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Janine Parkins
{K:1384} 11/26/2003
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Funny how each of us have our own likes and dislikes and how much they all differ....
I too am distracted by the stiff hand and also by the stray hair or something directly behind her hat but I have to say those are the only things about this portrait I don't like. I think you did a wonderful job with lighting. I feel the way the light hits just parts of her sets a great mood.
Your work is beautiful
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Joyce O\'Neal
{K:236} 2/21/2003
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love the fact that her hand is stiff, gives it edge.
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Matt Oulman
{K:1052} 2/20/2003
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Excellent work. The stiffness of her hand, as Cemal points out, is a bit distracting.
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Cemal Ekin
{K:2309} 2/20/2003
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Overall a nice photograph. I think the hat is an interesting element in the photograph and sheding some light on its rim would contribute to the image. Her left hand is unresolved. It looks like she is in mid action with her hand. The shadow of her nose is too strong on her upper lip, perhaps a reflector might help. If she rotated her had a tiny bit more to her left then the tip of her nose would not break the nice curve made by her face agains the deep shadow. Her shirt is buckling too much and attracting attention there unnecessarily. Probably because of the angle, the collar of her shirt appears pulled to the left (her) giving her an unduly unkempt appearance. Perhaps a tight fitting top will take care of that.
Keep clicking.
Cemal
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Elizabeth van Hulst
{K:283} 2/20/2003
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David... your girl is beautiful!
I think i would like to have seen just a hair of light on the background, but the image REALLY pops! You rock my dear!
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