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Critique By:
J S (K:1806)
10/30/2006 2:28:28 AM
Robert,
Lovely image! Beautiful, crisp and sharp!
I love how you played the DOF here, But I have small dislike...
I love the colors, and the dock playing a role here. My dislike is the DOF on the left side of the photo. I belive it would look better if the first part of the dock was in focus. I see a large blur taking up a large proportion of your photograph. My eye wants to follow up the dock, it's just natural for me... I look where I walk. The blur makes me feel lost and confused. I love the background focus, it is Perfect!! Beautifully done.
It's just the way the DOF created an "L" shape of the dock. I would have loved to see more of that white railings. I expect photos to have a flat plane of focus.
Keep up the wonderful work! I love the colors, the setup... infact everything! But the "L" shaped DOF. It's just my personal preference.
Thanks for sharing this with us! Wish you well!
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| Photo By: Robert Höhne
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Critique By:
Giuseppe Guadagno (K:34002)
10/28/2006 3:53:07 PM
Roby, you capture has surprised the night while it furtively spreads on the earth overwhelming the last, now tired rays of the sun. But the sun still defends the last castle up there, where I would be now.
A beautiful picture!
Have a pleasant weekend Roby.
Giuseppe
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| Photo By: Roberto Arcari Farinetti
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Critique By:
Partha Pal (K:11619)
10/28/2006 12:22:53 PM
Dear Deb,
Brilliantly captured.I alwayas like the views of Mt. Khangchendzonga.Its not easy to retain the colours of the snow but you have done that wonderfully.Its really a close view and the use of tripod definately help You. You are really lucky to have such a view from Derjeeling.
Congrats for BIP.
Have a good day.
Partha
:) :)
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| Photo By: Debarshi Duttagupta
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Critique By:
Jan Hoffman (K:39467)
10/27/2006 8:37:02 PM
The picture of Hollie is a tough act to follow but here you go again with a wonderful family photo with fun, action, and energy plastered all over the place. The title is perfect and no one can argue that your husband is not having fun. great shot that captures the action and the moment so well.
--regards, Jan
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| Photo By: vanessa shakesheff
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Critique By:
Susie Peek-Swint (K:7303)
10/27/2006 8:32:50 PM
Wonderful work putting this together Sheila, it can be difficult deciding which image goes where in a collage but I think you've got it spot on ~ all great sharp images and when put together make a stunning presentation ~ many congrats on your award!
regards, susie
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| Photo By: Sheila Carson
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Critique By:
Giuliano Guarnieri (K:36622)
10/27/2006 9:30:29 PM
how can you improving?? well, first of all I need to know what the model (or you)would like to achieve from this image. Technically I like very much the texture of the skin, the high key of the overall image , it's very soft but with all the details very well "painted".
From the other side I suppose the model was not relaxed, my first expectation (looking at the global tonality) was to find a "dreamy" image but the model seems to be forced in this position... she's not dreaming , she has only closed eyes and the mouth , in my opinion, seems not natural and relaxed.
Ok.... this is the opinion of a man (me) that is not able to achieve half of your image.... :)
In Italy we are used to say : "who is able ...do, who is not able... do critics" ;)
Bye and thanks for your useful trick on the lights. Next session I'll try with the light behind.
Giuliano
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| Photo By: Mikael Leijon
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Critique By:
Michele Carlsen (K:146013)
10/27/2006 6:07:49 AM
WoW !!! It's a baby Eagle isn't it ? It's a baby bird for sure ... but eagles seem to always have the serious look... how cute and clear and what a wonderful image Robbie ! Excellent image and one I personally have Never seen before... not such a baby....so happy you were able to catch this image, and share it with us...
Michele~
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| Photo By: Robert Chin
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
10/26/2006 2:58:49 PM
Hey Paulo!
I'm intrigued that Tony's critique made some of the points it did . . . everybody has their own opinion though! While I may not necessarily agree with him I always feel good when I see people making critiques . . . it gives us something to think about!
For myself . . . I liked the colors very much . . . and those red flags made for some GREAT accents. The juxtaposition of the red roof and the green tower tops (wonderful complementary colors) is awesome and even Tony admits their placement is spot-on!
