol Nice shot I do like the tones, and yes I'll play with these two & post em' here & there.  maaawaaahh. Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/11/2005 8:55:47 PM
awww, how sad. Very sweet. Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/11/2005 6:19:28 PM
cool shot Vanner, and thanks for the tribute!!! Dots!
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Critique By:
Kelly Anbach (K:4375)
2/11/2005 1:30:26 PM
I love cemetary photos. This is very touching.
Kelly
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Critique By:
Stephen Bivens (K:7308)
2/11/2005 5:15:39 AM
RIP Melville. Nice shot.
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Critique By:
Russell Fletcher (K:1717)
2/11/2005 2:44:00 AM
Hi Van,
I will give your game ago.
My initial thoughts were that it is of some teeth form some cogs, but for some reason my idea has developed into the inside of an old school pencil sharpner.
You have a great abstract eye Van, you should look at developing this, just get in and take some unusual angles. I feel you will find some gems.
About the shot, I personally would have prefered to have a touch of sharp focus to the image, just say so one of what I am calling teeth, to be in charp clear focus. Unless of course this this is rotating.
Love the lighting and the angle. Awesome, will check out the answer that you have posted.
Russell
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Critique By:
Larry Quigley (K:12887)
2/11/2005 1:41:45 AM
Kaleidoscope....colorful picture!
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Critique By:
Former Member (K:4077)
2/10/2005 11:54:58 PM
Wonderful colors! Congrats!
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/10/2005 5:30:23 PM
I like the sepia better. Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/10/2005 5:29:30 PM
Don't know, I'd have to look it up. But you have a cool pic here! Dottie
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
2/10/2005 12:52:18 PM
both actually Dots. Preferably back to back
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Critique By:
Orcun Kozluca (K:3487)
2/10/2005 8:03:48 AM
Nice shot. good perspective.
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Critique By:
Orcun Kozluca (K:3487)
2/10/2005 8:03:09 AM
Interesting shot.
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Critique By:
Orcun Kozluca (K:3487)
2/10/2005 8:02:41 AM
Good work.
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/10/2005 4:32:35 AM
a pretty one! Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/10/2005 4:27:18 AM
you too funny. want to go to Europe or just H&G! Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/10/2005 4:24:40 AM
maaawaaah, a boy after my own heart. Love the patriotic spirit! Dottie
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
2/10/2005 3:56:27 AM
I couldn't decide if I wanted this picture Portrait or Landscape!!! Which do ya'll prefer?
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
2/10/2005 3:47:42 AM
Nice shot Van. Great angle & perspective. Dottie
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Critique By:
Kay McIntire (K:11787)
2/9/2005 3:23:13 PM
I think I like 2- the sepia one. This is funny to see- yesterday I was out taking pix of my son't OLD John Deere toy tractor! It is not quite as old as this one, however!
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
2/9/2005 4:25:54 AM
Hey, I was just playing with this picture in iPhoto, I'm too cheap to have PS yet, anyway... lemme know which you like better...
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Critique By:
Orcun Kozluca (K:3487)
2/5/2005 12:10:40 PM
Good perspective. Very nice shot.
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