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Critique By:
Jose Fagundes (K:79)
1/21/2005 8:56:08 PM
Good composition and colors!
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| Photo By: Van Fitzgerald
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Critique By:
Antonio Trincone (K:23167)
1/21/2005 8:52:32 PM
nice this sepia view with curved path
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
1/21/2005 8:37:36 PM
Very nicely composed . . .
Congrats
--George
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| Photo By: Van Fitzgerald
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
1/21/2005 7:58:04 PM
Beautiful picture, Van. About 100 years ago when I was your age, I took a very similar shot that I prized. Yours is every bit as memorable, and the pink tones are really splendid.
Regards,
--George
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Critique By:
Petri Puurunen (K:3397)
1/21/2005 5:49:39 PM
simplistic scenery. perfect composition, pier on the right lefts room for nice silhoutte of horizon. keep up the good work!
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
1/21/2005 2:04:52 PM
A suggestion--get the best tripod you can afford. You'll be glad you did!
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
1/21/2005 3:23:13 AM
Nice work everyone! Much Much Better than mine, but I'm working on it!
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
1/21/2005 3:21:06 AM
George. yea I needed a tripod, alias I need to buy one. But When I took this it was pitch black so I think it did pretty well. It is pretty small though. Your Picture is very nice I like it alot. Thanks for taking a swing at it.
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Critique By:
Al Ungar (K:4626)
1/20/2005 11:33:08 PM
Ok Van here is my attempt. I did the correction in Photoshop CS. Used Image, Adjustments, Shadow/Highlight and put the scales at 75. I then gave it a greenish tone using Layers/Color Balance (a little red, green and minus on yellow).
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
1/20/2005 10:23:36 PM
Here's a try... Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
1/20/2005 10:09:49 PM
Well, it would have to be the Navy cause a Marine wouldn't stand like that! lol. I'll see what I can do in PS & attach it here when I'm done. Dottie
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
1/20/2005 9:22:50 PM
Oh, yeah, it's very dark! Still, it is an interesting image. I've tweaked it a bit, but the image file itself is quite small and impossible (for me, at least) to provide any good detail. You don't give any shutter/aperture/iso information. My guess is you were pushing the envelope a bit too much. Without using a flash, you needed a tripod at least. Keep at it . . . !!!
Cheers,
--George
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Critique By:
Jose Fagundes (K:79)
1/20/2005 8:43:41 PM
Lovely colours and composition!
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
1/20/2005 7:58:04 PM
Thanks George. In Fact I do have the attached photo blown up and framed in my house. The attached will become a featured photo or whatever you wanna call it my portfolio tomorrow, I've just already uploaded three today. But thanks for the comment! Cheers! Have a great Day!
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
1/20/2005 7:21:00 PM
Very pretty, nice pastel colors.  Dottie
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Critique By:
Kunal Mehta (K:2496)
1/20/2005 7:16:00 PM
Nice colors and compsition.
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
1/20/2005 7:07:28 PM
Beautiful shot . . . This one is ready for printing and framing!
Cheers,
--George
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| Photo By: Van Fitzgerald
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
1/20/2005 7:01:17 PM
Just wanted to add this to my orginal picture. My Good Buddy Dottie took this picture and tinkered with it and I liked the effect so I'm posting her picture along with mine to show a different prospective that I really did love!
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
1/20/2005 4:53:14 PM
I don't think so...
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
1/20/2005 9:30:47 AM
Great compositie and details
teunis
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Critique By:
Rebecca Raybon (K:26654)
1/20/2005 5:12:06 AM
Is there anything else besides diet coke?
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Critique By:
Rebecca Raybon (K:26654)
1/20/2005 5:11:26 AM
Very nice candid street shot. The lighting and colors are good, and you caught enough action to keep it interesting.
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Critique By:
Rebecca Raybon (K:26654)
1/20/2005 5:06:02 AM
I love this. The composition and dof are great. He is indeed a good looking guy. And I love that little dash of pink in the sky. All in all, very well done.
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Critique By:
Karen Ferranti (K:2959)
1/20/2005 4:35:19 AM
Great job. I studied it for a few minutes and you are right. I love the dancing little girl. Great eye!
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
1/20/2005 2:16:41 AM
Hi Teunis,
My email is resqartist@yahoo.com
Thanks for the comments on mine & Van's work! lol Dottie
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
1/19/2005 7:44:09 PM
Aha! It worked . . . And your commentary is fine as well.
Regards,
--George
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
1/19/2005 4:48:41 PM
Nice Candid. Dottie
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
1/18/2005 8:52:13 PM
Hmmm, I think the hand is not a distraction at all, I think it adds to the casual feel of the photo, but different strokes for different folks. Dottie
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Critique By:
Gayle's Eclectic Photos (K:91109)
1/18/2005 9:46:38 AM
Welcome to usefilm!...technically i am not back to usefilm because just moved and trying to get settled and don't have a scanner,etc. yet...but thought i'd drop by to check out your images...this one has excellent DOF,nice lighting and good position of your Daddy (who is a handsome fellow indeed!)his hand is a bit distracting and i think would be a stronger image without it, but if a candid shot, then you didn't have a choice..regards, gayle in the other WA.
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Critique By:
Van Fitzgerald (K:780)
1/18/2005 5:34:11 AM
YOU GOT THE LENS FLARE OUT! INCREDIBLE GEORGE!
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