As to the composition . . . I completely disagree with Tony. It's outstanding . . . and the award seems to back me up on that . . . I seldom see poor compositions carrying awards. I think the composition is perfect. The foreground, particulary, angles in a nice semi-circular arch that pulls the eye into the composition! Your right side ratio of sky (2), land (3) and water (1) is nicely broken along the rule of thirds with no centrality and that dynamic is furthered by the left-side of the composition which is sky (3), land (2) and water (1) -- Where 3 is most dominant and 1 is least dominant. All the lines, from shoreline to skyline work together in a great harmony pulling the eye into the shot.
Outstanding work Paulo . . . 7/7 (and congrats!)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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| Photo By: Paulo Santos
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Critique By:
Kiarang Alaei (K:49415)
10/26/2006 11:10:18 AM
It's always interesting for me that you make some "Special portraits" just with simplicity.
your materials are so simply.
you use simply light, simply composition, simply pose and even simple make up.
But the result is awesome.
stunning and a perfect intimate portrait.
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| Photo By: Claude Tenot
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Critique By:
Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen (K:55244)
10/26/2006 9:55:31 AM
Dear Mary
I think it´s absolutely wonderful. The colours are so typical for a Northern sunset - at least that´s my general impression from Scandinavia, Iceland and Greenland although we also have the more yellow and reddish ones:-)
An image where the soul calms down when watching it.
Best wishes,
Annemette
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| Photo By: Mary Brown
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Critique By:
Aniko Heart (K:26503)
10/26/2006 11:44:35 AM
Incredible intensity in those eyes! Wonderful image...What a story it tells! And to each viewer, perhaps an entirely different story...
Interesting...
Warmest Wishes,
Aniko :)
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| Photo By: Mikael Leijon
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Critique By:
Mary Brown (K:71879)
10/24/2006 2:46:29 PM
This is a sweet picture. It is intersting that the two girls look somewhat alike, yet both have such different expressions for this shot. Both are charming. The setting, although with some pattern, distracts in no way and makes us concentrate totally on those two lovely faces.
Thanks for your comment on my picture.
MAry
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| Photo By: Claude Tenot
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Critique By:
Joggie van Staden (K:41700)
10/23/2006 9:12:12 PM
Hi Eb - Its a fact - if you have a camera you will ake family portraits! With 3 such delightfull kids it must have been quite fun 9with some sweat I suppose). I think you did well on the composition, using the slope to give the shot a relaxed, less formal feel creating a natural diagonal (although it might be easier to keep the baby upright on a flat surface). If I could do something to improve it would be to darken the bark and the bright leaves in the background. Not totally but only enough to prevent it from drawing your focus. The rest, including the colour,the doll and the pumpkins are great ! Regrds.
Joggie
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| Photo By: Eb Mueller
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Critique By:
Patrick Crowther (K:13393)
10/23/2006 8:32:05 AM
Wow! If I didn't know better I would think I had suddenly been transported to a Pink Floyd gig at the UFO club in 1967... that is one tripped-out vision, Anna! I love this... it couldn't be better titled. Beautiful, ethereal and mysterious...
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Critique By:
Janet Marie ;-) (K:-2076)
10/23/2006 8:33:38 AM
Cool viewpoint great lines. I like the way you have made an abstract without losing the form and structure of the instrument.
Janet Marie ;-)
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| Photo By: Emanuele Capelli
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Critique By:
Patrick Crowther (K:13393)
10/23/2006 8:46:22 AM
That is one of the most beautiful buildings I've ever seen... and beautifully captured. The textures are delicious and the constrast between the blue of the sky and the windows is gorgeous! Hmm, I must return to Italy one day with my camera... I'll put that on my 'To do' list!
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Critique By:
Toshi (K:11924)
10/23/2006 9:41:09 AM
Another stunning display of colors so beautifully captured. Love the wide angle showing off the vast beauty of nature.
Also, thank you so much for all your recent wonderful comments on many of photos, I really appreciate it!
