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Al Ungar
{K:4626} 9/21/2005
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Liam, this last version looks significantly improved. You're correct you can't replace her hand or foot, but sitll a great improvement
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Liam McCormick
{K:38} 9/21/2005
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Just one more thing have got a re-touched version attached here but couldn't fix the hand and foot obviously, the slope was the most obvious correction but the image benefits greatly from it. Thanks. Will have to reshoot me thinks.
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Liam McCormick
{K:38} 9/21/2005
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Hi There,
Thankyou for your comment I had spotted those mistakes too, was my first shoot in the fashion context, I normally do pack shots. All feedback is useful otherwise you can't get better so thanks again.
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Al Ungar
{K:4626} 9/21/2005
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Well, Liam the lighting is fine, and your model pose and expression is good, but IMHO, the image suffers from the following: (1) image is not straight, slopes to the right; (2) you cut off her right hand; (3) you cut off her right foot; (4) her purse is showing under her legs; (5) the statue in the background competes with her as does the desk lamp; and finally (6) the image is just too tight. Reshoot and you should have a wonderful image.
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Chris Nichols
{K:7068} 9/21/2005
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Lovely portrait! Great color and skin tones!
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