Taken from the sunset capitol of Brazil. After a day of Photographing the kids, listening to Pagode music and a few beers, it was time to relax in front of the several marvelous sunsets in Tubicanga.
How does this work? I might add that the figures that were cropped standout in the original but here they're mushy and blended into the black foreground. Thanks for the tip.
I like the central figure, I think he adds to the shot. But the figures at the far right are too indistinct, I think, blending too much with the dark, to be meaningful. It appears that the left-central part of the shot, putting the standing figure at the left of the crop, might work better. You'll lose some of the colors, but the composition will be a bit stronger.