I like the mood and the feel of this photo. Very strong and full of emotion. The gesture with the hand near the fire really adds to this photo.
I do think it's a bit dark, resulting in a rather strong separation between the girls' head and the fire. that creates some unbalance, I think. Also, the greenish glow on her hair is a bit distracting, and seemingly out of place. To an extend, that applies to the background too, but I think if the background would have been be extended to the right side of the photo, too, creating a silhouet outline of the girls body, it would've become an asset to this photo.
not an easy shot to take, and I think you did pretty good. Nice shot, and a good feel.
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