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Mike George
{K:3429} 11/5/2004
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I kinda like the idea for this shot. A lovely lady alone with her thoughts. The sun striking her hair and face. I think I agree with Howie, I would like to see a crop behind her and a bit more space in front of her. I wonder what the shot would look like if she were higher on the hill (so that her face would be against the sky). I am trying to decide if I like the soft focus. I think that I do. I really do like the idea behind this shot though.
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Wayne Harridge
{K:18292} 11/5/2004
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...in 2 years the camera will be rubbish, a very transitory pleasure.
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Wayne Harridge
{K:18292} 11/5/2004
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forget about the camera, just enjoy her...
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Mark Cornellison
{K:41} 11/4/2004
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Thanks for the critique. It's nice to have an honest one. I tried cropping it with space in front of her as well, but it just wasn't as interesting. If her eyes were open it might make more sense. She seems to be pondering the past?
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Howie Mudge
{K:27933} 11/4/2004
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And why not enjoy it too :) I like the idea but wish the lady was positioned the other side with more space in front of her.
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