The way she's holding her "valuables" is amazing, fun, real, natural and make this a treasure shot. Her expression is also great. And her attitude, unique - instead of clearing water from the eyes, she's holding her "valuables". That's a decisive moment, for sure!
I suppose you did the enlarging. Maybe you could dodge a little less, allowing her to look more natural, but probably you've already tested this and it didn't work. Never mind.
Great capture. May I suggest you change Others to Fun on the Categories? Congratulations!
Great! One rarely sees photos of groups of people on usefilm. This has great energy, obviously, and a natural composition centred on the vaguely smiling girl in the foreground. Very different, very good. Rgds, Svend
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