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Critique By:
Dr. Rafael Springmann (K:89517)
5/27/2005 10:05:00 AM
I noticed this photo when I first opened your portfolio, but was led astray by your "Grand entrance."
I read the "about" with great interest. It showed me that you were not merely a "doctor" but also a socially minded person, who wants to correct social inequality and injustice and I fully support you in that.
I think it was a great photographic idea to leave the left part of the frame of your photo open. Symbolically (Please forgive me if my spelling is incorrect) it shows what you want to achieve for wmomen, an open future.
The woman is very beautiful and as you say in your "about", you managed to capture the determination expressed by her eyes and her upright posture.
I look forward to receiving your e mail and to your reactions after reading the first few chapters of the book. Please note that your inbox has to be capable of receiving 1.02 MB. Otherwise, I'll copy the book on a CD and send it to you. In that case I'll need your mailing address, but you'll still be my guest as to mailing cost.
Best regards,
Rafi
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Critique By:
Humayun Rizwan (K:3235)
5/27/2005 9:58:45 AM
Thanks, Judy for ur nice comments. I'm so glad u liked it
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Critique By:
Romeo Victor Sierra (K:325)
5/27/2005 9:33:14 AM
excellent picture
excellent work
cheers
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Critique By:
Humayun Rizwan (K:3235)
5/27/2005 9:23:46 AM
Dear Rafi,
Thanks a lot for the offer. I'm definitely interested in psychoanalysis and would love to read your book. Will send that e-mail tonight. Visited your site.. and I am really impressed by your achievements and illustrious career. It's honor to know and communicate with an eminent scholar like you.
Best regards
P.S: The picture is there in my portfolio.. one of the four that I posted so far! The title is "looking.. out of the box!"
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Critique By:
Humayun Rizwan (K:3235)
5/27/2005 9:08:36 AM
Thanks Pankaj, for ur nice comments. I look forward to ur visit to Pakistan. Be my guest.. whenever u r in Islamabad.
Best Regards
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Critique By:
Hanggan Situmorang (K:24833)
5/27/2005 7:11:35 AM
Great sidelight and portrait. I love her intense expression here. Great story and essay, as well. So meaningful and conceptual. Congratulations!
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Critique By:
Tiger Lily (K:10966)
5/27/2005 6:35:16 AM
The range of blues and details in this image is stunning. Very nice architecture.
Humayun, Thanks for your kind comment on my picture.
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Critique By:
Melody Russell (K:1089)
5/27/2005 5:30:49 AM
What a fantastic photo -- and the title adds to its appeal. I am amazed at the colour detail in the petals. Wonderful!
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Critique By:
Judi Liosatos (K:34047)
5/26/2005 10:35:02 PM
Great idea and beautiful lighting and tones to blend together. Gorgeous image. Thankyou Humayun for your comments.
Judi
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
5/26/2005 7:32:07 PM
Still I find her more beautiful than the Monalisa in my eyes.
Excellent PS work my friend,
Khaled.
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
5/26/2005 7:26:50 PM
Very artistic shot my friend, like a sun.
Wonderful texture and color tones, bravo, another 7++++++
Khaled.
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
5/26/2005 7:23:03 PM
Wowwww... great architecture shot and details.
Bravo my friend, 7/7
Khaled.
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
5/26/2005 7:20:40 PM
Just superb capture Humayun.... I like the traditional dress and the way you didn't complete the fram on the left side is creative.
Excellent work my friend and thanx for the about, regards,
Khaled.
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Critique By:
Humayun Rizwan (K:3235)
5/26/2005 6:46:27 PM
Dear George,
THANKS for the tip. I was not familiar with that technique.. not an expert at PS. I'll defintely keep this in mind next time. I'm sure it'll save me a lot of time too.
This is what I love about this site.. where wonderful artists like you not only comment, praise or critique.. but also give useful suggestions for improvement.
Hope to learn more from you :-)
Thanks and Best regards
Humayun
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Critique By:
Markus Scholz (K:23722)
5/26/2005 3:51:16 PM
What great topic and great realization, Humayun. Thanks for your words.
Regards, Markus
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
5/26/2005 1:47:56 PM
Very beautiful composition. The soft quality of the petals against that strong blue background gives a lovely painterly quality. Well done!
