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Critique By:
Titia Geertman (K:5572)
3/6/2003 6:07:35 PM
Hi Peter,
Glad to see a beautiful picture made by another Dutchie.
Kennemerduinen? Waarom zet je je foto's in dit project? Ik dacht dat dat alleen bestemd was voor foto's die de fotografen van zichzelf maken. Dit soort foto's zou je in project 16 moeten zetten, daar horen ze meer thuis vind ik, want ze zijn bijzonder mooi. Kom zeker terug om je andere ook te bekijken. Ik woon in Zeeuwsch-Vlaanderen.
Sorry folks, just a Dutch chat with a fellow country man.
Have to see more of your pics, just glanced at them and I think they're beautiful.
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| Photo By: peter de haan
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Critique By:
Todd Miller (K:16464)
2/21/2003 5:14:46 PM
nice shot of this beautiful city. i'd probably crop the left side a bit-maybe take that whole tree out. i think that would give it a more balanced look. i think the colors look good.
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| Photo By: peter de haan
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Critique By:
Valeh B (K:890)
2/21/2003 1:37:03 PM
The quality of the picture is great however I do have an issue with the cropping. The image does not seem to be balanced. Good try!
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Critique By:
Jeroen Wenting (K:25317)
2/21/2003 12:14:30 PM
This is indeed a typical scene depicting Amsterdam. In that it is an excellent cityscape.
Cropping out the tree and/or the cars would remove much of what tells someone who knows the city that is is indeed Amsterdam.
Aszal, it's not overexposed. That's the kind of light you get here on a bright winter day, extremely harsh and white.
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Critique By:
Curtis Hildebrand (K:69)
2/21/2003 10:55:22 AM
The tree on the right is what distracts me from the good scene. I keep saying to myself "get out of the way." BTW, did you select the project right? I'm not seeing anyone (yourself) in the picture.
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Critique By:
Afzal H Mohamed (K:909)
2/21/2003 10:29:31 AM
overexposed, with washed out colors.
I think cityscapes have to be one of the more difficult sujects to get even halfway decent at. There are too many things happening all at once and human induced chaos results in many a roll being wasted(i have tried and tried and havent had one shot i could call a keeper-all of my pics really suck!!)
its all in finding the angles, and finding a way to incorporate all those jumbled elements. A studio shot or even a landscape are much easier to tackle i feel.
keep at it
cheers
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Critique By:
Pat Fruen (K:12076)
2/21/2003 10:25:39 AM
I like the reflections, the soft muted colors and the composition in general....but, imo, it would look better with the cars on the left and right cropped out.
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Critique By:
Keith Naylor (K:13064)
12/14/2002 2:53:13 PM
You got a good shot there, the train and the cars on the right hand side are a small irritation, but nothing more.
Keep shooting and posting, well done.
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| Photo By: peter de haan
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Critique By:
Russell Love (K:7006)
11/30/2002 5:14:55 PM
Peter,
I keep looking at this shot and keep thinking "Man this would really look great in black and white." The grain of the wood and the shine of the chrome on the compass would really stand out in a slow black and white film. I would love the chance to do this. The framing is great!
Later my friend,
Russ
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Critique By:
Marleen den Brok (K:374)
11/23/2002 10:19:11 AM
As a frequent visitor of Amsterdam Central Station I know how hard it is to make a beautiful picture of it. Because let's be honest, it isn't all that great (except for the building itself). I do think you are on the right track here. Somehow you've created a certain feel here that I like.
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Critique By:
Anne E. M. Zang (K:4135)
11/13/2002 1:18:39 PM
This is a good face. I like the slight lean towards the camera (or the camera towards you). Lighting, color, and DOF are perfect.
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Critique By:
Jun Ma (K:511)
11/2/2002 9:29:02 PM
It is a picture that can really touch me. Good job!
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
11/2/2002 7:19:32 PM
the perspecitve makes the trees look immense compared the the figure in the back..very cool.
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Critique By:
Miles . (K:896)
9/30/2002 3:46:37 PM
Hi Peter, good to see you.
Miles
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
9/27/2002 7:14:07 PM
Nice to meet you Peter... its nice to put a face to the name!
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Critique By:
Karen L. Hassinger (K:134)
8/21/2002 12:59:21 PM
Nice close up. He (or she) looks sad. I guess because he's part of a circus.
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Critique By:
kennard (K:106)
6/27/2002 11:14:13 AM
It's a nice landscape, but it shouldn't be listed in the "Pictures of Our Members" category. At least I don't see you in the shot.
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Critique By:
Jim Graham (K:38)
6/18/2002 6:43:34 PM
I'll say it again, another wonderful image! You really have a great touch.
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Critique By:
Jim Graham (K:38)
6/18/2002 6:38:47 PM
It's beautiful Peter. Looks like a watercolor.
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Critique By:
richard trager (K:111)
5/21/2002 3:27:55 PM
cool shot! like the dreamy feel with the blur and blues
rich
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Critique By:
David N. VanMeter (K:552)
4/29/2002 5:45:28 AM
I like the concept but if you set the fog aside it seems to be fuzzy.
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Critique By:
Frank Hettick (K:119)
4/21/2002 7:35:47 PM
Peter - Great Shot! I just knew this had to have been taken in the Netherlands! Our middle daughter lives there and we visit her usually twice a year - and I spend most of my time taking pictures of your wonderful country - very photogenic!
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
3/19/2002 3:15:28 PM
There are some things that I would change with this photo... there seems to be a green tint on your subject, which flash fill would have helped to give the woman a more flesh toned face. As well, we see her profile, and I really would have liked to have seen more of her face, instead of her side. This next point could be my computer, but the image seems a little out of foucs.
Now, on an up note, I like the framing and the location looks very interesting... do you have any photos of the location?
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Critique By:
Samuel Downs (K:7290)
3/7/2002 7:00:44 PM
Peter, What a beautiful child, and what a wonderful capture you have here. I love it!
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Critique By:
. . (K:2743)
12/14/2001 4:01:31 PM
Some very impressive work..you hv here peter..
think you misunderstood 'pictures of our members' project..all your pictures are posted under this project.., it means a picture of you...not those taken by you 
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Critique By:
Charles Hess (K:-183)
11/11/2001 6:49:02 AM
Nicely composed, and having her fill the frame adds to the image's impact. Her intense stare is chilling...wonder what kind of hardships she's endured in her lifetime.
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Critique By:
Erland Pillegaard (K:34147)
11/7/2001 9:55:42 AM
Very good this one,like the color
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Critique By:
Petros Stamatakos (K:12101)
11/7/2001 12:44:57 AM
Wonderful image peter! Keep them coming!
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Critique By:
Toni Martin (K:5092)
11/6/2001 7:58:48 AM
Real nice, Peter. I love this type of technique.
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Critique By:
Mary Sue Hayward (K:17558)
11/5/2001 9:52:29 PM
Please tell us more about these photos. They are fascinating.
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