This was taken at a Memorial Day service last year. These elderly gentlemen were placing a cover over this chair to represent the missing soldier -- the one who should have been there to remember what the soldiers had done, but couldn't. I thought it was interesting how the one man was obviously ill and carrying an oxygen tank -- yet he was still there to honor his fallen comrades.
I like this very much. The tones are beautiful, and I think if you'd been any higher, we wouldn't have been able to see their faces. I *might* have cropped just a little from the bottom - not much - to make the concrete less important, but just a tiny, tiny bit. :)
You've got very good tones here, and the photo has some interesting details as well as a nice composition the way the two men together form a pentagon. It might have been a little better had you been able to come in at a slightly higher angle, so less of the cement platform and to the left a bit for less overlap of their heads. It's also difficult to tell what they are doing here, without your explanation, so for the quick viewer, the photo has to stand on its own, which, for the most part, it does.
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