Best regards,
--george
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
5/26/2005 1:45:57 PM
An unusually beautiful and detailed view. The sharpening gives great character to the individual tiles. And the play of the blue sky off those of the structure is superb.
Best regards,
--george
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Critique By:
George Black (K:102014)
5/26/2005 1:42:00 PM
This is a wonderful portrait of a beautiful woman and excellent commentary. The open frame on the left is eloquent and effective.
Following Saqib's suggestion, I recommend also the File>Save for Web technique. If you are unfamiliar with it, choose the Image Size once the image opens; I then put 800 in the larger dimension and then choose Apply. The Quality percentile slider choice shows the file size on the lower left of the image. When you get it to the size required (< 360), choose save with a new name, and it's done--a jpeg that's just right.
Forgive this long explanation, but this technique has saved me much time and frustration.
Best regards,
--george
Thanks for looking at and commenting on my recent posting. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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Critique By:
Nino Z-S (K:1489)
5/26/2005 12:07:44 PM
Bella foto che, anche se non perfetta, rende bene il tema. Intensa l'espressione della ragazza
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Critique By:
Engy Farahat (K:11591)
5/26/2005 11:29:17 AM
Welcome Humayun to UF. Beautiful capture and creative effect.
great composition. nice expression. excellent work.
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ng farahat
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Critique By:
Art A (K:1187)
5/26/2005 9:51:13 AM
Although, I do not see this in my everyday life, I am aware of what's happening. I look at this a a picture of hope. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Art
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Critique By:
Dr. Rafael Springmann (K:89517)
5/26/2005 6:27:10 AM
Dear Humayan,
My e mail address is
rafael1930@bezeqint.net
and not as written.
1930 is my birth year, so I ought to know. The rest stands fast.
Best regards,
Rafi
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Critique By:
Dr. Rafael Springmann (K:89517)
5/26/2005 6:23:00 AM
Dear Humayan,
thank you for the correction. When I thought you were an Iranian, I was afraid it might cause you trouble if I mentioned that I had been to Iran in 1966-7, on my way to and from Kurdistan. I looked for the photo you wanted me to comment on, but it was not yet there.
As a doctor, if you are intersted in psychoanalysis, write to me at rafael1030@bezeqint.net
put Usefilm and your book in the subject line, and the book (1.02 MB) will be sent to you at no cost to you. You will be the second Pakistani Dr. I will have sent the book to this way.
You may get an idea about it at www.drspringmann.com
at which the important parts to pay attention to are Dr. Joyce Mc Dougall's preface (She is a central figure in the psychoanalytic community) and the story of Adam, the first schizophrenic patient whose psychotherapy is desribed in the book, although the latter is a little outdated. The book was written with the interested non mental-health professional also in mind and several UF members have received it per e mail. the last reaction was that it was "easy reading."
Best regards,
Rafi
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Critique By:
Pankaj Arora (K:3752)
5/26/2005 5:48:32 AM
Wow!! Wonderful concept and interesting title as well...nice capture of color with great details....best wishes and thanks for your thoughtful commnts on my pictures. i hope to visit pakistan some time ...
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Critique By:
Asim Roy (K:10051)
5/26/2005 4:16:36 AM
Nice colour tone, lovely composition, very touchy practical fact, we have to accept it and promise to bringh the light of their life, the same story is also implemented to my "Natural Beauty" love, asim
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Critique By:
Paul's Photos (K:35235)
5/26/2005 3:03:45 AM
I love the perspective and angle.. beautiful architecture.. nice work
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Critique By:
Paul's Photos (K:35235)
5/26/2005 2:48:10 AM
excellent photo.. great perspective and angle.. the composition is perfect.. the colors are very vibrant and strong and really add to the overall mood of the image.. nicely seen and captured... great work
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Critique By:
Paul's Photos (K:35235)
5/26/2005 2:45:30 AM
I love the effect... definitely looks like a painting.. beautiful work
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Critique By:
Larry Hammond (K:16631)
5/25/2005 10:31:56 PM
Splendid composition, softness of flower and colors are beautiful Humayun. Great job.
Thanks for your comments on my Posing Pretty, and WELCOME to UF....look forward to more posts from you!! :-))
Larry
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Critique By:
Kevin Collier (K:19076)
5/25/2005 9:55:53 PM
Your use of color is wonderful - the composition is very well balanced. K
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