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| Photo By: Mary Brown
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Critique By:
Olga-Eva Krajciova (K:19240)
10/23/2006 9:31:23 AM
seems like swiss young men are really getting creazy about theire "wheels" i met couple of them who were able to die for such a things! :)
great image, really, you captured pretty cool image with great composition and that light gives more power to whole image, really great one
regards
Olga
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| Photo By: Christophe Racat
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Critique By:
Alessandro Capelli (K:34805)
10/23/2006 9:14:43 AM
WOW Rob! I think this is one of your best shots! I love this place! I love grey mountains, white snow, green trees and grass..I love this lake and this wonderful sky with its beautiful white clouds!
Great work my friend! I love it!
In my favs!
Have all the best!
Ale
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| Photo By: Rob Graziano
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Critique By:
Giuseppe Guadagno (K:34002)
10/23/2006 9:59:18 AM
I like the range of tones from the shadowy base, that anchors steadly the image, to the soft sky.
The birch has no one leaf; here the fall is now beginning. Arnoldas, is it moss on the branches?Take care.
Giuseppe
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| Photo By: Arnoldas Jurgaitis
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Critique By:
Nick Karagiaouroglou (K:127263)
10/23/2006 10:06:55 AM
I like such photos, especially in sepia, since they have some kind of nostalgia for the past, when the first photographic steps were bein made, in a less complicated world.
The scene is here very well fitting for the coloring, since it acts like a wide angle, where the feeling of distance comes to play - distance in space and distance in time, to the past.
Wondering what might all that people do now, that worked or lived there, how they spend their days, what their lives look like on that place by the waves and the wind.
Well balanced and quite silent.
Keep it up,
Nick
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| Photo By: Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen
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Critique By:
Rachel Leah (K:26110)
10/22/2006 9:33:26 PM
Very nice image! Usually it bugs me when photos are off bapance like this, but it works pretty good here to provide an artistic feel to it. The colring is awesome and the clarity is great as well! I love the DOF... this is a gorgeous shot of a gorgeous piece of nature! Good job capturing it and presenting it to us! :)
~Rachel~
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
10/22/2006 1:55:15 AM
Galal... I like it and I like the peaceful mood it puts me in but if you don't mind my friend, I think there was excessive sharpening of the image which makes the lines of the buildings little bit bright.
Sorry my friend, but I think I'd like to see it with little sharpness.
Take care and sorry for the criticism.
Khaled.
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| Photo By: Galal El Missary
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
10/15/2006 9:20:21 PM
Hi Francisco,
Outstanding photo - absoultely very peaceful and Tranquil. The off centered composition, and the near perfect reflection, with only the ever so subtle ripple in the water is great - as is the tonal range. Very well captured.
Cheers,
Hugo
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| Photo By: Francisco Pinto
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Critique By:
The Pilgrim (K:65043)
10/21/2006 10:15:28 PM
Excellent composition!! It just does not get any better than this! (Wow)
The lighting is fantastic! I just love all the little lights in the background! Very very beautiful!
WOnderful work my friend!!
Congrats!!
Paul E Brumit
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| Photo By: Jinggoy Montenejo
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Critique By:
vanessa shakesheff (K:68840)
10/21/2006 10:26:25 PM
Looks so romantic and calming ..like you i love to look at the water ..my mind goes off for a wander and i am relaxed ..lovely shot..nessa
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| Photo By: Sandra Anderson
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Critique By:
Alessandro Capelli (K:34805)
10/21/2006 10:22:25 PM
Very nice work Phil! I like this collage of your 'old' shot of this little boat..beautiful colours and atmosphere!
Perfect for the last project!
Have all the best my friend!
Ciao, Ale
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| Photo By: Phillip Minnis
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Critique By:
vanessa shakesheff (K:68840)
10/21/2006 10:20:54 PM
Great capture ..love the refelctions caught ..nessa
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Critique By:
mohamed ahmed abd el rahim (K:5753)
10/21/2006 10:31:09 PM
very nice nature shot..nice texture..nice view..it seams that this place is rich and have many beautiful scene..nice mood and nice colors..i like the shape of this hill it makes me wants to think of the beauty of nature..well taken
best regards
mohamed ahmed
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| Photo By: jacques brisebois
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Critique By:
David Yates (K:4698)
12/23/2003 8:03:07 AM
Fantastic composition and toning. The square format, curve of the stream, and angle of the tree combime perfectly to create a highly succesfull image.
One of your best and going in my favorites.
Happy holidays, David.
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