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Critique By:
John Hatz (K:156973)
3/2/2008 9:17:37 AM
nice one, gives to the watchers the fealling of the couple...like a portrait EVEN without faces...hey... ring to the feet fingers? well now that is a very good element into your image.
be well Bill... have a nice Sunday!
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Critique By:
John Hatz (K:156973)
3/2/2008 9:16:43 AM
you have here an increadible bug... nover seen it before... unique! and that is NOT the end... the pose is amazing...haha... it looks like trying to 'catch' something that is to another leaf perchaps...
Also very good quality, the focal area has the right size to get all the bug's body into the focus Bill...and NOT only just a part of it, of of course something MUST be...focus on the eye... absolutely GREAT!
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Critique By:
Pablo Dylan (K:63918)
3/1/2008 9:36:59 PM
Nice idea an realization.
Pablo
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Critique By:
J.J. Guy Longtin (K:6546)
3/1/2008 5:27:36 PM
Your welcome my friend.
Guy
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Critique By:
Bill Ciavarra (K:10216)
3/1/2008 5:21:09 PM
I gave it a try...that was a lot easier then making all the layers in PS! Thanks for the suggestion.
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Critique By:
Bill Ciavarra (K:10216)
3/1/2008 5:19:58 PM
Yes, I am happy to say this young couple recently married are enjoying their lives as newlyweds.
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Critique By:
Robert Gaither (K:34128)
3/1/2008 4:31:23 PM
Yes a feet a nice what an interesting shot. Did they get married and are they doing fine? Excellent image.
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Critique By:
J.J. Guy Longtin (K:6546)
3/1/2008 3:41:21 PM
Hi Bill - there's a neat little site where you can get frames from. Go to www.picnik.com not only do they have frames but many other neat little features to play around with your photos. Have fun with it.
Guy
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Critique By:
Bill Ciavarra (K:10216)
3/1/2008 3:34:32 PM
Thank you Guy...
The matted frame really does make the image pop out more. I am so glad you took the time to give your comments and suggestions and even took the extra time to perform the revisions.
Your frame looks really nice, do you have a template or a quick system to produce this result? I use PS6, and most of my frames are basic layers.
Thanks again for the very constructive comment.
Bill
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Critique By:
J.J. Guy Longtin (K:6546)
3/1/2008 3:20:09 PM
Hi Bill - lovely engagement photo with great atmosphere. Here's how I would improve it if you had to (but looks good as is). I would first remove the black border then add a vignetting effect to make the couple stand-out a little more from the busy background. Then go with a simple matted frame. (see attached). Let me know what you think.
Guy
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Critique By:
Ina Gouws (K:692)
3/1/2008 7:11:57 AM
Excellent work Bill!
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Critique By:
sourosh bagherzade (K:1145)
3/1/2008 4:11:05 AM
beautiful composition
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Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
3/1/2008 4:04:25 AM
Now this one is truly unique, Bill! Well captured!
Dave.
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Critique By:
Guido Tweepenninckx (K:20076)
2/29/2008 8:33:58 PM
for a snapshot,this photo is very good indeed.nice pose too.
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Critique By:
Etem Etem (K:3551)
2/29/2008 2:18:13 PM
Wonderful image.Congrats!
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Critique By:
Ilir Xhemsiti (K:4285)
2/29/2008 9:26:33 AM
Beautiful,very nice momment...Bill you have very good portfolio, just keep this trend..congrats..
regards ILIR
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Critique By:
Abdur Rahman (K:634)
2/29/2008 5:09:56 AM
Super! Wonderful shot indeed!
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Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
2/29/2008 4:40:46 AM
Well done silhouetting for a very romantic image, Bill!
Dave.
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Critique By:
Zbylu (K:874)
2/28/2008 11:00:17 PM
What a wonderful iamge.Well done.
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Critique By:
Bob Pentz (K:-318)
2/28/2008 9:21:31 PM
Excellent photo....... Freezing the wings makes it especially interesting.
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Critique By:
Robert Gaither (K:34128)
2/28/2008 5:07:12 PM
I'm getting to the point I want to try some saturation images. To me I think there is a time to do it. Works fine it you last two images and well I think fog shots with subjects desaturated work well also. Excellent composition.
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Critique By:
Robert Gaither (K:34128)
2/28/2008 5:03:53 PM
I like to try this or a wedding it would be fun. Looks fine. Excellent photograph and capture.
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Critique By:
Pablo Dylan (K:63918)
2/28/2008 2:25:47 PM
Sweet ad romantic shot.
Pablo
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Critique By:
louise angus (K:294)
2/28/2008 12:06:33 PM
ive sat and looked at this photo for about an hour now and i still carnt come up with anything but nice things to say about it ! i just love the setting and the way the image just jumps out at you theres nothing in this photo to distract you from the love behind it ! well done !
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Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
2/28/2008 4:17:17 AM
Another very "engaging" photo, Bill! Nicely posed and a great expression on the lady's face.
Dave.
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Critique By:
Eb Mueller (K:24960)
2/28/2008 2:37:50 AM
Quite beautiful with the spot light effect on your macro subject, Bill!
Eb
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Critique By:
Howie Mudge (K:27933)
2/28/2008 12:42:28 AM
lovely tender moment and Im sure the couple will be thrilled with this.
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
2/28/2008 12:03:26 AM
Agradable y romántico.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
2/27/2008 12:25:07 AM
Very nicely composed and a great setting, Bill! I like the relaxed pose and expressions on the couple, too. These will be treasured memories for them.
Dave.
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Critique By:
Diego Bullita (K:17017)
2/26/2008 8:37:07 PM
fantasic colors for this "people",
regards dear Bill,
diego
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