Hey Renee, i used zoom lens for this shot, i would say a bad choose, a wide angle lens would have been a lot better, besides that, ther is a lot wrong with this shot, mostly overexpossed. Thank you for commenting.
I like your work, but I think I have to agree with Neil. I think if the two people weren't cut off it would be better and maybe centering in on a couple of the people walking? I don't know...maybe not.
A good scene with the bridge tree and building, and I like the idea of showing people here, but I think there's too many people. For example, the person on the far left, who's only partially there (too close a crop there). The group of three in the center appears to be the focal point but they are looking every which way, and partially obstructed from the front and behind.
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