ciao circe! e' una foto che appenderei in casa... cio' significa che mi piace molto... naturalezza nonostante la posa, intimita', bel taglio e buon gusto... un bello scatto che vorrei vedere solo un poco piu' contrastato, ma molto personale... mi piace! brawa! ciao davide.
Great! Very good portrait. 1- The moment appears to be so intimae, between y and your model, so the image has a great emotion. 2- The natural lighting you are using is very good. 3- The expression you have captured is beautiful and so natural. As I can see is not an expontaneus photo, but is well captured indeed. 4- The only think I think you have to improve here is the contrast. If your photos are printed by yourself, you could use a red filter to try a greater contrast. Or just use 100asa film, it has more contrast. 5- Is a pity the jpg quality is not so good. but I like the photo so much.
But this is only my pont of view, of course ;)
Congratulations!
PS: Welcome to Usefilm. We are looking forwrd to see more phtos... (and sorry aou my english)